heyyz, i really like your story. it is so sweet... tho i must say i get confused at times but hey, ish me so its normal right? Wait, you wouldnt know that since you dont know who i am... ha ha. Anyways, luv ur story, update soon plz. 3

That was really very good and almost unexpected. Luckily for you college kept me busy for a while so I didn't mind the time between updates! :D Don't worry, I got an A on the test anyway. Perhaps your fan fiction is secretly teaching me as I read it all. Wouldn't that come in handy during finals? In this chapter I hope our favorite monk wakes up soon, but I'm glad Kagome got her emotions out, even is Sess had to edure the firing squad from her. It was funny when he mentioned her being Fertile. I was almost expecting more to come from that! Update soon plox? :D

Wonderful. I loved it. This is probably the best fanfic I have ever read, and trust me, I'm a tough critic. Everything happens so naturally and absolutely nothing is rushed, leaving the reader ample time to enjoy the fic. Not one person was out of character and even the made up characters seemed to fit perfectly into the gang's lives. Your language and diction does justice to each character and your narration. Please, please, please continue. You're doing a wonderful job.

Hi ^_^

I liked your fic a lot... Yes I did!! I know I'm not being of any help right now but well... I had to say it anyway ^_^

Sesshoumaru is often OOC in SessKag fics, but you seemed to grasp his personality well enough. And I can understand why you wait for them to fall for each other, it's much more logical if you consider their past encounters.

In fact, I quite appreciate the way you describe each other's POV, how the relationship evoluates, little by little.

So, thanks a lot for the good time I had heading this fic. I look forward to the next chapter... Even if I don't know how to know when you will eventually update (I'll look for your FFnet account... ;) )

dewa mata

Hikari Hime

I'm going to try and remember to watch for this one.

Yayyyyy!!!! Awesome story and plot.....looking forward to the next update:) Keep writing......Much love:)

MidnightStar

Wow that was a really great chapter. I just started reading your great story last night and really the whole thing is very good. I particularly like how real it seems. What your writing makes sense, a lot of it. It's not like any of those fairy tale fanfictions where everything works out perfectly and everyone is happy and falls in love. But at the same time your story has joy in it. I really am enjoying it. The scene where Sess and Kagome were meditating was particularly funny with Miroku's statement. I hope you update soon! Really You sorta owe me one, cause instead of studying for a test, I was reading your story!

I normally don't review many fanfics, but I had to tell you how much I've enjoyed this story. I'm always thrilled to see that you've updated. I've really liked how you've kept Sesshoumaru especially in character. I get annoyed with how some stories take him from ice cold to warm and mushy in the space of 2 chapters or less. And while I love lemons as much as the next person, throwing one in now would kind of ruin the plot that you've built so far. Though I must say, I'm a bit jittery over the fact I have to wait to find out the meaning behind the very first chapter - with the person with silver eyes, etc. Anyway, enough of my babbling, and I look forward to reading more. Well done!

I absolutely loved this chapter. I laughed throughout most of it. Sesshoumaru's thoughts were preciously funny regarding them, especially Kagome. And their verbal sparing was hilarious. You showed in this chapter his patience and humor. I agree with you. It is too early for them to have sex. They're just now getting to the phase of showing an interest in each other as something other than "doctor/patient". I'm glad you have him training her in other areas. I am anxious, though, for him to get his arm back. I have to admit that I have never liked the fact that his arm was taken from him in the anime, but was glad he got it back in the manga.

Many thanks for your writings, So far I have enjoyed your story, and am always pleasantly surprised when my favourite authors update(have run into many who just give up in the middle of a potentialy good story)
Fubuki

i really loved this chapter. i can't wait to see what happens with kags and sessh. plz update soon.

Thank you for the update and for letting us know your school schedule may interfere with regular updates. As much as I like this story, school comes first. So I will just be patient. At first, I thought the voices might try to harm her in some way, but now they seem almost childish. A child with wisdom, though. It would really be nice if they could help train her. Now if she will just seriously listen to these Shikon voices. Who better to have the knowledge. Were they the ones that effected Kikyou in the previous chapter? Maybe somehow they were trying to take back the rest of Kagome's soul. I may be wrong but that's what it seemed to me. Ah ha! Shiori + Inuyasha = a pair. I know he was taken with her as a child and she him. Well, she's not a child any longer. It seems maybe something is beginning to spark between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Yahoo, it's about time! I'm getting impatient for him to get his arm back. I wonder why they let it go so long in the anime but soon returned it in the manga. He got a new sword with that arm, too. I guess I'm more a fan of a two-armed Sesshoumaru. I've read many different ways that he gets his arm back. I wonder what you have in mind. Guess I'll just have to wait and see. No one can accuse me of being a one-liner reviewer. I don't know when to shut up and my reviews seem like a book. Best of luck in school and update when you can.

Sorry I'm a one liner kinda girl....I'm a biology teacher sooo not real good at anything but cold hard facts although I can make one mean hypothesis when need be that's kinda like creative writing in a way, sorta not really. Ohh and reallll bad grammar don't tell my students. haha Anyhow love it keep up the good work.

This is an incredible story and I can't wait to read more of it! I loved how you integrated physical therapy into the past, it was very interesting, especially the person who was administering it!

I could just picture Nezumi's actions as he's walking with the group through the forest and the interaction with Kirara. hehehe! You're rightl. I forgot about Nezumi pledging his life to Kagome. I have a feeling that somehow he will play a larger role in her life. I'd like to know more of Kagome's inner thoughts about Sesshoumaru. Maybe thinking back about how physically intimate he had to get with her body as her "therapyst". I'm anxious to learn more about these new inner voices. I hope she's not going to go psycho on us for awhile. If so, then Sesshoumaru will have to return as her psychologist! hahaha!

Love it!!! More please! :)

I'm enjoying this story quite a bit - especially the interactions between Kagome and Sesshoumaru, of course. I quite like how you're writing Sesshoumaru; his complexity here makes him absolutely fascinating. And Nezumi is just *adorable*.

I definitely look forward to seeing where this story goes!

*sigh* and here after the last chapter i was expecting a new closeness between kagome and sesshomaru only to have to deal with Naraku. You're mean! but you did a great job making him creepy,lol. I liked him calling Kagura Little Wind. I cant wait for the next one.

I'm greatly enjoying the story so far :) My favorite part was when Sesshomaru told Kagome to be quiet...then got annoyed when she stayed quiet XD I laughed...I've done the same! I look forward to seeing more very soon :)

I am really enjoying this fanfic, I think you're doing a wonderful job with the characters; keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more!

This is such a wonderful complete storyline. I really enjoy the fact it doen't wonder all over the place. I eagerly await each update. Thank you for sharing your vision.

Sincerely,
Sonja P

Thank you for the update even though as you said it was short. But it let us know that Naraku must be planning something big and I bet it has to do with Kagome. I just hope she's able to recover more and get around a little better. Because if she's ever captured by an enemy, they won't care that she's partially an invalid. I'm also anxious for Sess to get his arm back. I like it better when he has both arms. In the previous chapter, Sess talked as though he plans to be involved in a life long therapy program with Kagome. So, does that mean he's taken her on as a responsibility for the rest of her life? Of course, I really want them to mate and for Kagome to take on his long life. I can only dream for them. Let's see what you have in store for them.

Hummm, I liked that much better than 'blah'.

The plot of this story is unique. I like unique. The idea of Sess being her "doctor" and "physical therapist" is what makes it unique. Four more days and it will have been a month since your last update. PLEASE GIVE US AN UPDATE OR AT LEAST AN A/N.

You have just so got to update and soon. Perhaps as you work on the doll houses, you can use a magnifying glass to write the next chapter into a very small book for the house, while getting it ready for updating here. LOL! The mystery and intrigue just get deeper and deeper.

I hope u plan to update soon. I like this story line so far. Your discription of Sess is really different. Please add more, it's been a great read.

Nice indulgence. Oncor! Oncor! More! More! Ok...when is the next update...this is certainly fleshing out well...(Damn invasive puns)...Looking forward to the next update, which I hope is soon.

I am so in love with this story; Thanks for updating!

Please update soon!!!

I really enjoyed this chapter. Interesting...the jewel can be called back into her body. I wonder, though, if his 'red eye' moment was because he was called to replace a threat, or for some other, more...interesting...reason. Heh. One can only wish!

Good for you! It is when an author writes for themselves that they truly do the best. It is then that the stories come from the heart, and when they do, it is not only the readers that benefit, but the author as well.

Please update soon. Each chapter is another piece to the puzzle and adds more to the intrigue that you are building in this tale. In the long run, I think that the additional information will make for a much better story, and a much more interesting plot.

Welll, Chapters one thru five are great......but
i find six thru ten lacking in....content lol. Seriously really like it so far I hope you update soon ummm and not just "Blah".

