I'm about to ready to start headdesking over a contest oneshot - so I've decided to appeal to the good community of Dokugians for anyone willing to read over my (frankly rubbish) attempt. xD My usual beta hasn't got internet access at the moment, and having someone with knowledge of the Sesshoumaru/Kagome relationship dynamic is definitely a plus, as she isn't really involved in Inuyasha at all so can't advise me on that.

As background, it is a sequel or sorts to this. I'm looking for someone who can tell me if the flow of the story is good; if sentences seem awkward or stilted and most of all, to tell me straight whether the whole thing should be scrapped or not for being utterly pointless. Knowledge of spelling and grammar would also be very much appreciated.

The piece itself is all but finished aside from editing and changes and is due to be posted tomorrow - so if anyone is willing to help a writer in need, that would be absolutely brilliant.

Thank you! ^^

Okay, I've read three paragraphs of the prequel and that's enough for me to humbly volunteer my services. I do love a good literary vivisection, but I highly doubt your fic will need it!

You, my dear, are a lifesaver, and deserve hugs of the biggest variety possible! Thank you!

Would it be easier to do this through email or PM? Unfortunately none of my messengers are working at the moment. >.< Which is annoying enough, believe me. xD

I hit you up with a PM, mah dear, just in case you haven't checked them yet.