Reviews for Control by wonderbug

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Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 46) - Tue 18 Jan 2022

So many things happened in this chapter! First of all, poor Rin. Second, Miroku is a huge hypocrite, damn, in the last time he wasn't a good husband but of course, when Sango lose her baby it was Kagome’s fouls. And Kanako... Well, I never trust her.


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 45) - Tue 18 Jan 2022

Finally, someone understood how dangerous was Ren and stop him. Good for Rin, she was a clever girl.


Sophtt (Chapter 47) - Mon 17 Jan 2022

I feel so many things at the same time that i can't really pinpoint what i'm feeling...kagome through all of this made me so angry but also sad  and wanting to give her a hug and a slap. Mixed feelings lol

I'm really sorry for how things turned out but i guess she had to face the consequences for her actions. I'm only curious to what this will mean for her and sessh now that they're together again in the aftermath of it all.

Your writing is marvelous as always, thanks for the update


Young Kagome (Chapter 47) - Mon 17 Jan 2022

I can't tell if I care for Uetsugi or not. I guess I just think of him as pathetic. I wanted to like him though. I can't remember what I thought of him after his backstory. I still have mixed feelings for Kohaku! Like damn my boy not you being this childish. There's a thin line between love & hate. I want to say he's gone too far but this is pretty on par with how he's been acting. I am kinda glad Rin is getting her happy ending though? Kagome is finally leaving!!!! And WITH SESSHOMARU!!!! Bout time he made his appearance! Are we finally going to be getting some romance with them? Or some answers?? I hope it's not back to their same shit. Im getting tired of that fr. I need progress between them! Oh please update soon! 


REDWOLF (Chapter 46) - Fri 07 Jan 2022

Wow,  a lot took place in these last two chapters.  Kagome seems to be her own enemy.  Great writings  ?!


Young Kagome (Chapter 46) - Wed 05 Jan 2022

hOLY FUCK!!!!! What is happening!!!!! Chaos is reigning supreme! Too much has happened omg! Well first of all my fav Hirokin coming to the rescue is too cute. His twisted feelings for her is cute too! I didn't think he'd like her THAT much. I thought that was reserved for Sesshomaru lol. Speaking of him I hope he doesn't find out about how he's feeling! I don't want my fav to die!! "Let me kiss you, my lady," he begged her lowly. "Just the filthy hem of your coarse human robe." Lmaoooo even when begging he's insulting her! I can't with him lmao. Aaaand he exposed devious ass Kanako for the snake we all knew she was!! Finally we see what she had been scheming! I was NOT expecting this though! Killing people Kagome loves?!? I knew she'd probably try something like that with Rin but Kaede?! I didn't even think anything suspicious when Rin said that about the tea. Just shook it off as pregnancy stuffs. I don't like feeling this way but I'm def glad she's gone. Beeeeeen time for her to get. Omg what is going to happen next I CAN'T wait!!! Great job and please update soon! 


Blommie8 (Chapter 42) - Wed 15 Dec 2021

a think kohaku and kagome relation ship is really good plot. how kohaku so love kagome, this is good love Triangle. its really good story. but i still choose sesshoumaru over kohaku. 


Young Kagome (Chapter 44) - Fri 26 Nov 2021

Holyyyyy shit!!! Rin!!!!!!!!! Sweet innocent Rin I hate that she had to do that! Glad he's gone but sad she had to. Shits going down and I LOVE it!! I can't wait to see how she gets out of this omg! Where is Sango and Miroku!?!? Hate that their friendship is like this now. I wonder if the dog abandoned her for good. It'd be cute if it went to find some help. Anyways I hope you enjoyed your holiday and please update soon!! 


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 43) - Mon 08 Nov 2021

Oh no, Rin no! I'm very disappointed with Miroku. And Ren... I hope he died soon.


REDWOLF (Chapter 43) - Mon 01 Nov 2021

Sesshoumaru will end Ren, or he should.  Rin is going nuts poor girl. Wow, this fic is fantastic! I wish Kagome would find happiness!


Young Kagome (Chapter 43) - Fri 29 Oct 2021

Noooooo Rinnnnn whyyyy!!! I get why but whyyyy! I was sure Kagome would jump after he said he'll still take her, but no dice lmao. Love that she didn't. Hate that for Rin. I just noticed Ren and Rin are pronounced the same right? I wonder how they know which they're talking about. Great chapter! Please update soon! 


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 42) - Mon 18 Oct 2021

Something is definitely wrong with Kagome, I don't know what is but... She's not ok.


LovemeUsui (Chapter 42) - Tue 21 Sep 2021

Oh man this story just keeps getting better!


Young Kagome (Chapter 42) - Fri 27 Aug 2021

Ohhhh Kohakuuu! I didn't want them to fall out, I guess it's the me holding desperately to the sweet broken child. But he's no longer a child and was getting on my nerves. I still wanted them to be friends. That's wishful thinking at this point lol there's a LOT of damage between all of them. The demon in her mind thoughhhhhhhh!!! Oooh shit! Please update soon! 


Kaylah (Chapter 41) - Fri 27 Aug 2021

I am so confused with this story. Don't get me wrong, it's really good and complex, but wtf is actually going on? 

I'm trying to keep up with the storyline but it's proving difficult.

The whole Kohaku concept has me so damn confused.

Like, is Kagome imagining things now? Is he dead or alive? Is Sesshomaru really the mindless monster or is that her imagination too?  


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 41) - Wed 25 Aug 2021

Oh my...! What did they do? I'm disappointed with Kohaku but at the same time, I can't blame him cause Kagome hurt him a lot. I’ve the same feeling with Rin.


Young Kagome (Chapter 41) - Wed 11 Aug 2021

Wooo there's a bunch to unpack here!! First off Sesshomaru is getting REAL comfortable! Like who does he think he is lol. Kagome is losing it as usual, but now Ren is taking over! WTF Kohaku!!! Not poor Rin why didn't he turn her away! What if Sesshomaru finds out. Kohaku finally knows omg this is getting sooooooooooooooOOO good! My word I'm ready for someone to get rid of Kanako she irks my soul! Ole big mouth. Pleeeeease update soon! 


REDWOLF (Chapter 41) - Wed 11 Aug 2021

Kanako is a nut! Kagome needs to set that idiot ????  on the road.  She's clearly a trouble maker and wants to draw attention. Great chapter!


Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 40) - Sun 08 Aug 2021

I'm very surprised by Kagome’s attitude. Sometimes I think she's losing her control and her mind but later she seems like a superwoman.


Jyurian (Chapter 3) - Fri 18 Jun 2021

Man, this is nuts! 

I have a feeling I know where it's going based on the first chapter, but damn, how will they move past THAT? 

 

I absolutely love your writing. The style, the flow. I want to check out all of your other stuff now, too! 


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