Aww, that was soooo sweet! ^_^ I'm soo glad that Sesshomaru came back for her! Awwww! ^_^ Great chapter, I can't WAIT for the next chapter to come out! ^_^
Rachel- Tue 28 Nov 2006
This was an awesome fic. I noticed your ratings were very low... Don't worry about it, I'm sure it's because no one can fallow because there is very little coversation between the characters and alot of people can't understand that.
Keep up the good work.
Oh, I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^ Please update this story soon! It's a beautiful story, and it has a very unique writing style to it. I love it! ^_^
Another beautiful chapter. Some of it is really deep...almost too deep to understand. But I think I do. Keep up the great writing! ^_^
Wow, this is amazing. Totally unlike anything I've ever read before! I love the way you wrote it....it makes me read it all the more closer, to understand. I love the way the sentences flow...poetic, in a way. Beautiful writing....I can't wait to read more of it! ^_^
Skeeze- Thu 23 Nov 2006
Honestly, most of your sentences make no sense and have caused me to stop reading after the first chapter.
You might want to get a beta reader.
dana jean- Thu 23 Nov 2006
I think this is good- the short, choppy sentences mixed with the long ones make me read it closer.
good job!
butterflychan- Wed 22 Nov 2006
Beautiful, wonderful, I still love this story. Patiently awaiting what's next.
Yumi Tenshi- Tue 21 Nov 2006
interesting new chapter, but I still love it! Please continue to at least try and write new chapters! thanks
This was a very nice story. It seems like it could end on any chapter; it shouldn't be taken for granted. I enjoyed it very much. Good luck.
YUKI
butterflychan- Sun 19 Nov 2006
I'm so glad to see a new chapter. Really, this is truly amazing! I'm SO going to review every chapter, just in hopes that it will spur you along! -lol-
Yumi Tenshi- Sun 19 Nov 2006
OMG!! Just wonderful, beautiful, everything is just amazing, I hope you write more... i love it
butterflychan- Sat 18 Nov 2006
This was amazing. Truly inspired and inspiring. I loved it!
Shadow's Angel- Sat 18 Nov 2006
this is adorable plz update soon
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