You are most welcome. I have to admit that when I saw the changes to your original posting, I was a little reluctant to read the repost of this fic. But to be quite honest, I am glad that you have changed the story a bit. The added information is working out very well, and making the story even better than before. Please update soon, I look forward to the next chapter with baited breath.

Wow..I am very intrigued with your story so far. The writing is solid and compelling. And your plot seems well thought out and completely unique! I so look forward to more chapters, and of course a happy ending!!! lol. And really don't worry about not knowing everything in the Inuyasha universe, your story is good enough to stand up on it's own merit, and if you choose to take artistic license with some facts then go for it, the story so far is really wonderful.

Please update soon. The changes are unexpected, and yet offer a most interesting tale. Also, Inuyasha's sword is actually spelled 'Tetsusaiga' or 'Tessaiga'. Sesshoumaru's is 'Tenseiga'.

I am very glad to see that you are posting your story back up on the site. I look forward to your continuing the fic.

Just a note: "Kagome whirled around at the voice of her most hated enemy and almost cringed at the sight of the bamboo pelt." LOL! Naraku does not wear a 'bamboo' pelt. Especially as bamboo is a plant, not a pelt. He actually wears a 'baboon' pelt. Just thought you might want to know.

man, so good! Haha, okay, so I've decided that having the 'next xhapter' button there when there really isn't another chapter is a horrible thing. ^_^ haha, no, okay, but I really like this story so far and I can't wait for more. Your descriptions are great and you have a talent for dragging people into your written world. Please update soon!

hey waaaahappened? where'd the story go?

First off, I am sorry to see you have deleted your story. I hope that you repost it, and soon.

Regarding one of the last reviews that you received, the information given is not correct. It is NOT stated in the manga that Kagome is the reincarnation of Midoriko, and not Kikyou. The chapter being cited is where Kikyou uses one of her soul stealers to steal a part of Midoriko's soul from the cave where the jewel was born. This in and of itself shows that her soul was divided into at least three parts. One part still guards the cave, and another of the three parts is in the jewel. Once she had absorbed the bit of Midoriko's soul, Kikyou could hear it speaking to her, and it told her that they shared (Kikyou and Midoriko) the same soul. As it has been repeatedly stated throughout the series that Kagome is Kikyou's reincarnation, it only stands to reason that she ALSO would be a reincarnation of Midoriko's. This accounts for the third piece of the soul. It is what is passing from one reincarnation to the next every time it is reborn.

NO WHERE does it say that Kagome is NOT Kikyou's reincarnation.

If you choose to use this information in your fic, that is your decision, and no one else's. I merely point this out, as this was a very good story, and no one has the right to tell you what to put into it, or to leave out. You write the fic, because it is what YOU want to do. We the readers who enjoy your work, are privileged to be able to read such good work. That does not give us the right to tell you how you should write, or what you should write. Write your story, because that is what YOU want to do, and because you find pleasure in it. It means that your work will be from the heart, where it counts the most, and not from someone telling you what you should write about.

Sincerely,
Fred

Alright, i know this is your fan fic, but i just want to give you a little info. Kagome is infact not Kikyou's reincarnation, she is Midoriko's. it is mentioned in the manga, that it is a possibility. I just wanted you to know that's who she's really the reincarnantion of. That is also why she is stronger than Kikyou.

Hurray! I'm glad you're better now.

Congratulations on being depression-free; I sincerely hope you stay that way. I can't wait to see what comes next :)

I really love your writing style! Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what happens next... Merry Christmas and have a Happy New Year!

I love how angsty this story is!! But I was wondering if there is going to be any kind of romantic relationship between Sesshoumaru and Kagome or is Sesshy going to remain the cold-hearted bastard throughout the entire story?

I have "Mythology," too.

I think I enjoyed your retelling better than the usual versions I hear.


Great chapter

lol loved the new chapter!!! can't wait to read the next one so get a move on will ya? update soon.

I don't think you screwed Sesshoumaru's mother up, She seemed heartless in the manga and then had a change of heart about rin's life. Because Rin makes Sesshoumaru happy

I have to admit that I am extremely curious as to what Sesshomaru has planned. He seems a bit sadistic, but at the same time caring of Kagome. I suppose there's nothing to it, except to wait for your next update.. so please hurry! LOL! Nice job!

why would she thinks it's naraku.. isn't he gone... that's how miroku lost his life right.. in the defeat of naraku, no.. i'm a little disappointed about the chap.. it was too much of sango and yasha interaction and not enough of kag's interaction with her captors... until next time

Regard you kindly eh? Oh course I will regard you greatly. That last chapter hit the spot.....I can't wai't to see more of what you have planed for Kagome and sephy-kun.
I have nothing bad to say for the moment I mean I wait till the very end to crite a person, seeing as I'm an artist waiting to see the final peice.
Your loving fan
Tori

how very interesting. i like it. though, the way it was set up at the end, i think that kagome will be able to figure out who it is. how many piwerful, naraku-hating demons does she know? good job though.

