love this story your doing a wonderful job so keep up the good work looking forward to whats going to happen next please update asap dying here to find out what happens next!!!!!

me so confused first she says koshi to sessy and then she meets toga and now she was posined and that never happen plz make next chapter

Thanks for the clarity.

love it, you are doing a great job. i can not wait to read the next chapter.

i like it this story no better yet i love it. I like everything about it and i can't wait till you up date

This chapter was too short. I kind of believe that you dove into her becoming part demon too fast. It would have been better to have done a description of the battle and then a traumatic moment when she falls when she is struck. You could have lengthened the transformation into a struggle- maybe were Kagome fights for control of this new personality. Or that she doesn't realize that she is changing but her friends do. Then it would be good to introduce Sesshomaru and how he realizes who she was.

love it, it is a great start, now get busy and write a few really long chapters, please. i hate teaser chapters.
ps. antaganize Inuaysha a lot please.

Huh! Interesting outcome...I'm quite curious as to the next coming events.