Reviews for The Awakening of the Sleeping Love by eternallove_495
Heather- Sun 12 Aug 2007
This story sounds really good so far. Glad you updated to another chapter. I'm really interested in finding out why Kagome was found in the trash with only bandages covering her. Update soon^_^
lovelywitch- Fri 10 Aug 2007
Umh, I didn't read the manga Chii and I only watch the 1st eps of the anime so I won't comment on how similar or different your story is to those. I really like this story, it's slow and peaceful, I guess. However, there is one problem: nee chan means sis, nii chan means bro. Just thought that you would like to know
bridget_king11- Fri 22 Jun 2007
i love it i relly love it and i relly hope that u finesh it
kookookitty- Mon 18 Jun 2007
it is very interesting.
i am curious, english is not your native language is it?
thank you,
ginny
i am curious, english is not your native language is it?
thank you,
ginny
Sweet_Dark_Silence- Fri 15 Jun 2007
Nnnnnnnnnnooooooooo! You wouldn't be that cruel, would you?
*looks with big puppy eyes*
I like it, has a few grammar errors though.
*looks with big puppy eyes*
I like it, has a few grammar errors though.
Patricia- Fri 15 Jun 2007
sounds like it could be a good story so far!... but your english is a little fractured so you could ready use a beta. it wouls make the story much better ^-^
annemarie18- Fri 15 Jun 2007
this is a giid start for ur story your only missing the next chapter :) so update asap :)
Nikimo1- Thu 14 Jun 2007
It was ok, but you put way to many commas where the periods should have been. Other than that, it was ok.
Nikimo1- Thu 14 Jun 2007
It was ok, but you put way to many commas where the periods should have been. Other than that, it was ok.
Melissa- Wed 13 Jun 2007
Great job on your first chapter but there were a few spelling mistakes.
Keep going b/c the story is good.
Keep going b/c the story is good.
ShadowChick- Tue 12 Jun 2007
it's awesome plz update
ShadowChick- Tue 12 Jun 2007
it's awesome plz update
ShadowChick- Tue 12 Jun 2007
it's awesome plz update
ShadowChick- Tue 12 Jun 2007
it's awesome plz update
Dani- Mon 11 Jun 2007
dude.. I love it. it might be cuz I love chobits tho... oh well can't wait for the next chapter. does move quick tho