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Sakura (Chapter 16) - Wed 09 Jul 2014

So happy I came back to a couple of chapter. Stupid work keeping me from reading. Gah! My heart is being thrown everywhere. I'm so in love and its nice to see Kagome is being effected when being around him as well. And yay Rin-chan! I love how you have included her in a way that makes sense with the entire story. It's safer for her to be in one of his keeps and not near any of the demon court. I feel like on the edge of my seat as I wait for more. I need to know what is going to happen next with them and I'm also hoping Inuyasha gets happiness also because I love how you have made him mature into his role that he must assume. =3


Himura Asami (Chapter 16) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

Courage, Kagome! Endless courage! You can do this!

Awww!!!! Seriously, I'm just loving this right now. He only said come in, but he said her name! I love when he says her name; it's a weird thing I have.

AWWWWW!!! Look at how sweet he is!!!

But seriously, the guy must be having it rough. I can't even imagine... man. (Not going to mention how totally bipolar he is. He can't decide whether to keep pushing her away or draw her closer. That's cool. It makes it more... vortex-ish. That's really the only way to describe this story).

AWW! This is awesome. If you keep this up, I'm going to have an adorability overload. Seriously. I mean it. I really loved that part earlier, by the way. She was just staring at him... I mean, come on! Doesn't that say something...? Or maybe I'm reading to much into this. (I've got my fingers crossed because I love Sessh/KAg-love! Obviously. Why else would I join this site? Sorry, this chapter just really has me excited and, thus, loquacious).

Ooh! Sadness at his departure? Revelation of secrets? This is love!!!  (So excited... so...)

*Mouth dropped open*

I'm dreading this trip for some reason. Almost in a good way, though, if that makes any sense. So much could happen... And! So much could happen...

... Wow. She's so affectionate. Poor Sesshomaru.

Poor, poor, poor Sesshomaru. Just... wow. She's like a sadist, only she doesn't know it. Wow. Poor Sesshomaru. There's just a lot of pity for him right now. That's probably why I'm dreading this trip. 

...Wow. I dodn't realize how much more of the chapter I had to go. Yay! 

Wait a second! How are they going to travel, exactly? Please, please no... Please...

Why does she have to be so freaking awesome all the time!?!?!?! Poor Sesshomaru!! She's not going to betray him, she's just going to accidently break his heart into a zillion pieces... repeatedly... again! Is that why you wrote this chapter? To stir up a well of pity for Sesshomaru? Because I'm totally feeeling it.

Thank goodness! They walked. Wooh! Any other method of travel probably would have had me crying for Sesshomaru since he can't cry for himself. Thank you. I really appreciate that.

Snap! The hesitation and the hand on the small of the back! I know that move! I use that move all the time in my writing! Just... wow. That's a classic. Very nice touch.

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Oh. So that's definitely the reason you wrote this chapter. Plus, we get to see that both Kagome and Rin, the two people he cherishes most, are actually oblivious sadists. Nice. Does he enjoy this? Is he a masochist?

I feel so bad for him. 

Thank you, Rin, for being so perceptive. Thank you. I almost cried. I probably would have cried if she had continued. That was... that was pretty sad.

That whole flower thing was just extremely heart-warming. And sad, at the same time. How do you do that? It's brilliant.

 

You are evil. An evil genius. Evil to the core. Heart of black stone.

 

I really admire you. Will you teach me? Seriously. Please?

I love you. 


