Great we're seeing developments unfolding now! Oh but please, please, PLEASE!! Do not equate Miroku and Kagome on the same sentence, that would be so wrong. Ew no. Normally I don't care who ends up with Miroku in most fanfiction cause it's usually Sango, or any other OC who everyone could care less (?) BUT Kagome is not for anyone. I love Sess/Kag because, ultimately the two of them are similar in their sense of honor and discipline, one thing I appreciate you're demonstrating here <3 for it not he wouldn't be my fav boy xD rlly, I wouldn't bother with the whole Inuyasha show if not for him and Kagome~
Thank you for sharing your talent with us!! Best of wishes!
Koree (Chapter 13) - Thu 12 Mar 2020
I dont feel bad for Sango in the slightest, she deserves every bit of that rejection for how she treated Kagome . As for Sesshomaru I don't think it was a bad night after all lmao
hw (Chapter 12) - Wed 04 Mar 2020
Aw! I loved this chapter! The interaction between Sesshoumaru and Kagome was great. And omg, him trying to use the massager for his shoulder?!? LOL I was dying! Too funny!
I wonder is InuYasha will ever confess to Sango...and if Sango is harboring similar feelings??
Koree (Chapter 12) - Wed 04 Mar 2020
Lmfaoooo vibrator to the shoulder
Lauren (Chapter 12) - Tue 03 Mar 2020
Sesshomaru may be able to read Japanese, but clearly missed //vibrator// LMFAO
Nicole (Chapter 12) - Tue 03 Mar 2020
I love this story. I enjoyed them getting closer, and I suspect Sango was with Inuyasha. Mayhaps Kagome will stumble upon them and be free to peruse other males...?
Arc-an Angel (Chapter 12) - Mon 02 Mar 2020
Lmaoooooooo
I NEED him to discover at some point what that 'massager' is really for. Please author god make it so lol
But overall I really enjoyed this chapter. It was painful to read at some parts but only because I felt what she was feeling. Just hate the whole Inuyasha run around. However, I suspect that our little Kagome is going to get tired of the shit real soon though. She's a whole modern woman after all, and desirable whether he wants to acknowledge it or not.
Lauren (Chapter 11) - Thu 27 Feb 2020
Well that went both a lot better than I anticipated, and exactly as I thought it would. LMFAO It was a good effort on both their parts, but being civil is fairly new to them. Maybe next time, they'll get it right. At least we've cleared up why Inuyasha has been stalling for so long. His eyes are going somewhere else. Though, we all know how he'll react to Sesshomaru's eyes lingering too long on Kagome.
Koree (Chapter 11) - Wed 26 Feb 2020
To say I got the biggest chuckle out of this chap would be a understatememt lmaooo amazing chap . I figured Inu was lusting after Sango welp who cares Sessh better ask Kags for some sugar or at least a helping hand....
This was really fascinating! They're all dual beings that inspire anger and respect in me. For instance, Miroku is so perverted in this it makes me literally cringe but then his insight and care for Inuyasha etc...makes me pause. Also, how fascinating to find out how Inuyasha feels!! Certainly does open a possibility for developments in the future. Thanks for these two chapters! Really enjoyed them and also the changes/thoughts that Sesshomaru is experiencin.
I usually love it when Kagome and Sango are close but, this time for some reason I want Sesshomaru to reject her over and over for Kagome. I normally like Sango but she's a slut in this. (Can't say whore, they get paid.) Put Sango in her place with the pervert. This story is great so far and I can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for your hard work!!!
Toni (Chapter 10) - Mon 24 Feb 2020
love this chapter
sesshomaru with the binoculars is a riot guess he's like any other man
can't wait to see if kagome finds out
keep up the great work and update soon
Koree (Chapter 9) - Sat 15 Feb 2020
Sango is a large bit dramatic here * inserts rolling eyes * it's not that serious ESPECIALLY considering she never spoke to Sesshomaru prior to asking him for a " favor " to go so hard at Kagome was uncalled for
Mecca (Chapter 9) - Mon 10 Feb 2020
Oh my god. I loved how you compared Sango's attentions to a cat rubbing up on Sesshomaru's leg. I mean, in a way. That was hilarious! Ah but this is a slow burn...! I'm dying! It sucks though because Sango would've LOVED to have had someone as gorgeous as Sesshoumaru to get back at Miroku's sluttiness. It would've been perfect... for her. I was just about having my own conniption fit to think that Sess was even CONSIDERING Sango's proposal for a wee tryst, my blood pressure went up about 10 points. So glad Inuyasha is taking a long nap as all this craziness is going on. Loved that Sesshoumaru didn't even think twice about protecting Kagome, and even caring enough to kill for her, where earlier in their "relationship" he probably wouldn't have batted an eye much less defended her. Hate the idea of Sesshomaru's face getting turned into play-doh though lol Poor guy! And I hope Rin is still alive at this point. Sango needs to get over herself, I know she's probably dying of horniness but she can't have our western lord! Pretty much dying to see when you'll eventually bring this ship into harbor, Susie! I'm counting on youuu~!
I love the budding frienemies! That take down was gorgeous. Even if he took a beating, dude's got honor.
kagome-sono-jamakusai-miko (Chapter 9) - Sun 09 Feb 2020
Thanks for the update! Forgot to say that when I reviewed on the other side
Hm, I'm not really understanding Sango's reactions. Seems a blown out of proportion and more promiscuous then I ever imagined her. Guess we'll see what takes place next.
witty (Chapter 9) - Sat 08 Feb 2020
Ok, Sango is officially annoying me. Go screw Koga if you're that desperate and stop taking it out on Kagome.
On a lighter note, Sesshomaru and Kagome seem to be getting along better now which is a plus.
Lauren (Chapter 8) - Sat 08 Feb 2020
You wrote that fight scene well enough. I'm interested in that scene with Jaken. That was so thoughtfully written and in-character. Perfect and astonishing all at one.
That was a pretty good plan, Sesshomaru came up with on the fly. Hoping Jaken finds Rin ♥?
Niomi (Chapter 8) - Thu 06 Feb 2020
Didn't notice it's your weakness until you pointed it out. I felt like it flowed well with the story and your quality of writing. I was able to imagine the scene as I read, so I think you did a fine job! Will definitely let you know if otherwise in the future. So, this story is so underrated! You deserve so much love! Your style and quality of writing, the minuscule details and feelings you include, amazing! Just like the others, the slow burn between them is killing me but I loveee how you keep Sess true to character! Not only that; but this is exactly how I picture him to react if he was human. Can't wait for more! I know it'll be worth it. Also, you made me anxious with the whole Sango gushing thing. I definitely don't need that stress!
Page 15 of 17
| | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | | |