But other than spelling mistakes, by the way, this is a good idea for a fanfic. Characters have been played out pretty well. :) But just check out the Beta section and you should be fine. ^_^

If you have been using Microsoft word then words such as "Stealing" notice the A and not a second E, would be spelled correctly. :( Dame desu yo! Anyways there is a beta section if you look in the Fanfiction section of A single spark you'll see it. There you can ask someone to beta for you. :) Goodluck!

When are you going to update this fic. It was really good please countinue!

I really hope that you update this story soon! I always come back to read the fisst two chapters. I really want to know what happens next!

I really ike this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

wow your story is really good please keep writing more and e-mail me when you are done okay? oh and i also speak another language other than english... which is spanish... if you need help you knowi can do it!!!