Hi, this is Theores,

I've been writing the story "A Door Already Open" and its come to my attention that my punctuation and run on sentences was so bad (even after at least 15 edits) that some couldn't even get past the first chapter!
I have no idea how to change this embarrassing problem, so I'm looking for a beta who can just edit the chapters I already have, and maybe show me where exactly I'm making errors with speech and description. It should only take a day if that, I would appreciate any and all willing to help me and am actually elated if I could have more than one point of view.

I'd be glad to help you out