Are are, CHOTTO MATTE!! This leaves much to be desired! Finish it or I will sic my muse on you!!!

You can't stop there! This is too good to stop!!!!

Oh! you cant stop there! i want to know what the prohecy was was that guy at the end the one that was flirting with the harpist sasshomaru or some other dude that is cursed with the prophecy. and what happened to kagome did she have all 8 pups or did she only have a few did she die at child birth. the story was really sad but i loved it you have to make a sequal or your just plain cruel. no seriously i have been thinking about this story for 2 days and i cant get it out of my head so please put me out of my misery and give us an ending please *on knees beging* please

Oh my god! That was so sad and lyric. I love it! 3 please continue!

I like the story, it is rather poetic in itself, but I want to know what the prophecy was! LOL. It's a sad story, though...but it was very well written.

UH! That made no sense but it was REALLY good. Great job.

now you've gone and made me want to read more.
its like a big cliffy