Reviews for Control by wonderbug

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ponpiri (Chapter 26) - Tue 31 Mar 2020

Hmph. Not a fan of Kagome in this story. 26 chapters and she's still hella bitter. We get it gurl, you're shrouded in the sanctity of widowhood and holiness, now let's get on with accepting reality.

Anyway, I wonder what's going to happen with this East situation, what about the river demon and that Ren? And does Sesshoumaru mean Inuyasha's blood or his own? That's ominous as hell. & I hope you're staying safe too. Now I finally have time to catch up with the story :D

ponpiri (Chapter 25) - Tue 31 Mar 2020

Intersting. The last few paragraphs reminds me of how ridiculous hookup culture can be. Both (or more) parties want each other, but they both think they're using the other to their advantage. 

ponpiri (Chapter 21) - Tue 31 Mar 2020

It's been such a long time since I read any updates that I forgot how funny this is. interesting that monks and priests need a demonic ritual to fight demons. Ha.

Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 26) - Sat 28 Mar 2020

Damn! I love this strong Kagome, she’s so cool. Sometimes she can be mean but it’s necessary. I love how she acts with Sesshomaru and yeah, he deserves all her hate (not always, just sometimes). 

Pebbles (Chapter 26) - Wed 25 Mar 2020

"...just come to me, and let me finish you."


Seriously I'm pretty sure everytime I read that sentence I experience some sort of tick! 

Omg, I can't stand it!! This story is crazy! I know I review on your blog, but still...GOOOOOSE...BUMMMMMPS. 

susie (Chapter 26) - Sun 22 Mar 2020

wow.  just wow.

i at once love how kagome has total control over the situation, yet want her so desperately to give herself over and let him 'complete' her.

he isn't so bad, is he?  she can let him finish her...

but she loves to deny him enough to deny herself as well?  guess so.  but for how long?

love the drawn out and tortured descriptions.  this was super hot.  can't wait to read more!

Nicole (Chapter 26) - Sun 22 Mar 2020

I am never one to read dark fiction but I have DEVOURED this. It is so go and i think i want them to happen as desperately at Sesshomaru does. I wish Kagome could see that it has been about her all along. T.T i just want them to happen. I want that scene to finally come to fruition. You write so well and with so much detail that I become enraptured by your story telling. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 25) - Sun 15 Mar 2020

So… she finally loses her control. That was kinda poetic. I love this chapter; it was very good. 

LovemeUsui (Chapter 25) - Sun 08 Mar 2020

Oh man the cliffhanger ????

hana sora (Chapter 25) - Sun 08 Mar 2020

wow more sex scenes on the next chapter 

susie (Chapter 25) - Sat 07 Mar 2020

I am kind of loving the hate f*cking.

I am not usually a huge fan of dark fics, but they really seem to get a charge out of each other, don't they?

Im glad Kags is starting to give in to her attraction to him, but I like how she is determined to take control.

I think he seems to like that too, and it was cute how he admitted that he cared about her/she was important to him.

Its good to see her cutting him a little slack, and i can't wait to see what they do with each other.

I am def more interested in the scene when they are together, and even more so when they are sticking it to each other, be it literally or figuratively.  I love how desperate he is for her, and how much she wants him, despite wishing she didn't.  I am hoping they will start a having regular physical relations now.  Thanks for sharing!

Mecca (Chapter 25) - Fri 06 Mar 2020

Ooof! You're killin' me, smallz! The dark lustful, vengeful energy between Kagome and Sesshomaru is enough to light my fire. Thanks for the cliffy? Says no one ever, but I am glad Kagome brought up Sesshomaru's midnight activity and he definitely confirmed it. Gah! C'mon Kagome, stop being so stubborn and just give in! What's the harm? XD I'm sure there's plenty harm but who cares? It's Sesshomaru! And she's special to him, so I say it's a great idea to let him jump her :D Can't wait for the next installment! Sinfully delicious writing, as always. 

Pieces of mimi (Chapter 1) - Tue 25 Feb 2020

As dark as this story is I actually am in love with. It so different then the ones I'm used to. Even though sess and Kagz realtionship isn't in close dynamics to what I like see, im liking the build up. I like how submissive sess is during their private meetings, I like how he protective of her too outside of it and how you play up Kagz control. not just with him but with everyone. i love her not having to be saved all the time. I cant wait until we get to the point she isn't so hell bent and angry. even though I love her character build, all that pent up angry isn't good for anyone and has to be draining. I don't like the mermaid demon. The nerve of him to even promp Kagz like that. knowing she has "something" with sess. She isn't a harlet. does TLOTWL get jealous? I know he killed inuyasha or had something to do with it. I hope she doesn't fall for him at all. Just thinking about it makes my stomach turn. As mad as she is at sess I feel like he's always had a thing for her and shes so angry she cant see it. Even the girls that he choose before they kinda resemble her in some way or another. I hope in the end all is revealed and they can come together with a good endin. it may seem weird now to some but something beautiful can blossom for the both of them and she can have everything she ever wanted out of it if she just let herself. He definitely seems more then willing to give it to her and it's more then just a rut. She literally has TLOTWL at her disposal. sorry for the rambling, i binged this story in a few hours and im really wrapped in it. With that being said, this is a great story. youre good writer. Continue the awesome work, I'll patiently be checking my emails for a update. Thank you for all the time and effort you put into your writing, story's and fans. 


Koree (Chapter 24) - Tue 25 Feb 2020

Here comes the shit storm of a meeting . Also something tells me that we won't be seeing the last of Ren

hana sora (Chapter 24) - Sun 23 Feb 2020

this is an interesting story so far i really like the plot, please keep it update asap

Naoko Ichigo (Chapter 24) - Sun 23 Feb 2020

Oh, man! I’m in love with this story, the topic is so interesting and different. I love it. I really like this strong and decides Kagome and of course, I enjoy this dark Sesshomaru. 

Pebbles (Chapter 23) - Wed 12 Feb 2020

This is such an interesting take on a story that you would see from time to time. I can't help but read the chapters back-to-back and over and over again. Because of how you built this up, how is there going to be a peaceful resolution to this? And even if so, is that where this should go. You have done such a great job with this. I am so attached to this story.

Koree (Chapter 23) - Wed 05 Feb 2020

Well safe to say Sesshomaru is in for it when Kagome finally sees him

Eliona (Chapter 23) - Tue 04 Feb 2020

Ooh! So happy to see an update, Kagome's frustration is almost tasteable in this chapter, great job.

Carlyn (Chapter 1) - Sat 21 Dec 2019

I've already read all of this that you've written so far on your webpage and I just wanted to say this is your best work yet!! Frankly, I think this is the best piece of fanfiction I've ever read. I'm basically holding my breath waiting for you to restart after the holidays! Anyways, you've already gotten SO MANY reads on this one and it looks like you've only posted up to chapter 22! Keep it up and you just might even blow forthrights reviews out of the water with this one when you get around to posting on FF again. Keep up the good work!

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