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M (Chapter 8) - Fri 01 May 2015

nice... I can't wait to read more


Ele-sama (Chapter 8) - Fri 01 May 2015

Ha!! Love it. Update speed is outta this world XD.


hana sora (Chapter 7) - Fri 01 May 2015

Update soon!!! Oh my where's my sesshy?? :(


Saiya (Chapter 7) - Thu 30 Apr 2015

Poor Kagome she got the Naraku SuperVillan Glare.


Misunderstood Maiden (Chapter 7) - Thu 30 Apr 2015

It was a necessary chapter filled with the belivable struggle of being plunged into a world not your own. It was also very gratifying to see the deep thought of one's own self-realization through the faults of a tainted alternate world. As usual, i'm pleased with this update. XD Her frustrations are warrented and the chapter was appreciated on this end. 


Himura Asami (Chapter 7) - Thu 30 Apr 2015

Ooh...

Poor Kagome...


UnknownRandomness (Chapter 7) - Thu 30 Apr 2015

I'm really enjoying this story; you write Kagome convincingly and make her situation relatable even though its completely fantastical. Ugh, Naraku being head teacher sounds like anyone's worst nightmare! *Cringe* This chapter was nice though, it gave is even more of an insight into Kagome's mind and feelings, as well as making this virtual world even creepier. I'm eagerly awaiting the explanation for the mystical marble and its world-creating abilities! 

Also eagerly waiting for K to pick Sesshoumaru as the Male Lead :) Looking forward to the next chapter


The-infamous-one (Chapter 6) - Wed 29 Apr 2015

I really enjoy this story!  I actually played an otome game a little while ago, little buggers really drag you in! I'm interested to see where you take this !


Aziza (Chapter 6) - Wed 29 Apr 2015

I really enjoy this fanfic and absolutely love when it updates! I wish this was a real otome game...though admittedly I would persue both Sesshoumaru and Naraku, those bad men ~ I really want to see with leading man Kagome will choose! Or try to persue,.


Himura Asami (Chapter 6) - Wed 29 Apr 2015

Snap...

This is way too intense.


Saiya (Chapter 6) - Wed 29 Apr 2015

Were only on chapter 6. But its Awsome Naraku as the Headmaster so Funnyhahahahaha Poor Kagome doesn't have to really do anything to make narakus go up. Though i Fear for this Sesshomaru and Kagome romance if she can't really get his bar to go up.


hana sora (Chapter 6) - Wed 29 Apr 2015

I'm so happy when i see the update, pleasee more sesskag moment


Eva (Chapter 5) - Tue 28 Apr 2015

This is a fascinating Idea. You have me hooked. I especially like the dead included In potential love interests. I'm sure Naraku's favorite book must be It.He's never finished It though.


Mona (Chapter 5) - Tue 28 Apr 2015

Great and can't wait for the update.


Saiya (Chapter 5) - Mon 27 Apr 2015

Hahahahaha she had an ABC  Option moment so Funny.


Misunderstood Maiden (Chapter 5) - Mon 27 Apr 2015
Can't wait for the update. I'm an otome otaku myself and I am enjoying this on that professional gamer level. Hell...even now i'm playing a Rune Factory game while reading this thing. lol

Himura Asami (Chapter 5) - Mon 27 Apr 2015

Lovely!


StormieLikeWeather (Chapter 5) - Mon 27 Apr 2015

Such an awesome story. Love it!!!!!!!!


Silence-Midnight (Chapter 5) - Mon 27 Apr 2015

Oh poor Kagome, now she must choose a dialog for herself:P

Really good!!!
And Kogas love meter got up! YAY!!!

And who are the boys fighting there? And can get Kagome the love meters from them also to rise?

So much fun (not for her)!!!

 

Enjoy writing your story^^

Silence-Midnight


hana sora (Chapter 5) - Mon 27 Apr 2015

It's funny, lol there's also a dialogue for kagome! :O And i want to meet sesshy in the next chapter, but hmm . . or perhaps not cause i'm not the author, you do XD

 


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