Wow, that was gruesome! Poor Kagome.
I really liked how well written it was though. I think you captured both of their frustrations very well.
Umm... i noticed in one of your author notes, you called this bdsm...it's not. it's dark torture porn at the most. Bdsm is COSENSUAL understanding between a dominate and submissive. Kagome is not willing and is being violated against her wishes. You did specify that the story is dark and twisted, I understand that, but don't toss the label of BDSM onto it to make it more acceptable, because you missed the core of what makes those relationship work, its a mutual understanding between both partners and they have very loving and trusting relationship. this is not bdsm and please do not use that label so lightly. You make those relationship sound like something dark and perverse when it is not. what you write is your business and you have given multiple warnings, so no biggie there, just do not toss the bdsm label on rape and torture and that is what you wrote. Just wanted to point that out is all.
It's been a month since you last updated, I'm glad your back. Great chapter, keep it coming. Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!
Sigh, Sesshomaru's gone back to being a sadist and Kagome is just a bit masochistic i think. I'd of asked by now what the hell was wrong with his face by now. Had he always been Beasts wicked twin or was he really the romance cover model every girl wants to find in her dreams (often). I still love your story, gonna keep up with it, and hope they get their stuff fixed soons.
Malova (Chapter 1) - Sat 22 Dec 2012
Aww too bad about the rape, I will have to stop reading now. Good luck with the rest of the story, I have enjoyed it a lot till now.
Anyanka (Chapter 19) - Fri 21 Dec 2012
when I read a story like this, first i am dissapointed because i love the story and then i hate the characters. I would like once To read a story that when this happen and he turns into a sadistic and cruel bastard, who tortures and rapes kagome, to end bad. I mean, if it is a dark story keep it that way till the enD. Kagome should die or hate him for ever. I Hate when she accepts the torture and then forgives him and they live happily ever after. You can never love your rapist and torturer. I know. There is no punishment equal. So in all these storys he regret his actions at the end. Suffers from remorse and all is forgiven. Bullshit. He should die a painful death and die alone and hated
kagme123 (Chapter 18) - Fri 23 Nov 2012
good kags that wat im talkin bout...lol
missjess (Chapter 18) - Tue 20 Nov 2012
Amazing story, I love it! Please keep writing!
Eris (Chapter 18) - Tue 20 Nov 2012
Wow!! This was a great chapter. I can almost feel her pain and his suffering. I without a doubt love your writting style. I hope you update soon!!!
Andrea (Chapter 18) - Mon 19 Nov 2012
Yay update! I actually like the turn this has taken, it will drag out the story a bit more before things are resolved :) Keep it coming!
Holy cow that was awesome. Loved this chapter
kathryn (Chapter 18) - Mon 19 Nov 2012
love your story cant wait to read more
Facepalm, really Sesshomaru? You really believe Kagome's that conniving. sigh. He's done messed up and gone even further back in her books than he was before, if i was her i'd be debating whether he's on my shit list for life list or the i might forgive him if he grovels for a few years list. Ah, this was just a huge set back, and things were going so well.
Pricila (Chapter 18) - Sun 18 Nov 2012
Still a good chapter! Poor Kagome, I would be just as confused as she, is this a trap from the witch on Sessh? Looking forward to your next chapter.
Keep it coming.
So after reading brotherly bliss I decided to read more of your stories. and I must say I have become a fan loyal and true ^_^. The only thing was I usually dont read incomplete stories and didnt realise it was incomplete until I arrived at the last chp. But i am so inlove this story that I barley care. I am heart broken but I know it will be woth the wait. I just wish I knew when you were going to post. ^_^ thanks for the great tale. ps Kagome's explaintion to Inuyash and Sango in brotherly bliss was a bit weird
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