And I agree with reina, that was my favorite line as well. I took up the states-of-matter metaphor and melted all over my chair.

My God, that was adorable, not to mention vibrantly witty and well-written, perhaps not despite but because of the late hour it was finished? I always do my best work when I'm only half coherent, which is either upsetting or provokes me to insomnia, I can't decide yet.

Your tone was sprightly, conversational and almost Bridget Jones, I'd say. A nice blend of romance, innuendo and humor. Loved it!

I love you! Seriously. You really got it -- you got exactly what real love is all about. It's loving someone for all their faults because they are theirs, not despite it. Real love is about trust and understanding your partner, sometimes better than they understand themselves.

And I love that Sesshoumaru doesn't force her into something that she doesn't want. He tries to encourage her to try something new, but backs off when she's uncomfortable.

KUDOS!

ahh this sort of piece is just the thing i needed, short, sweet and fluffy, with just a touch of humor in it. :]

i loved this line by the way, it was ADORABLE 3

"if he was ice to the world, he became vapor in her hands. "

wow u surprised me. me like.

D'AAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWW

>w!!!!!

FLUFF FIC FOR THE WIN

ESPECIALLLY BECAUSE SESSHOMARU IS SOO fluffy O_O

But I love that part in the paragraph with the horrible day at work & the ice creamm...

so sweet 3

I think my review is lame ;_;

WAAAH LITTLE BALL OF FLUFF IN THE AM HOURS!!!!!!!! XDD

Couldn't find any mistakes, but perhaps I was distracted from searching with your steady build-up of this theme and little touches of realistic sweetness (the ice cream, the movies, the inability to make coffeee XD) ^^;

Perfect ending, and I can totally see Kagome blubbering into Sesshomaru's shoulder with the 'ilus' XDD

HOW CAN YOU BE THIS COHERENT AT THE TIME YOU WROTE THIS? /quiet jealousy../

WAAAH LITTLE BALL OF FLUFF IN THE AM HOURS!!!!!!!! XDD

Couldn't find any mistakes, but perhaps I was distracted from searching with your steady build-up of this theme and little touches of realistic sweetness (the ice cream, the movies, the inability to make coffeee XD) ^^;

Perfect ending, and I can totally see Kagome blubbering into Sesshomaru's shoulder with the 'ilus' XDD

HOW CAN YOU BE THIS COHERENT AT THE TIME YOU WROTE THIS? /quiet jealousy../