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This is both super sad and ominous.
Poor Kagome.
Naraku, you bastard! Her fake mother too. Damn, poor Kagome. Must be creepy dealing with a fake mother who is also way less understanding than her real mother. I was very happy to see this story updated and I can't wait for the next chaper. Yay for Sesshomaru's appearance in the next chapter. Amazing story and keep up the great work.
Wth?!?! NARAKU DARES TO ACXUSE HER OF HIDING BEHIND SOMEONE?! That's his ENTIRE LIFE. garsh i wanna tear him a new one. Destroy the room Kagome!! Let no walls hold you Reiki Arrow blast! Something! Give no slmb ball the satisfaction of tears!!!! Show him you dont need to hid!!!! *Deep breath* good update.
So interesting, looking forward to learning more about how the world works and just who her mom really is. Awesome chap as always.
Rachael (Chapter 13) - Fri 15 May 2015
Absolutely LOVED this fic!! Seriously can't wait till the next chapter ^.^
Ele-sama (Chapter 13) - Fri 15 May 2015
Ahhhhhhh! Okay im calm,,,partially. Ugh the waiting is killing me...
Waaaaa~ update soon, i'm super excited
Noo..why did you always stop them when the 'hot' moment begin?
What naraku wants from kaggie now?
This is brilliant! Bravo, you, for the idea of pairing KagSess with otome game. As someone who plays otoge quite a lot myself, this fic is super entertaining. The cliches and character types are hilariously spot on. I love how you tie in all of those with canon Inuyasha storyline. That dissonance, where it feels like an AU yet it can be considered a CU, is just beautiful. Hehe. Keep up the great job! Will be rooting for this story ;)
Saiya (Chapter 13) - Fri 15 May 2015
Hmmm Maybe Naraku's Useing the Demonic Energy to come back.
No Uta (Chapter 13) - Thu 14 May 2015
Wow oh wow oh woooooow at that scene after Kagome shot Sesshomaru in the back with one of her love arrows! That was Intense and hot as all hell. This definitely caught me off guard. You are full of surprises. I enjoyed how Sesshomaru has used Inuyasha to test the chocolate bahahaha. That was a good thing he did it though. Good for Kagome's sake. Bad for poor Inuyasha. At least he will recover. No chocolate for the ole Inu Lord then. Kagome finally won the mini game. I'm curious to see how Sesshomaru reacts to the Valentine's Day gift she has chosen to give him. And what a way to end this chapter, Naraku makes an appearance. Uh oh what is he up too now? I like Naraku he's such a bastard heh heh. Fantastic update!
Kae (Chapter 13) - Thu 14 May 2015
I realized I haven't reviewed this yet and I thought I should let you know how much I enjoy this fanciful premise and how much I look forward to each new installment. :) Thanks!
Aziza (Chapter 13) - Thu 14 May 2015
I loved the dialogue between Sesshomaru and Kagome about love and all the subtle hints! And those prizes I can't wait to see how Sess reacts to them. Steal energy....ooooo I wonder why that is. Naraku's back! Hooooray lets see what that lovely trash kumo wants with Kagome this time...
I love this story still and can't wait for the next installment
Eva (Chapter 13) - Thu 14 May 2015
I think that this chapter is the most intense and we'll written so far. I feel as though we just surgically opened Kagome and Sesshoumaru's hearts and minds and vivisected them. After their intense confrontation and the gift that confirms most if our suspicions, Naraku's sudden return is stunning. Well done.
This review is posted on both Fanfic and Dokuga.
Oh no a cliffy!! Looking forward to reading the next chapter, as always love your writing!
I'm hooked. This is a neat take on the SesshKag coupling and it's pretty original compared to some I've read. Well done.
This is cute, oh my. Keep it coming soon!! ;)
Saiya (Chapter 12) - Sun 10 May 2015
Sesshomaru's Helping her that is Too CUTE!!! They make such a Great Pair.
Blommie8 (Chapter 12) - Sun 10 May 2015
Don't worry..it's really nice story. I hope the spark of love to sesskag more. Next please..
Ele-sama (Chapter 12) - Sun 10 May 2015
RAWR!! Yet another awesome update!! Am I the only one that can't wait for Sesshomaru to loose his cool around Kagome?! Eh...ehhhhhh? I mean seriously, one of her ridiculouse outfits will be the end of him rofl XD Can't wait!
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