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I hope this is int he right pace?
Anyway, I am writing a Harry Potter story, the couple is Draco and Ginny. Its a murder mystery type of thing, gory and bloody.
Would anyone be willing to read the first chapter? It is a re write from something I already have posted, but I am changing it as the story goes on.
It is set after the Battle of Hogwarts, but it does ignore the epilogue ( I'm still in denial even after all these years.) I am just looking for some feedback on the plot so far and the writing style. I'm currently in the middle of just writing as much as I can, so it's not polished and ready to be posted. Could anyone help me?
Also the story will be rated R or MA, so no yims!!! ( sorry)
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