OMG!!!!! I love this story. I was so good!!! I love how you kept the characters "in character." I also love the fact that you did not go into detail about her short life and his long life and what would happen to them. It is different. One does not even bother caring about that, by the way you wrote the story.

I finally read the ending, and it was beautiful. I ment to read it when you posted it, but lost tract of the fic. I have to say this was definately a favorite of mine, and I'll probably reread it many times.

great fic

great fic

This is my absolute most favorite fanfiction ever. I loved every single word. You are a brilliant author.

I love this story. It is so touching and enlightening. It makes one think about things that you would not really care to think about.

This fic really moved me in a way that no fic has done in a long time. I couldn't stop reading once I started, only taking breaks for food and sleep. I like the memory snippets from the young Sesshoumaru that we never knew about. How he was shaped by his uncle to the man he became. I love every little detail you put into the story, like the way his jaw moved before he talked, how he discussed psychological things with Kagome, how he for once was an open person, without for that matter being OOC.
The only, and I really mean only, thing that I wanted different with this fic was the ending. I wanted a few more hundred words for closure. I wanted to see them finally getting together, and of course, I'd love to know what happened afterwards. But that's not as necessary. The ending was cut a little short in my opinion, seeing as they were in the middle of something. And this is not because I'm a hentai or anything. ;)
I will recommend this fic to others on my Inuyasha fansite, because it really deserves to be read. Thanks for two days of amazing reading!

My hopes of being a gr8 writer has gone down seeing wot i have in mind is nothing compared to this amazing, well thought out fic

I love how u've included psychology and how u managed to create Sesshomaru's thoughts on the modern world - it really made Sesshomaru seem so much more real than simply an anime character

Thank u for writing sumtin so worthwile to read

There is no words to fully describe how wonderful this story was. I cryed, laugh, cryed, smile... went through all the emotions with this fic. I never had a story do that to me. I love how in-depth you went with Sess's character and the relationship. I love how it made me think and beauty that lies in your writing. I never had a story that made me feel so much to make me cry by the love between two characters. I feel Sess and Kag was in character which made the development between them real. It motivates me to find a love like them in my life. I LOVE IT!!! BEST STORY OF ALL TIME!!!

There is no words to fully describe how wonderful this story was. I cryed, laugh, cryed, smile... went through all the emotions with this fic. I never had a story do that to me. I love how in-depth you went with Sess's character and the relationship. I love how it made me think and beauty that lies in your writing. I never had a story that made me feel so much to make me cry by the love between two characters. I feel Sess and Kag was in character which made the development between them real. It motivates me to find a love like them in my life. I LOVE IT!!! BEST STORY OF ALL TIME!!!

i just finished reading this last night. i was too tired to review it.
but i will tell you that this was the best fanfic i have ever read in my entire life.
it was impeccably written.
i swear if you just changed the names you could sell this as your own book.
it made me cry in certain spots and its very hard to make me cry reading these.
and you made me laugh.
you made me feel so many emotions while reading this...probably ones that i havent faced in month due a certain someone.
you also made me think about it.
you made me think.
you are a very talented writer to make me think while reading it.
and made me excited after reading it cuz i wanted to talk about it someone.
you should seriously write books.
i would read them.
job well done.
the best sesshomaru description for being who he is and how.
very original and i dont think that i can give anymore praises cuz i cant think of anymore right now.
but now you have something to live up to when you write another fic that will have a similar mood to this one.

Kyaaa!! I would give a constructive and insightful review...but this was just too good to fit into words ^__^

That was so awesome! I think I'm gonna cry! I totally loved the ending!

Holy Crap! What a great story!

Moving, deeply moving, but not deep. I did love all the in-depth analysis of Kagome, everyone always focuses just on Sesshoumaru. It's refreshing to hear about a heroine rather than the beautiful man,er, demon.

The timeline was two forever circling lines, each eating the tail of the other to eventually become one ring. Like they each had to create each other--very hard to accomplish, but you did it!

This story made me stop and think and wonder on how my memories and experiences have made me who I am and who I will become.

I remember reading this right after it was first posted and thinking "Wow, this story has come so far." After seeing it won an award I wanted to re-vist it and just say I loved this fic. It was beautiful and really matured and progressed throughout. I really appriciated the color motif. The prevelent theme of personality and its formation was so concise. I've read some of your other work and I feel this is your best work by far. I hope you will continue to gift us with your talent.

Girl, that was some damned fine writing. I hate to see it end, but I have to admit that I was looking forward to them coming together. You did it perfectly. It was a beautiful moment. Sesshomaru was so much a part of her life and she never knew. It was very moving. I also enjoyed the comment that he was finally going to have something that his brother should have had. I doubt Inuyasha would have found the humor in that, but I did. I really enjoyed the whole story. Your writing has really evolved through Temporal Sequence and you have a right to be proud of your work. This was a wonderful read. It will always be among my personal favorites. I look forward to seeing what you come up with next. Thank you for providing us all with stories that are challenging, interesting and always well written.

