wow this is pretty good ^^ keep up the good work okay!
FatalSeduction- Mon 12 Jun 2006
I absolutely love it. Wonderful start! Keep up the good work...I can't wait to see what happens!
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Silverstar871- Mon 12 Jun 2006
Wow! Awesome plot you have here! Really good! You had me gripping the edges of my seat there.....I can't wait for more!! Keep up the marvelous work! I'm loving it!
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Silverstar871
swtdrm01- Mon 12 Jun 2006
I hope you do put up the next chapter. I'm interested on where this story is heading to. I can tell with some creativity, which I know you have great creativity from what I've read so far, this story can become a great story.
This is an awesome story. Please UPDATE SOON!!!!
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slickygirlj- Mon 12 Jun 2006
I do not usually write reviews. So please bare with me. I found myself yelling at the computer when I discovered ther was only one chapter up. I was left wanting MORE. I have been checking for a new chapter several times everyday since I read it. It is the most creative one I have read in a while. Please do not give up on this story.
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