Ooh...
Poor Kagome...
I'm really enjoying this story; you write Kagome convincingly and make her situation relatable even though its completely fantastical. Ugh, Naraku being head teacher sounds like anyone's worst nightmare! *Cringe* This chapter was nice though, it gave is even more of an insight into Kagome's mind and feelings, as well as making this virtual world even creepier. I'm eagerly awaiting the explanation for the mystical marble and its world-creating abilities!
Also eagerly waiting for K to pick Sesshoumaru as the Male Lead :) Looking forward to the next chapter
I really enjoy this story! I actually played an otome game a little while ago, little buggers really drag you in! I'm interested to see where you take this !
Aziza (Chapter 6) - Wed 29 Apr 2015
I really enjoy this fanfic and absolutely love when it updates! I wish this was a real otome game...though admittedly I would persue both Sesshoumaru and Naraku, those bad men ~ I really want to see with leading man Kagome will choose! Or try to persue,.
Snap...
This is way too intense.
Saiya (Chapter 6) - Wed 29 Apr 2015
Were only on chapter 6. But its Awsome Naraku as the Headmaster so Funnyhahahahaha Poor Kagome doesn't have to really do anything to make narakus go up. Though i Fear for this Sesshomaru and Kagome romance if she can't really get his bar to go up.
I'm so happy when i see the update, pleasee more sesskag moment
Eva (Chapter 5) - Tue 28 Apr 2015
This is a fascinating Idea. You have me hooked. I especially like the dead included In potential love interests. I'm sure Naraku's favorite book must be It.He's never finished It though.
Mona (Chapter 5) - Tue 28 Apr 2015
Great and can't wait for the update.
Saiya (Chapter 5) - Mon 27 Apr 2015
Hahahahaha she had an ABC Option moment so Funny.
Can't wait for the update. I'm an otome otaku myself and I am enjoying this on that professional gamer level. Hell...even now i'm playing a Rune Factory game while reading this thing. lol
Lovely!
Such an awesome story. Love it!!!!!!!!
Oh poor Kagome, now she must choose a dialog for herself:P
Really good!!! And Kogas love meter got up! YAY!!!
And who are the boys fighting there? And can get Kagome the love meters from them also to rise?
So much fun (not for her)!!!
Enjoy writing your story^^
Silence-Midnight
It's funny, lol there's also a dialogue for kagome! :O And i want to meet sesshy in the next chapter, but hmm . . or perhaps not cause i'm not the author, you do XD
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