Yes! I'm happy that they finally met. I don't really like Kagura but you don't make her seem so bad and she's still Sesshomaru's wife so I'm happy that Kagome is finally realizing she was acting like an idiot.
Part of me wonders if you wanted us to like her at first so you can kill her off or something. I see this has been marked a tragedy...
I called it if it happens later! lol.
Intresting, I don't feel bad for Kagome, she is the one that is doing this to herself, she is the one that is getting involved with a married man, now I am not a huge fan of Kagrua, but in this story she is his wife, and there for married to him, I find it so stupid, and she should have not gotten herself involved with Sesshomaru in the first place, he may not think marrige is important but mybe his wife does, plus once a cheater is always a cheater, what makes kagome think, she will not get played herself, I am pretty sure, he has hundreds of women like her around him, I find this kagome, stupid, and selfish and a "B", she deserves everthing she gets.
good story, so far.
Hugs
megan007
Random reader (Chapter 11) - Wed 26 Oct 2011
This is not a slight against you as a writer but this is turning out to be another cliche story. I hope that as a writer you break the cycle and have Kagome open her eyes and start becoming independent and start taking action to stop these mistakes that she acknowledges is wrong yet continue to keep making. It's really frustrating as a reader, reading this type of storyline over and over again of Kagome becoming so desperate and needing of love that she will sell herself short and continue sleeping with a married man and not do anything to rectify the situation. Why can't she love him as well as not sleep with him or start taking steps to get away from the situation regardless of what her heart or body wants. Instead, she knows it's wrong, yet she vows that she will not leave him? Now, it seems that she is going to start a grudge that she has no business holding against the wife, when she is the mistress... Ugh! Granted I can stop reading this story, which is logical but there are parts of the story that I'll admit that are interesting and in my opinion can help turn the story around. I look forward to seeing what you have planned.
I didn't think I was going to like this story when I first read the title. I'm really enjoying it. I hope you don't make Kagome bitter or a crazy wife killer. I can't wait to see when the wife and Kagome meet. I wonder if Kagome will give Sesshomaru an ultimatum.
Miyukiyama (Chapter 11) - Mon 24 Oct 2011
Oh no! Is this about to become Fatal Attraction all over? I hope not. And I'm still curious to who Sesshoumaru is actually married to...probably Kagura, but who knows. Great update BTW!
Don't tell me kags is goona stalker on us lol update sooñ
This story is great! I want to know what happens next~
Please update when you can! ♥
-Kukuro [:
T.T Swoon, so few words and so much meaning behind them. Silly Kagome.
yume (Chapter 9) - Sun 23 Oct 2011
i wish sesshoumaru was mine :D
FicReadr (Chapter 9) - Sat 22 Oct 2011
Um so, I love this story! I can't wait to see if they'll end up together.
Waiting for the next UPDATE. ^__^
randomreader (Chapter 7) - Fri 21 Oct 2011
*qreeaat story. . hope you update soon. . .
kinkyyyyyyyy*
omg what a cliffe update soon! Like tonight lol
That was incredible. Intense, raw, full of emotion. I loved it. I loved how you portrayed her emotions more deeply than the act itself, it was just. Wow.
catrice (Chapter 8) - Thu 20 Oct 2011
WOW.. is all I have to say! so far.. this story is...mmm I dont even know what to say.. but it hitting home.. again WOW!! keep it coming!
Awww yes I do. These chapters are incredible. I love the raw emotion you put there. I love the intricacies of the whole thing :D. Married but not mated, so it means nothing to him but everything to her. Brilliant.
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