I had to review before going to sleep. I am very excited that Sesshomaru was introduced and I found it amusing how his Love Meter went down then up. I was not expecting Naraku to be a love interest. Wait what is Naraku? Is he a student or a teacher? Technically isn't he "older" than Sesshomaru? Is he going to be creepy or nice? Also is Sesshomaru going to be a Kendo teacher or will he also teach other courses? I love how Ayame is cracking down on Koga. I also like how you are describing the surrounding settings so far. Thanks for responding to my previous questions and of course I'll wait for them to be answered as your story continues along. Also great job in keeping the characters in character. Fantastic chapter and hope to see an update soon. O.K. I'm off.
I was just waiting for Naraku to show up...but for him to show up reading Stephen King! Classic! And Sesshoumaru as a teacher (*_*). I laughed so hard, but poor 'Gome, what a handful...then again, she does have bunches of good-looking men soon-to-be vying for her attention, she can't complain in that aspect XD I am very curious, though, as to whom put her in there; and whether it's just an illusion, or the men are actually physically trapped there as well. I eagerly wait the next chapter! :)
Absolutely loving the premise of this story, especially sticking Naraku in there. LOL! I can't wait to see how it goes!
I am super happy that you made me design a story banner for this story! I must say, this is such an intriguing and unique plot. I am really curious as to how you will continue and how Kagome's relationship with Sesshomaru grows. I will make sure to keep an eye out on the update for this story.
I see great potential for this story! Thank you for writing and sharing this work of art with us.
-SSA
Jade (Chapter 3) - Sat 25 Apr 2015
Yay! Great chapter. I just wish there was more, but don't we all? :) I have to admit though, a little part of me is screaming: where's Sesshy?! Can't wait to see more!
Saiya (Chapter 3) - Sat 25 Apr 2015
Hahahahahahahahaha so Silly she be.
Dude....
I loved this.
Is it sort of wrong that I'm rooting for a full harem of Sesshomaru, Bankotsu, and Hiten?
Literary Fan (Chapter 3) - Fri 24 Apr 2015
I just realized, how are Kagome and Sesshomaru supposed to fall for each other? I mean, you have to choose a character you like, or will Kagome just choose Sesshomaru because the other guys are just friends or too creepy(Bankotsu&Hiten)? Also what could possibly raise Sesshomaru's Love Meter? Would it be Kagome beign strong instead of the usual passive otome girl? (Although, I wouldn't mind seeing Sesshomaru rescue her once in a while.) Thank you for updating and great story so far.
Literary Fan (Chapter 2) - Fri 24 Apr 2015
This soundes interesting. So everybody else does not realize they're in an Otome game? I imagine if they were, Sesshomaru would be pissed. Are we going to receive an explanation of how Kagome got there in the first place? Also, that was mean of Shippou taking Kagome's book without asking. Although it does work better to portray him more as a brother than a son to Kagome. Lastly, very awkward for Kagome trying to explain to Rin what an Otome game is. Can't wait for the next update to know what happens. Great work so far.
Caitlyn (Chapter 2) - Thu 23 Apr 2015
This is a really unique story. Quite refreshing to say the least and I can't wait for more.
wow :O so cool nice idea ~<3 plz make more sensei! ^_^
Panther (Chapter 2) - Thu 23 Apr 2015
Well I have to say that I adore this premise! Super original and definitely promising to be very funny! You also write very well. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading the next chapter :)
Saiya (Chapter 2) - Thu 23 Apr 2015
Hhmmmm I wonder if Sesshomaru made that Blue Marble. Poor Kagome she must be so Confused. So Awsome.
Saiya (Chapter 1) - Thu 23 Apr 2015
That was a Great first Chapter.
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