For a first story, you're doing an excellent job. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks you guys for leaving me comments
Im sorry it took me so long to respond to you
Im trying to update as soon as I can
but right now im BURIED in homework and chores
ill make sure to start writing the next chapter tonite

I just read your first 3 chapters and I am really enjoying reading this story. I was disappointed when I didn't have any more chapters to read. I look forward to reading your next chapter.

Its great so far I love it already, but its short so I don't beileve people will take to it when its really just an intro right now. Sooo please write more I can't wait so much that its burning me.

That was awesome!!!! Please write more soon!!!!!