Happy Birthday! And wow, what an amazing chapter it was. I can't wait to see what happens when Sesshoumaru confronts Kagome. It will be a sight to behold! Please keep updating!
Happy Birthday!
That. Was. Awesome.
Seriously.
She could have kicked his butt, but she was awesome!
AND THEN!!
THE CRACK!!
That was beautiful! Beautiful. I loved that crack.
And the way Ryou threatened the Gon leader...
THIS WAS AWESOME!!!
I love you. (In a platonic way of course.)
jk (Chapter 13) - Sun 29 Jun 2014
Happy birthday n waiting for the nxt update ;p
Nilee1 (Chapter 13) - Sun 29 Jun 2014
Happy Birthday!!!!
Bravo, Kagome. Her wisdom and understanding gets her out of trouble again. I believe your fight was well executed for what type of fight it was. I also like the little string of tolerance that is between Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha. Nicely done!
I'm absouletly in love with your fanfic! Jeez, I'm on edge all day waiting for you to upload more!!! The character build up is great, and not at all rushed. I enjoy that you retained Kagome's caring side, however she's still fiesty sometimes so I was wondering if that would be included? Either way, Kagome is protrayed beautifully, and Sesshoumaru as well. He's not OC like some (a lot) of stories tend to make him, and he has a valid reason for warming up to Kagome. As for Inuyasha himself, I admire that you include him in your story. Most people dispose of him so he's not a problem, or make him to be the main problem. But your story makes me feel like it won't absolutely destroy him to lose Kagome, because I feel like she is 'home' for him at the moment. Like a bestfriend home.
Keep up the good work! I enjoy every moment of your story.
Great chapter, keep it coming.
Bahahahaha!!!!! Love, love, love!!
*swings upside down from random tree branch*
Ankita (Chapter 12) - Fri 27 Jun 2014
Oh and forgot to I liked your sessho's portrayal also how u explained his coldness his tenderness <3 they way you wrote this story I could see how much you love kagome and sesshomaru and really happy that ypur passion is the driving force for producing such awesome chappies <3
Ankita (Chapter 12) - Fri 27 Jun 2014
Such a beautiful storyy ... this is the only storyy that I have found portrayes kagome's character the best and the only one that touched my heart beautiful *hats off to the author" wonderfully written ... every body says kagome's heart is beautiful and all your the only one who showed how beautiful it is very cleverly written ....keep up the awesome word all the chapters were awesome I never got bored .... Thank you for writing this
Wow this is a great chapter! Kagomes just so spirited, and that's why we love her. I can't wait for the next chapter!
It all makes sense now...yep. Kagome overstepped some boundaries when she replaced Kura. Kura seems legitimate though. Now Kagome has to prove herself which could be a good thing. She doesn't necessarily have to win just prove her strength. I hope she doesn't get beat to bad though. I'm very happy for the sweet moment between Sesshoumaru and Kagome and I am so so so glad that you are not rushing anything between them. I believe that these subtle but sweet moments make the relationship development between them much more genuine and believeable. Very nice! Haven't been disappointed yet! Yay! :)
Nicole (Chapter 12) - Thu 26 Jun 2014
cant wait to see the fight...i hope that sesshoumaru will b there to help root kagome on :) look forward to the next chapter :)
I hope for the best, Kagome :)
i liked the chapter of today a new bride to inuyasha would be nice
thanks for the update!
Sakura (Chapter 12) - Thu 26 Jun 2014
Squee! Poor Sesshoumaru has no defense against Kagome's honest heart. <3 Thank you for updating so quickly with chapters. I got an email once again while I was at work and I was like NOO! I don't wanna wait!! Ah! But its always worth it. Super excited to meet this new male and I'm so happy for more Inuyasha in the story. I like how he is. He's still Inuyasha but he's showing this mature side that I've fallen for. He needs a good mate =3 Keep up the amazing work and if you ever need a beta or someone to bounce things off of..I'm so game! I offer my humble services to you. <3
Holy Wakamole!!!!!..............I've been gone for a really long time, and what do I find when I come back???? 12 chapters full of AWESOMNESS!! It's nice to see that you are consistent with your work, and it was a pleasure to come back to such an amazing set of chapters. I love the way the story is pregressing, bc I was never a fan of the "I saw you, and I fell in love with you plot" I apreciate the fact that you are taking the time to develop the story at a good rate with out the story being boring. I will be looking forward to the ass-kicking chapter that is to come I am very interested to so how does that turn out!!
Any ways...... thank you for your updates, and will be impatiently waiting for the next one!!!
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