Wow... Somehow I completely understood it yet didn't understand it at all...if that makes any sense. Personally I feel that a sequel to this story would answer a lot more questions readers might have than a prequel, though both have their quirks. But thn again its only my opinion, you're the writer do what you think is best.
-Tenshi no Kami
studdedmisfit- Wed 14 Nov 2007
| wow first review never had that before. so anyway i love your story even if its a little too familliar... so is the little poem thing inbetween the lines a song or poem? did you write it cuz its amazing
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