I was turned away from reading this a couple time due to the glaring grammatical error in the preview, but actually, I was pretty pleased. There are some flow problems and a few grammar mistakes but nothing that really detracts from the story. I'm curious to see where this goes.

And you shouldn't speak so poorly of yourself. This story certainly doesn't deserve to be filed under "sucks".

No, it doesn't SUCK...just post the next chapter!  Scene successfully set...