That was so beautiful that I'm actually tearing up right now... Man, you've ruined me for life! I'll never fall in love because no one will ever live up to his character! Beautiful story that was well written, and totally deserving of straight tens...

Congratulations! Woohoo! I could not be happier. CONGRATS CONGRATS CONGRATS totally well deserved. Best Angst/Drama!

omg there is no other way to describe your writing but amazing. absoultly amazing. the protral of your characters is amazing. your ideas are amaziing. the way you toped all my expectations is amazing. im looking forward to more of ur amazing storys ^-^(even tho i am sad this one is done). i voted for u in the singlespark awards and i want to see who could hav possibly toped you in iyfg for portrayal of seeshomaru.

omg there is no other way to describe your writing but amazing. absoultly amazing. the protral of your characters is amazing. your ideas are amaziing. the way you toped all my expectations is amazing. im looking forward to more of ur amazing storys ^-^(even tho i am sad this one is done). i voted for u in the singlespark awards and i want to see who could hav possibly toped you in iyfg for portrayal of seeshomaru.

I feel so reluctant to admit that this story is now over. It's hard to let go, when this story has passed me so much thoughts and made me cry countless times. The complexity of the themes in this story and the elegance of how they are expressed has captivated me, and not to mention everyone else who read this. I'm elated and yet sorry that this story has finished. Thank you for writing such a memorable piece.

you break my heart and then heal it with this story. excuse me, i gotta cry now.

oh my god!!! it's done!? wow...it'll be weird not expecting an update from this fic. but i have enjoyed the ride. i really enjoyed the epilogue and i liked how everything turned out. although i'm a little iffy about the whole hair grabbing scenes. maybe it's just me (considering i have not so short hair). but overall i liked how sesshoumaru was summarized at the end. it was so simple when you read it but at the same time it so complicated considering who we're talking about. anywayz, i'm gonna miss this fic. and i'm happy things ended well. i'm looking forward to any new projects you have up your sleeve and updating your other fic *wink* *wink* *nudge* *nudge* ^_- lol oh and i didn't mind the long wait for the update. trust me, i understand about life getting in the way of what you wanna do. it can be frustrating. take care and i'll be here for any of your fic!

I love it. The beginning, the middle, and especially the end... all are so very beautiful and touching. You are awesome for persevering to finish this story and you didn't close the last chapter in a sloppy way but rather in a heart-felt way. Thank you so much~!

I think this story was one of the most amazing ones I have ever read. I have been waiting forever for this last chapter and it met my expectations and more. I absolutely loathe authors who use the last chapter and make it a bunch of meaningless stuff to tie it together without much thought. But you made it wonderful and visionary. Truely something worth waiting for.

I like that you didn't totally fall back on smut for your conclusion (just a little citrus). I do like that youfell back on Sesshoumaru's power and Kagome's acquiessence to and fear of that power. I was surprised that he never told her that he restored her life with Tensaiga. I think I liked that too, that it's kind of a secret for your readers and not for Kagome. The act stands by itself. (if that makes any sense)

I am sorry to hear of your troubles. I was tempted many times to e-mail you and ask how you were doing. It seemed to me that with the end of your story so near, only something that was trouble would keep you from it. I didn't want to add to any burden you were already bearing.

This is the first chance I have had to read the epilogue. My e-mail server has been down since Saturday and only began working this morning. Thank you so much for your story. It kept me wondering what would happen next each time I read a chapter. It's been a wonderful read.

Wow...that was just so incredibly moving and wonderful, and fantastic and, and, and...I cannot seem to find the words to explain just how deeply I was touched by your story. You are truly, truly gifted. And the words of your story are still swirling in my mind...It is a story that will continue to haunt me long after the final words were written. And that my dear, is a wonderful thing. Only truly great works can do that to me and I count this story to be one of those. I will read this story again and again. Thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination and your amazing talent of weaving mere words into art. I am sorry to see the end of this story, but still so glad that you ended it as you did. Your tale was simply breath taking... I will look forward to (hopefully) seeing more work from you! Good luck to you in both life and love...

Oh my God. I'm crying and can't stop. I have to say this was the most beautiful story I've ever read. There is NO WAY anyone can ever top this piece of art. It was so...I can't even have words to describe it. I truly love this story. Perfect! And I want to thank you for sharing it with us,the readers. Thank you. ;_; :)

This was so perfect! I loved how the story ended. I'm glad they finally got to be with each other.

I just finished this wonderful fanfiction you've wrote, and I must say that the end was worth the wait. This whole story was great! Please keep writing. I look forward to reading more of your works.

i havent read the final chapter yet, but i just wanted to tell you that i have been looking forward to this like forever!! your fic is amazing, i believe it is one of my favorites, if not my actual favorite of all the fics that i have read. so i hope its a good ending. your a good writer, keep it up. i'll be looking for other stuff that you'll write!!

