OK Monti, you've given me a hard task but here it goes!
Ezri-Candy -she's one of the site admins over on AFF...
from It Was A Dark and Stormy Night...
Holy Hell that was HOT! Oh please, please keep adding more Inupapa/Kagome stories! There are so few good ones.
From Supreme Conquest...
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Excellent, Excellent start! I am really exicted to see this story and I can't wait to see where you take this. I happened to stumble upon it while I was checking disclaimers earlier tonight and I HAD to bookmark it to check it out when I was done.
I love the way that you brought Togaou back. Its a way that I haven't yet seen, so I definitely applaude you on that. I love the character that you're building for him as well. I can't wait to see how he treats Kagome and when it comes to the eventual mating...-fans self- I know it will be passionate and all around great.
Sesshomaru...hmmm, I wonder how he's going to gain her trust. I think you've done a great job of keeping both him and Inuyasha in character and I like that you're making Kagome and Inuyasha to be good friends so theres no romantic conflict. I feared that Togaou's desire to have her for a mate would cause a rift between the father and son before they even got a chance to work on their relationship.
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Wow...Kagome's mom is scary...
I cringed as soon as the conversation started. Poor Togaou and Sesshoumaru, lol. That was the intense parental limit break right there...
Great chap as usual! I liked the terms and conditions that she put down her daughter and her care. They all made sense and she made some good points, especially with the injuries/illness part.
I'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Will we get to see Kagome explain some of the modern conveniences to the Daiyokai? I wonder if Togaou and Sesshoumaru will ever be on her mother/grandfather's good side? I hope so on both fronts, but I know I'll enjoy whatever you put out. This is simply a great fic!
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Lol! I loved the end to this chapter! Kagome and Sesshoumaru had a moment...of sorts! I can picture this entire chapter playing out so well in my head, but that last scene, was great! I can see Togaou in the shower with the bar of soap...now normally, thats is something that is highly nosebleed worthy, but add in the singing and I can't keep a straight face!
I also enjoyed the dialogue between father and son. Totally believeable and Sesshoumaru did bring up some valid issues.
Another wonderful chapter all around!
4.
Ah to be escorted by those two to school...-sighs happily-
This chapter had me giggling! I can just see them being so amazed while watching the movies and the part with the alarm clock, I knew as soon as she set it, it was gonna be a problem. I could see Sesshoumaru melting it with his poison, and Togaou using his blade on it, lol!
I have a feeling that Kags is going to be overwhelmed by questions from Eri, Yuka and Ayumi...Hojo, well if I was him and saw those two glares directed at me, I would have pissed myself, lol!
Great chapter! can't wait for more
Next one our r0o!
From Kryptonite...
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wow, yeah see thats realistic. in a very sad way. : poor Kagome.
2.
lmao a flaming pink Kagome is always a fun kagome
3.
oi dany! she needs to pin that boy to another tree!
Supreme Conquest...
Once the challenge of the pajamas had been conquered, Togaou looked at the beds.
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However, when she heard both Sesshomaru and Togaou trying to figure out what the noise was then the younger inu saying to kill it before it woke her up; she scrabbled up, grabbed it then shut it off. “No killing it!” She stated in a bit of a panicked voice, looking back and forth between the two a bit wide-eyed.
made the r0o laugh her butt off! I know i've been MIA for a tad bit and i'm so sorry for that, stupid internet is giving me issues, and i'm getting ready for this move, kami i hafta say i dont want to move again for a while. ;anyway this all made me laugh so hard!
r0o loves you dani -nods- this was great!
Next... Possessed
Pound Puppy
Very cute and very sweet Dani! I like the beast's obsession with her underwear... just like a real dog! Nice shower scene too. Nothing like looking down and finding your pet has decided to join you! LOL!
Supreme Conquest...
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LMAO!!! An angry, outmaneuvered, drunk Sesshy... a haven't-had-any-in-200-yrs., plotting, horny dog, and an innocent young miko sleeping through it all... Where will it all end up? In bed of course! I am having a great time reading this, Dani. Looking forward to the next morning when she wakes up snuggled to his chest! LOL!
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Sesshy has to play second-fiddle to Daddy! I like how Tagaou is pulling all the strings behind the scenes, leaving Sess as the glorified figurehead... and just how far will Sess play along? An intriguing and interesting fic Dani! I am anxious to see where it goes...
Next... LC Rose
Supreme Conquest...
OH, IT'S HERE!! IT'S HERE!! IT'S HERE!!! You have no idea how long I have waited for this fic to be posted, Dany!! And what a delivery it was, too. AND you found a way for Fluffy to keep his arm. YEAH, YOOOOUU!!!!
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OH, DANY! DANY! DANY!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!! I'm so stoked right now I cannot even begin to form the proper words of praise that I should. These last three chapters were positively, sinfully wonderful!! And god how I envy Kagome right now.... God, I'll come back when I can praise properly!!!
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The only good thing about having a dead comp and no easy access to internet is the fact that I get to read several chapters at once instead of having to wait. And I am loving the story, dany!!!!
Eyes Shut...
Oh, dany. Oh, dany, dany, dany.
I liked this one a lot. And I can see it so clearly in my mind. Once more, your GMs are amazing. I know rOo will be proud.
Next... Nobody
From Eyes Shut
0.o OMFG and that is why you are danyealle-sama. GREAT JOB!
Next... KnifeThrower....
From Supreme Conquest...
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You are one of the very best fan-fic authors, and you are so prolific! I love the way you update so fast, and how many nice, long stories you have written. Thanks for many, many hours of wonderful entertainment.
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You are a great author. I usually hold off on reading your stories so that I can read a nice big bundle of chapters all together, but I couldn't wait on this one. I love the idea of Kagome surrounded by three such luscious males. Sigh.
Kryptonite....
This was the best chapter yet! So much happened all at once, it made my head spin, but, as always, it was handled so logically and gracefully that it all fell right into place. And Kagome's going to have a baby! How exciting!!!!
Next.... Smittee...
From Supreme Conquest..
*holds out a writing tablet and pencil to Dany* Plez, miss. I want sum moar....*looks like a poor, begging, story addict, who is cold from lack of fanfic chapters to read.
Firefly Kitsune...
Supreme Conquest...
My favorite part of this chapter was when Kagome's mom was washing her back while talking to her. There was this sense of closenes that really made me warm and fuzzy inside.
I also loved her "discussion" with the two demons. I can almost see them as little puppies with their tails between their legs! It's good to see that there has been a reality check for those dogs - everything has been way too easy for them so far. Gotta give them something to work for. Oh, the possibilities! You have so many different things you can do with this story! And if Kagome needs a textbook to be her weapon, she can use my physical chemistry textbook. My friends and I coined it as the "Big Red Book of Death." It has to weigh at least 10-12 pounds. I would only have to bring it out into the hall and my dorm mates would know they better be quiet or else! Can't wait to see what else you have in store for us!
I will say this, i had a helluva time with this one because of the amount of stories i have and the reviews i got. I love all my reviewers but these were the ones that stood out without me trolling through all i have on ff.net
LOVE YOU my reviewers!
