I have just yesterday taken up reading your lovely story. I enjoy your writing style very much. I love the positive up lifting message throughout. It goes right along with something I've been working on personally, loving one's self and finding yourself worthy of love and respect. We all need to look for the beauty in life instead of wallowing in what isn't going our way. I will definitely be looking into your other works.
In this chapter specifically, I love the way you handled the confrontation with the Southern Lord. It's understandable that Inuyasha, a hanyou Prince, isn't a good political match for the heir to the Southern lands. However, I don't think her father believed she would give up her inheritance so easily, even joyfully. Seeing how ruling can be such a burden, she probably expects to be much happier without the responsibility. I hope he had a back up heir.
naleah (Chapter 36) - Wed 21 Jan 2015
So happy....
Loveyaa (Chapter 36) - Tue 20 Jan 2015
Awww...being kind. Such a little thing with such a big result. I can't wait to see how the last chapter rounds it all out. I can't wait to see what happens next :)
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Wonderful chapter; beautiful story.
Marie (Chapter 36) - Mon 19 Jan 2015
That was so stinking sweet. I'm cryin darnit! I just can't help it, I need tissue! SOBBING!!!!
northpeach (Chapter 36) - Mon 19 Jan 2015
Maru-chan...that really was a beautiful piece of work! A masterpiece! I enjoyed every moment as it captivated me utterly!!
this history is very awesome I'm glad that inuyasha is happy
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