Very good chapter. Can’t wait to see what the moms have in store for inuyasha and kikyou and what Kikyou’s mom will have to say when she finds out what kikyou did to kagome. Can’t wait for the next update
Ohhhhhhhhhh man! You are TRULY evil~! I absolutely love it!!!!! InuYasha and Kikyo are going to be shitting bricks soon enough! I can't wait for Kaiya to see what really happened to Kagome and how Sesshoumaru is helping her~ I am so excited!!!! And of course, Kaiya doesn't yet realize that it's THAT Kagome, does she~? Oh how delicious!!! I can't wait to see the look on her face when the pieces fall into place!!! Hell is going to look so fucking paltry next to her wrath!!! I can't wait to see a little woman just fucking decimating a foolish hanyou and her own bitchy daughter with that mom method that just leaves you torn apart inside but physically unhurt! I wonder if there will be begging? Begging would be amusing, but I also understand that there's a certain line of characterness that they have to stay in. Regardless, I'm always overjoyed to see your updates!
Kimmy (Chapter 13) - Sun 19 Aug 2018
Just started reading and love it. Update soon please.
Hi there! Just started reading this. I think it’s an interesting take so far, however I wanted to point out a small inconsistency. In the first chapter you mentioned that Sesshoumaru is 1117 years old, and in this chapter over 1300. I agree that the 1300 years old makes sense, given the math, but just wanted to share!
Kekee06 (Chapter 13) - Fri 17 Aug 2018
How much do I have to pay you to post like 3-5 chapters at once?
Interested to see why Kikyou is so frightening to her especially now that she has such a solid support system. But I guess that will come with more time. Deep wounds take the longest to heal. Nice update. Thanks so much.
Joecey (Chapter 13) - Fri 17 Aug 2018
Poor Kagome! I hope Inuyasha gets a good punishment!!! I look forward to seeing what's going on between Kagome and Kikyou next chapter. I hope Kagome can find her own strength in herself. Hopefully Sesshomaru can train her to fight or she can practice shooting arrows to learn how to control her emotions? Anyways, keep up the awesome work!
I have been enjoying your story. I was really glad that you showed in this chapter that Kagome is not completely better. My only constructive criticism for this story so far would be that her transition from suicidal teenager to future mate playing mom has been very fast and possibly a little too smooth.
I unfortunately have quite a bit of experience with depression and anxiety and it can take a lot of time to overcome them and there are usually setbacks here and there so I was pleased to see that captured in this chapter.
I look forward to your next update. I can hardly wait to see if Kikyo tries to do something to hurt kagome. If she is truly fueled by jealousy, landing Sesshomaru as a mate should definitely set her off.
Koree (Chapter 12) - Wed 15 Aug 2018
Geez her family really needs help :( poor Souta what will he do when his mom is down for the count
Hi, I just wanna start of by saying I love your story and thanks for updating. I felt that you could have made Kagome’s mom way worse. I don’t think she was that bad of a mom, after all her home life was bad enough that she wanted to kill herself. Maybe her mom should have grabbed and pulled her hair then cursed her. Have Sesshomaru in another room while Kagome went to get her stuff, he over hears her and her mom fighting. Not saying that you change chapter 12, maybe do an alternate ending and label it with a warming for those “soft readers” I just didn’t feel her home life was traumatizing enough for her to wanna kill herself. So when she left her old home for the last time she could sigh in relief for leaving that hard life.
Nice homecoming...how sad. But she didn’t take Buyo? She can’t leave him behind!! I’m glad Sesshomaru went with her. Thanks for updating.
Nile (Chapter 1) - Sat 04 Aug 2018
Well done so far. I like how you're keeping their relationship at a gradual pace and that Sesshoumaru is doing his best to be supportive in Kagome's recovery.
Dang...a Mean Mrs H....her mom has some issues and Souta!? Wow. What a little shit lol hopefully they’ll be a part of her life in the future but they def need help first
Got to keep her busy. Sweet update! Thanks so much. Cheers!
Loved the chapter, it was wonderful to know Kagome is coming out of her shell. I can't wait until Sesshomaru tells Izayoi and Toga about Inu Yasha and Kikyou I believe the shit will hit the fan especially when Kagome's runs into them... Its a good thing she will be getting some experience working with Sesshomaru it'll bring her out of her shell more. Update soon.
Koree (Chapter 11) - Tue 31 Jul 2018
Awwww I’m glad Kagome is in better spirits amazing chap
Deb (Chapter 11) - Tue 31 Jul 2018
Yay! You're back! I'm glad you're continuing this one but never feel pressured to update! I'm just very happy to read this when I can! I'm very interested to see how Kagome reacts to going home next time. I also wonder how Sesshomaru will be able to take it.
Smittee (Chapter 1) - Tue 10 Jul 2018
Just realized I spoke of this story, but not reveiwed this story. I am loving this! As soon as I see that update, I read it immediately! Keep up the good work, and I cannot wait for the next installment.
I really do love this story. You add a wide range of emotions together wonderfully.
Reader (Chapter 10) - Fri 06 Apr 2018
Hi Cassie!
So far so good! I have to say that I do enjoy your mastery of the English language, I couldn't have read more than one page if the spelling and grammar were off, but you are doing a great job! Sesshomaru is a bit out of character, but not terrible, and I am really looking forward to your next update! So, in short words, I will have to say that I am enjoying your story and I hope to read more soon!
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