Instead of a double or triple review, how about a longer review? lol. I really liked this chapter. Instead of witnessing more of Kagome's emotions and how she's dealing with her separation from Sesshoumaru, we finally get to see what Sesshoumaru is thinking and how he's coping. Looks like he's not doing a very good job of that, is he? I can't wait to see their interaction together now that they've landed in the same bar. It's fate! FATE!! lol. So screw Kagura and get your mate back, Sesshoumaru! xP
I think I mentioned in a review for another one of your stories, but you are very poetic! I mean... even writing freakin' long chapters like this, each sentence flows so smoothly - almost like poetry. I think it's amazing. I write poetry but my stories don't sound poetic at all. My stories and poems are on two completely different ends of the spectrum and I would love to have your writing abilities. Truly amazing!
Keep on writing because you're doing a great job. You've made me a fan with the very first chapter of this story, so know that your efforts are appreciated and that I look forward to reading more!
I'm so happy that your Sesshoumaru backstory was NOT a snooze fest. Some writers bore the hell out of me with their overly detailed backstories or unecessarily long point of veiws . But you kept it to the point, highly informative, and oh so heart wrenching...100 stars for perfect execution miss lady. I could read your stories forever...and ever...and ever >_<
Good Job
D.o.D
Lol I'm gonna go with a tear but he's gona claim it was a rain drop. Lol
wonderful work as always. I'm glad you gave us a glimpse of Sesshoumaru's past. It never hurts to understand the characters. :) update soon!
your faithful reader,
raindancer13
ap (Chapter 20) - Thu 05 Jan 2012
YOU'RE BACK!! i've missed your almost daily updates :)
this chapter, as always, was wonderful! the insight to sess was great, but i'm still so frustrated with him. how could he deny his mate for anything? he needs a reality check lol.
can't wait to see how everything unfolds- i hope he goes back to kags and begs forgiveness soon hahahha
PhoenixBlade (Chapter 19) - Wed 04 Jan 2012
Merry Happy New Year! lol A "tad" bit late but oh well! I've been eyeing this story for a while now and FNALLY decided to give it a read and now I'm hooked! At first, I have to admit that the story was a bit slow, but the smutty scenes were sooooooooooooooooooo worth the wait and patience! Now, the plot has thickened and for this story, I am like a little child staring at a large, rainbow colored lollipop, drooling and waiting for the day I can get one... hopefully soon! Great story and I await on baited breath for your next update!
White Luna (nsi (Chapter 19) - Mon 26 Dec 2011
Wonderful chapter. I'm sorry for your hardships dear---I hope they get better.
Kagome is bound to get in trouble...Thanks for the update!
AN UPDATE! THANK YOU! Although... my condolences about your dog. =/ I can't imagine what it's like to lose a pet, but it couldn't have been easy. On a brighter note, I bet Kagome is going to go to the exact bar that Sesshoumaru is now frequenting.... isn't she? It's FATE. Looking forward to the next chapter! Happy Holidays!
Sorry to hear about your dog. :( But I'm so glad that the story is back in action. :)
yume (Chapter 19) - Sat 24 Dec 2011
Merry Christmas !!! :)..... i have not forgotten about your fic!!!
JC (Chapter 19) - Sat 24 Dec 2011
I was afraid you'd forgotton about this story, but it was worth the wait. I'm so happy that you updated. Incredible chapter. Kagome's dream was so creepy and eeire. It would be really good to see Kagome have flashbacks of Naraku in childhood. I would like to read how Naraku came about into Kagome's life and her father's. What lead up to Kagome being molested by Naraku? How she struggled to keep such a horrible secret from her father? How Naraku was sent the to prison? There is so many questions about Kagome's past. I would like to see them come to life. Please update soon. It would be funny to see Sesshomaru's head blow off if he sees Kagome and his brother together at the party.
Never fear, readers faith is forever, since real life smashes us all into walls. I'm very sorry about your dog. Thats never a good time in anyone's life.
Excellent chapter, full of filler but we needed it to catch back up. I'm very glad u incorporated the drink. It added that extra twist that was needed for this story :)
I surely havent forgotten this story...i love this too much
I was actually about to stalk you in hopes to 'coax' another lovely chappie out of that deliciously creative brain of yours...
*grins* But how kind of you to spare me the trouble.
D.O.D
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