Reviews for Vice by susie

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Young Kagome (Chapter 11) - Thu 13 May 2021

I wanna know what Inuyasha did!!! You are artfully avoiding of it. Please update soon! 

Lauren (Chapter 6) - Tue 27 Apr 2021

Why do I feel like he waited two minutes after Kagome got into the shower, stood at the foot of the bed and was like, "Get up and get out"? LMFAO 


At least he is making her talk this out. Holding it in and pushing it to the back of her mind won't help things now or in the long run. A decision has to be made very soon though.


Lauren (Chapter 5) - Tue 27 Apr 2021

He is her brother-in-law. And this has been happening on and off for almost the entire marriage, I'd guess. Right? How emotionally exhausting for Kagome and frustrating for Sesshomaru. Hoping there's no additional unnecessary drama, like being exposed or something unseemly like that.

Lauren (Chapter 4) - Tue 27 Apr 2021

You know what? This is bizarre, but for some reason, also extremely Sesshomaru. It's randomly very in-character for him to not give a fuck and just continue doing what he wants, sending consistently mixed signals to everyone in the room. 


Really hoping Kagome can make it out the room after her shower, without waking "Kagura" up. 


I'm assuming the scar from the other chapter is from a brotherly altercation? 


This will be another awesome story. You'll see. 

Lauren (Chapter 3) - Tue 27 Apr 2021

Umm... Exactly how casual are these relationships?! I mean, Kagome is obviously horrified and embarrassed, but somehow I feel like that's because she didn't know he had company, not that he had company (after all, she doesn't have much room to argue). I'm sure there's nothing to really be made of this, since he didn't think enough of whomever that is (Kagura?) to at least warn Kagome, but his lack of care tends not to transfer well. LOL Whoever that is in his bed is going to become a thorn later on. It's so early to set up a triangle, but I mean, go for it? 


Man, their lives we unnecessarily complicated. Makes you appreciate the boring in your own life. 

Lauren (Chapter 2) - Tue 27 Apr 2021

So Inuyasha is an alcoholic. Kind of cringey for Sesshomaru to offer Kagome some, then.. But then, it might be a backhanded offer to prove how adult and/or "strong" they are comparatively. Glad it wasn't domestic abuse. 


They're definitely sleeping together, though obviously not regularly anymore. Another complicated spiderweb of a relationship~

Lauren (Chapter 1) - Tue 27 Apr 2021

Great first chapter. It's reading as if this is more of an emotional issue than a financial one. So I'm guessing Sessho is the dependable friend/brother-in-law that Kagome runs to when her fiance/husband gets irrationally angry or starts using again.

WiccanMethuselah (Chapter 9) - Sun 25 Apr 2021

I took a break from messing with more site nonsense to read this delicious smutfic update! I loved every minute of it, as always... especially the byplay between these two. It never fails to amaze me how easily you can evoke the whole scene with so few words. You have a prodigious talent, m'dear!!



Young Kagome (Chapter 9) - Sat 24 Apr 2021

Last chapter I compared it to the slow relationship buildup of Only Human but this is reminding me more of That Night. I hope they're gonna discuss birth control though I wouldn't mind a love child! Please update soon! 

Young Kagome (Chapter 8) - Fri 16 Apr 2021

I'm in for a torture ride like Only Human I can feel it lol well at least this time there's not sexual tension on top of everything else. Please update soon! 

Mecca (Chapter 7) - Thu 08 Apr 2021

Hot diggity dog, I for some reason did not see that coming. At least not yet, but glad it did! Now I'm just waiting for the Drama in this love affair ;) 

Nicole (Chapter 7) - Wed 07 Apr 2021

HOLY SHIT. I did not expect that, but I am so happy for it!! This chapter was everything I didn't know I needed.

Young Kagome (Chapter 7) - Tue 06 Apr 2021

Idk why I'm slightly surprised at this. I was hoping it was happening lol. Please update soon! 

aGirlCalledPablo (Chapter 7) - Tue 06 Apr 2021


*fans herself*


Borommakot (Chapter 7) - Tue 06 Apr 2021

What a delicious surprise. Vice indeed. Loved the chapter and can't wait to discover how we got here. As always, thank you for the update and I eagerly await the next. 

Nicole (Chapter 6) - Sun 04 Apr 2021

This is really good, like all of your stories always are. The tension is eating me alive! I'm always wondering when one of them is going to cross a line they can't come back from. Literally waiting on the edge of my seat; amazing job!

Borommakot (Chapter 6) - Sat 03 Apr 2021

The Ss in Sesshomaru for how smooth he is. Definitely more signs of friendship than romance/tension in this chapter. Thanks for the update and can't wait for see more!

Mecca (Chapter 6) - Sat 03 Apr 2021

I'm really liking their dynamic here, like truly good friends who can rely on each other, but there's something deeper... like Sesshoumaru making her dinner after fixing her up with a shower and clothing kind of deeper. She should call him oni-san just to rile him up lol because he is being such a good big brother xD I'm dying to know what happened with Inuyasha!

Borommakot (Chapter 5) - Thu 01 Apr 2021

Brother in law!? Cue in the drama. Something tells me your Sessh?maru is too smooth to make things awkward for walking in on Kagome but dang would I love to know his thoughts... Thanks for the update and can't wait to see what comes next. 

Crescentmoon18 (Chapter 4) - Thu 01 Apr 2021

Just wow !!! Nice work.

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