Holy balls.
This is AMAZING!
I love how you display Kagome different.
I love the culture factors you added.
I love the story line.
I love this. It's great. Don't stop.
tonya (Chapter 4) - Sat 30 Aug 2014
great chapter! i am loving this story!
marisel (Chapter 4) - Fri 29 Aug 2014
really good and princes of demon ahh cool keep them coming.
rose (Chapter 4) - Fri 29 Aug 2014
next chapter please
tonya (Chapter 3) - Wed 27 Aug 2014
you rock!
rose (Chapter 3) - Wed 27 Aug 2014
next chapter please
tonya (Chapter 2) - Tue 26 Aug 2014
words can't describe how cool this story is! i am looking forward to your next update
Tierney (Chapter 2) - Tue 26 Aug 2014
Loving this!! Update again soon! XD
Sailor Moon new anime has already aired four episodes, If you missed them you can watch them on youtube. This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.
rose (Chapter 2) - Mon 25 Aug 2014
next chapter please
Your story is progressing nicely, and I can't wait to see how all of it unfolds.
Aubrey (Chapter 1) - Sun 24 Aug 2014
wow! your amaze-balls! i cant wait how you are going to incorporate sesh into this story. iLoveit and the little hawaiin words you put into it is prerry cool too.. mahalo
melissa (Chapter 1) - Thu 21 Aug 2014
That was ... words can not describe how great that was. If not for it being based off Inuyasha I would say make this into a book. I would buy two copies. Update soon.
I started to read your story and found it has a very intersting concept, however, it needs to be seperated into smaller paragraphs so that it is easier to read. You should also break up the dialogue from the main text, that will cause less confusion. And also instead of writing numbers spell them out. I wish you all the best with your first fan-fiction!
Like the story please update soon
i found very interesting the story
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