Fabulous story.

WoW! I hope you UPDATE SOON! I just started reading this chapter and I really like it!

totally awesome chapter! I love it and can't wait to read more. Hopefully this time you won't take so long updateing(hint hint XD) update soon.

Oh man I'm soooo sucked into this story you have to update soon!

sweet story so far updaet soon eh

I love your story. I can't wait to see how Kagome reacts when she wakes up! Please update soon!!!

kick ass man come one more more

I'm a little confused about the plot but non the less its a good story. Update soon.

Nice update. It's really good. Can't wait to see what happens next if you'd like feedback email me next time.

Noooo!!! It's been soooooo long to just end there!!! T.T I hope the next update is soon and... action packed! ^.^ Update update update!!!!

No flames, I only ask for an update. ^_^ But whenever you can will do I would just like to see more of this story progress.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

please update soon! i really want to know what happens!!

AH-HA! I understand the correlation between the Psyche and Eros Myth and this FanFiction are! At first I thought man I haven't read that one in a while... good times... What does that have to do with this? Now i understand and thank you for updating! I'd also like to tell you i feel so much smart now that things have been cleared up. Thank you I think i can take on the world (That's right! I'm coming for you, world!!) Anyway, Hope the next update is up soon! ^.^

"Study" like she's a frog he's going to disect in science class. Erg, I hated that lab. I had to diesct a cow fetus instead of a frog, though. Hmm. If not for preservatives, Sesshou would probably have found that to be a tasty snack.

Poor Kagome, not knowing she's going to get shipped off to Sesshou every so often. ...Then again, maybe it's not so much "poor Kagome" seeing the rating on this fic. She'll enjoy herself. Doubtless.

O_o Sesshoumaru is one twisted individual. We all knew that, of course, but you take his twistedness and make it even more twisted. I like it. A lot.

Odd, but I almost like Inu Yasha in this fanfic. No, I like him most of the time, and I'm thrilled that you haven't painted him as two-timing jackass who has a closet necrophilia fetish. And I'm liking his comment about Sesshou being spawned from Satan. Probably true, but even so.

O_O Shit. Sesshou's mom is a total bitch, and not in the doggy sense of the world. Wow. And you definitely got across the whole Sesshou-hating-mother-more-than-brother thing. I always thought they didn't hate each other nearly as much as they attested.

I apologize for the over-use of the word "creepy." I shall avoid it throughout this review as much as I possibly can.

So Kagome seriously messed up her back falling down the well, eh? That really, really sucks. My back is crappy, too, so I understand how she feels.

You killed Miroku? But... but... But life goes on. I shall be bitter about this for quite some time, but life goes on. *bitter* Hey, look. Inu got knocked out. I wonder if I should feel sorry for him...

I admire your ability to write long chunks of descriptive text. I've always had this huge block about it, and so I love you for your ability to do it, and do it well.

Naraku is creepy. You write him well. And you've made him very creepy. As well he should be, but wow. He's like... Burger King's King creepy. And that's really creepy.

I love the scene with Kikyou and Kagome's mom. That was... it was creepy, but in a very nifty sort of way. Is Kagome really the name of a child's song?

I have decided that a good way to spend my time would be in reviewing each chapter of this story. So that's what I'm going to do.

I had to read "Mythology" too! I loved it to death! ...You know, looking back on the story of Eros and Psyche, I'm reminded of a fairytale I once read. And now I can't remember what it's called. I want to say "East of the Sun and West of the Moon" but I think that's wrong.

Anyway, spiffy prolog. I can't wait to see how it fits in with everything else that will be written.

-=SQUEE!!!=- -=huggles you=- this is really good....and very VERY unique...YAY FOR UNIQUENESS!!!...-=giggle=- i'm silly....i just graduated too so i'm in party mode with no parties to go to till the weekend -=sigh=-

anyways...-=bookmarks the fic=- its weawwy WEAWWY good....cant wait for the next chapy -=huggles=- update soon?

First of all, I love the Greek myth about Psyche. Second, you're going to update soon because I love where this is going and... Uhm, you graduated so you have time. Please? I promise to regard you kindly.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

This has an interesting plot... I can't wait for the next chapter.
keep up the good work!