XD I almost burst out laughing at this chapter, not good since the entire house is asleep.
Discarded jeans: $15
Employer's Warm silk sheets: $30
Employer's daughter walking in on you in his bed: Priceless
LOL thank you for putting a smile on my face and the amazing mental images in my head. I hope there is more of this, even though Rin's wish was answered I sense some closure will be needed... I'll just have to hold my breath and see. ^_^
That. Was. Very. WELL WRITTEN.
Please keep up the great work, it makes me want to finish up my S/K christmas fanfiction. I cannot wait for the next chapter :D
autumngold (Chapter 17) - Sun 06 Dec 2009
Oh my, that could have gone much worse! Thank goodness Rin is such a sweet child. Thank goodness also Kagome and Sesshoumaru weren't doing something else when Rin came in. That would have been embarassing! Thanks for the update!
Yohko (Chapter 17) - Sun 06 Dec 2009
Thanks for the update! Really glad things worked out for the both of them. Can't wait to find out what's next. :D
Why do I have a feeling this will end bad? It better have a happy ending. >.> or else.
Ooh, hot hot hot. You make my head spin right round right round, la la la la.
Another excellent chappie, I can't wait to see the aftermath of...that. Yuuuuush. =3
*fans self*
That was...unbelievably HOT! I can't believe you feel any embarrassment when writing lemons because that was just perfect! And realistic too after Sesshoumaru going through such a long period of abstinence :P
For a brief moment, I wondered if maybe you wouldn't treat us to their adventures with the mad,wild, passionate monkey dance and...to my greatest pleasure...you did!!! And what an excellent time it was! JEN
love you so much (Chapter 16) - Sat 05 Dec 2009
oh, hot. hot, hot, hot! woot! woot!
Ahhh, that was just awesome! I'm so glad they finally got close, they were both so lonely in this story. Kagome is really a big hearted woman, just like in the anime. She deserves to be happy! Now, I can't wait to find out if you just round this out as a very sweet Christmas story, or start another episode, the way you sometimes do. Will this be one of your extra-bonus fics, where the readers think the action is over, only to get that surprise extra scoop at the end?
Ameire (Chapter 16) - Fri 04 Dec 2009
Excellent~ The nail marks down their backs were a nice (and funny :3) touch. This chapter was good, I'll feel sorry for him when she leaves in the morning. But I still stick with the fantasy kiss/real kiss chapter as a favorite for now. Thankyou for updating ^ ^
Wow he was definitely not playing. What about protection?
Hot. Double Hot!! Now I can only imagine Rin coming home and seeing Kagome's car. "oh, Kagome is here already." and walks in the house only to discover that Kagome never left. And Rin would think "best. christmas. ever." lol
wow, wow, wow...this was a long time coming...I wonder what Rin will say when she sees the changes in both of them...
good chapter and update soon...
what a wonderful way to start my morning... forget homework or housework, just give me a new chapter and I'll be one happy Star. ^_^ Your writing skills astound me with every new chapter, and I look forward to see what more you will give. Until then, keep up the excellent work!
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I'm so in love with you right now!!!!! YOU HAVE NO IDEA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MORE!!!!!!!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ARGGGGG THE TORMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
WOOHOO!!!! FINALLY! -dances- GO Sess and Kagome! I wonder what will happen when Rin gets home...hmmmmmmmmm
Snowfall (Chapter 16) - Fri 04 Dec 2009
OMG! What hawt lemons. *squeezes legs together* I'm so glad they finally released some of the tension and I'm glad that Kagome broached the subject of his tendency to say very mean things. It's good that she's not a pushover.
autumngold (Chapter 16) - Fri 04 Dec 2009
Ok I'm glad that they had so much fun, and great sex scenes by the way, but Kagome is going to have to learn to be more quiet when Rin is back. Wouldn't that be embarrasing to have Rin asking a bunch of questions about why Kagome was screaming so much at night?! Quick question, did they use birth control? If not, Rin might have another wish answered before next Christmas. Or doesn't she want a brother or sister? Enjoyed the update! Can't wait for more!
Yohko (Chapter 16) - Fri 04 Dec 2009
Really love the chapter! I'm really glad Sess and Kag worked it out. I hope there are more intimate moments bet. the two of them next chapter. Keep it up. :D
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