JeniNeji (Chapter 16) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

I knooow. Something wiiiiiilllllll happen


elizabeth (Chapter 16) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

i like to see sesshomaru and kagoome everytime  closer


Marie (Chapter 16) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

Okay, im locin the directikn of the story.  Hurry and vting yasha back.  Next chapter please


Maira Saw (Chapter 16) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

Hey fanfiction is being weird so her I am! Anyway wonderful wonderful have to take care of the little one, and I can definitely see why he wouldn't want to take Rin to court, he would have to purge it and start will all new nobles hehe of course he might enjoy that a little to much


Moonlit Rose (Chapter 16) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

Very sweet. Another step in the right direction with their relationship developement. I can't wait to see this 'storm'. Looking forward to it. Keep up the good work!


sesshouscat (Chapter 16) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

::::hugs::::::: too cute

i love it as alwyas

ok just a fair. Warning the. Naughty pRt of me has be rearing it's head

and  wants a smut from this.. Lol but the fluffy part of me want you to keep it

as it is and let my naughty part of me go wild with imagination  choosies so many chooses 

now to sleep I've been up waitng for your up date  and I'm happy I got a new chapter on my firxay

 and before bed. Oyasumi 

I'm off to have fluffy dreams


EmmaLynnx (Chapter 16) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

This was an amazing scene, you can see the relationship starting to bloom it's beautiful! And it was great how you brought run in to the mix! I can't wait for more delightful chapters from you!


Nile (Chapter 16) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

I've been enjoying this fan fiction and I was wondering if the rating was intended to T, rather than something perhaps stronger. I'e read a lot through the years and even some get a little more mature... not smut mature, but just tastefully mature. Just  thought in case you end up veering in that direction. I know how sometimes plots and the overall story can finally turn out once it's finally written.


Nicole (Chapter 16) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

ok so at least little Rin can see what is happening to Sesshoumaru. i just cant wait till he can finally admit it to himself that he loves Kagome. looking forward to the next chapter :)


beachvilla (Chapter 16) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

Anticipating the storm.  :)  Great job, can't wait for the next chapter. 


Dee (Chapter 15) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

So...I have to go to work in the morning..it's already 1:30...I have been enraptured by this story... Please continue don't let my grumpy day at work be in vain


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 15) - Mon 07 Jul 2014

Poor Kagome, she's so uncertain why Sesshomaru gets closer then pulls away and acts so cold. Although, he should know that will just draw her closer! The more he pulls away, the more she will attempt to get closer to him so she can be friends. Although, I think he's snuck under her defense and is slowly capturing her heart and she is in so much denial that she does not see it. It will be very interesting to see how all three: Inuyasha, Kagome, and Sesshomaru - react when they each start realizing where their feelings truly lie.

I think it'd be great if Inu found someone too so he isn't so lonely. Think Shirori is still too young (bat hanyou) but maybe he can find someone else so when Kagome finally starts listening to her heart and realizes her feelings for Sesshomaru, Inu won't be so hurt. After all, there's just no telling what goes on while he patrols ;)

I really liked this chapter -it gave the couple a mild bump in their relationship and shows that while Kagome does have very good instincts in reading people/youkai, she is still innocent and does not always catch the romantic and lustful thoughts that someone may have for her.

Cannot wait for more!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 15) - Mon 07 Jul 2014

Sailor Moon new anime has already premiered Saturday, If you missed it you can watch it on youtube. Nice chapter, keep it coming.


NorthPeach (Chapter 15) - Mon 07 Jul 2014

Squiggles and swirleys! And oh my stars!!

Gah!!

Like, ermergerd!!


Melissa (Chapter 15) - Mon 07 Jul 2014

Wow, This was a very good chapter. looking forward to more.


elizabeth (Chapter 15) - Sun 06 Jul 2014

i love it this sesshomaru how come behave  with kagome in a manner so sweet 


sesshouscat (Chapter 15) - Sun 06 Jul 2014

Omg

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OMG a fluffy I love it XD 

 and now I can have a good nap I got work tonight this was a great treat for me

 


MopseyFlopsey (Chapter 15) - Sun 06 Jul 2014

OH MY GOODNESS!!!

This story makes me want to cry and laugh at the same time. It is the epitome of what a good story should be. I love the way you portrayed the characters and it is so close to how their canon selves acted. I won't lie, I check every day to see if you have updated and it is a royal treat when you have. I was wondering how many chapters you had planned, approxamately, for the story? I CANNOT WAIT for what you have planned next

ALL my love and respect,

MopseyFlopsey


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