I am glad that you updated.... please add another chaptger soon.
Oh, yeah! You should definitely continue. Pleeeeeeeeease? It's got my attention now. I remember reading the first two chapters way back when, and it was on my favorites list. I was shocked to see you had updated it, finally. Hehehe. Just kidding. Anyhoo, plz update again soon! I must know what happens. What happens to "The Kitsune"? And, I can't help but wonder what happened to "The Princess of the East"? And, why did Sesshoumaru suddenly decide he wanted a second chance with Kagome? All questions must be answered!!
BTW. I just love the way Rin and Shippo stood up to Sesshomaru. Made my heart proud! :D Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more!
pauly (Chapter 5) - Fri 29 Jan 2010
Hi, let me tell you something, you are a Genius!!!! I don't remember in which site I read this story for the first time, but this was THE FANFIC that made me addictive to sessh/kags fanfictions. Your story is simply Brilliant!!! and I hope that this time you can be able to finish it. ;)
stars (Chapter 5) - Thu 28 Jan 2010
please updata
youkailady (Chapter 5) - Thu 28 Jan 2010
Finally you update this fic I had thought was dead. Great story by the way! Though you made Rin sound a little retarded with her third-person dialog, I'll let it pass. I just hope you don't have Kagome folding under his seductions; he still needs to learn a lot regarding humility judging by his arrogant attitude with the, 'what Sesshoumaru wants, he gets', and the, "He was the one of the most desired males on the planet, he didn’t need luck." Oh, and please don't forget to indulge us in his delivered punishment to that meddling whore Kayuga. Hopefully you'll update soon and not have us waiting til forever!
mary (Chapter 5) - Thu 28 Jan 2010
quite a good foundation. laying the groundwork for a very thorough analysis of the situation in general. everything is quite clear. although you're not giving anything away with regards to plot.
perhaps, if the kitsune has a weakness? a sordid pass, anything to give an advantage to seshomaru? wouldn't that add to the drama? of course he has to really love kagome right? so kagome will have a difficult time choosing. but who will she choose? a lost love or the one she has now? and what about rin, how does she react to seshomaru and the kitsune?
anyway, it's like the typical divorced family dynamics. but this is a romance still. right? it has to end happily. yet convincingly.
good luck! more power and insight to you.
on a side note, there were little spelling errors, but other than that...
mary (Chapter 1) - Thu 28 Jan 2010
i think my heart was clenching while reading the whole chapter! it was sad, it was painful, so filled with longing and regret. the actions, the dialogue, the the subtext.
you know that feeling when you read those types of stories where the guy made a mistake and then he asks for forgiveness but he was too late? how your stomach clenches? i get that feeling. and it's hard to do that. so, congratulations! the clench-er was definitely there.
great job! i wish there was more chapters. 20 perhaps?
I love this story, and have read the existing chapters over and over on ASS. I understand how difficult real life can be, but I really hope you can continue with this story. It is one of my favorites.
malom (Chapter 3) - Mon 25 May 2009
This is a good story. I sincerely hope you intend to finish this sometime very soon. *sigh*
That's pretty messed up what you did to Inuyasha. I don't think he deserved all of that. Even if he did keep info from the gigantic asshole Sesshomaru is turning out to be in this stroy. I hope Kagome makes him feel as bad as he did her, at least for a little while anyway.
sunset in love (Chapter 4) - Tue 09 Dec 2008
oh dear, just how long i've long to your brainchild... a beautiful one at that, i've tracking you almost to every existing site... just hoping against hope taht there is a piece of you somewhere, continuation from the single spark... i love it, and really do... how would life continue for both kag and sesshie, and with now the ever comitted and loving fiance beside her... i feel bad for sessh though, blinded by fame and glory, ending up losing what matters the most... the only love of his life... and the few precious years child would spare their parents, before choosing they path of life - on their own... how would sessh respond to things? how would he correct his 'mistakes'? what would happen to kaguya? and why didn't he married kaguya instead, since he was so engrossed with her earlier? oh, i know that this won't help, but please, please let us hear more... been dying to have more of you....
Rinter (Chapter 3) - Sun 30 Nov 2008
I just found this story in Single Spark and followed your advise and started reading it on this site.
Wow, this is a good story. I wonder if Sesshoumaru will somehow be able to win Kagome back.
Heh, InuYasha is so in character here :D (But Ayame handled him well.)
Jt (Chapter 1) - Tue 18 Nov 2008
pleasee review soon!
pauly (Chapter 1) - Mon 17 Nov 2008
Hi. This story is so incredibly AWESOME, let him suffer like the dog he is. But don´t get me wrong I do like him is just that you write so well that in this story I really hate him. Please continue whit this and give it an end, It would be a shame that it didn´t get concluded. PLEASE UPDATE VERY SOON!!!!!!!
flynalien (Chapter 3) - Tue 28 Oct 2008
I hope to God that Sessh pays the price for leaving Kagome like that! I can't stand that in real life and he better go through hell and high waters to prove himself a changed person. Besides my rant, I love the story and how it is written. The descriptions are awesome! More please! :)
Nobody (Chapter 1) - Tue 28 Oct 2008
im so happy to see this here! I cant wait to see how this turns out. SESSHOUNARU YOU JERK! Ok i feel better, i cant wait to see what yuo do with this.
tifany (Chapter 3) - Tue 28 Oct 2008
stupid kags!!!! poor sesh!!!
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