Reviews for A kiss from midnight by lunareclips
Sessygurl- Tue 09 Oct 2007
Wow!
mistressbutcher@yahoo.com- Wed 05 Sep 2007
would you like me to Beta Read. This is full of errors and it makes a really good story slightly unreadable.
Meara- Sun 19 Aug 2007
Hello,
First, let me say that I'm enjoying this story. It would, however, be even better if you asked for the help of a Beta Reader. There are numerous spelling and gramatical errors that detract from the flow of the story. For example, in the description you've written "demonds" instead of demons. That error alone might make a potential reader pass your story by.
Good luck!
Meara
First, let me say that I'm enjoying this story. It would, however, be even better if you asked for the help of a Beta Reader. There are numerous spelling and gramatical errors that detract from the flow of the story. For example, in the description you've written "demonds" instead of demons. That error alone might make a potential reader pass your story by.
Good luck!
Meara
Sweet_Dark_Silence- Sat 18 Aug 2007
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wow,
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Holy $#!* !!!! Run Kagome!
Marvelous story! I eagerly look forward to more.
wow,
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Holy $#!* !!!! Run Kagome!
Marvelous story! I eagerly look forward to more.
K,T,M- Fri 10 Aug 2007
dat was good please update really soon
BeautifulDeception09- Wed 08 Aug 2007
Me Like ... Cool And Interesting Plot Idea ... Update Soon!