The wait was totally worth it for this last chapter. I literally was brought to tears with how beautifully it was written. The way you summed it all up and made Sesshoumaru finally say the things he did was amazing! "You ARE the color amongst the gray". Wow....thank you so much for a wonderful story. I am going to miss the anticipation!!

Very good ending... ive been following this story since the begining... and i must say this was very entertaining... cant wait for the next story you come up with... until later

Simply outstanding!! I can't express how I feel. I am too busy crying. This was just so wonderful.
I'll email you later-I'm too overcome with emotions.

Oh Yin and Yang of it all…

A more perfect interpretation of these two complimentary opposites could not be better had than Kagome and Sesshoumaru…right down to the moment of their re-union at his front door…his very presence…the rustle of her skirt….and the intense heat…to her meandering mood…to their eternal…seeming dance.

I have to tell you, I am spectacularly proud of you. Profoundly so. Last night I took the time to print all 23 pages of the Epilogue, and took it upstairs to bed for a reverent read. My Scottie was quite perplexed as the lights were still on post 1am and, I had an early morning meeting.

I sat there on the bed lotus style with wine in hand and read, some paragraphs more than once, sometimes so totally enthralled with your deft skilled musical word play. Yes, on occasion, I did become choked up, but always within the foggy haze that was my very happy mind, lay a smile. You are a writer.

You did yourself proud, you completed the journey, and you gave me the feeling few authors do when dealing especially with former Lord of the Western Lands, you allowed him not just stoicism, but actual sadness. Where all concerned he is the winner to his half brothers overall perception of loser. It is not so, InuYasha WAS given loyalty and love, not from fear of reprisal, but of its true form. Not so Sesshoumaru. Stoicism, can often mask deep hurt, and unrequitedness, it takes REAL strength to love and bottled emotions carry with them a heavy weight. Can you imagine what it would take…to play with Fate with one goal in mind…out of love…not an abstract concept at all.

You did a marvelous job of exercising, as much as can be done in an epilogue, quite a few demons and you gave both parties redemption, love, completion and acceptance and colour.

So it ends, as it should…to his white, she radiates the intrinsic colours that are his prism. Neither one truly capable of being without the other.

Masterfully done. This will join the few and far between sacred works I prize. Thank you for sharing YOUR COLOUR, and helping to stave off the sometimes gray.

Peace

ElegantPaws

P.S…..Will she gain his near immortality?

You are just amazing. The ending was perfect. I'm glad you didn't take it all the way and opposite most citrus yours was just divine. Intense was a great word becasue that describes this chapter perfectly. This story is beautiful and a wonderful read. No one should miss out on this. I've seen these characters in a new light and i've seen myself in a light too. That's a difficult thing for an author to acheive. Not only have you touched your audience and gave them a beautiful piece of literature to read, you made them connect with the story and reevaluate their own lives. The light is red and turning.

Thank you Chaos-and-Serenity. I've long been immovable too and yet you made me.

Keep writing. You have a gift.

This was a pheoniminal story, thank you. I am almost sad that it has come to an end. Take care,

Mel

'sigh' I'm always a little sad when a good story ends. It was a great ending although I missed the lemon.

wow. that is WAYYYYYYY intense. it's like something i could analyse for literature class!amazing! are you a writer in real life?as in is that your profession?

That was beautifully written.

I was SO nervous for Kagome the whole time.

that was such a great story!!!!! I have been reading it from the beginning and I have even reread it between updates. You had me in tears today. It was so beautiful and yet so in character that it made it plausible. You are the best! I look forward to reading anything else you decide to publish. Thanks for the great read : )

1. Beautiful story. Truly.

2. The writing style you utlized is not something often seen in fanfiction. Make no mistake, you did take two characters and put them through the motions just like dolls. It was the way you did it that was powerful and should be commended (great job). You gave the characters an emotional depth grounded in reality. Which is odd, with the jumps in time. I think the images in each moment were so clear(showing versus telling) that the feeling did not need to be stated. It was in every action and thought.

3. Only because there should be a three. At best, I want an ending. As a reader, I was dragged along this long emotional ride and all I get it a final moment of realization and completion. Seriously. No fair. You created such an elaborate story so well that the new question is, "What happens to them now?" And I do want to know the answer.

You totally rock!!! Your words hold so much meaning and depth that one can only say "amazing". This fic was such a wonderful piece of writing and I am so glad I got the chance to see the way you have protrayed Seeshoumaru. It really made me see him in a different way than how others make him. You seemed to have taken the original character and given him a reason for being the demon lord we know. You left us clues to follow throughout this fic to keep us guessing and wanting more. Your story was one of the best I have ever read and has more than shown your talent as a writer. I am looking forward to reading more of your work in the future. Oh and I like to say I'm sorry that you had to go through the pain of separating from the one you loved. Married or not, the hurt is still the same. I'll be praying for you to come through this time with great strength and new wisdom and that you may find that perfect mate that you deserve to have. Jen

The imagery of the colours was amazingly used as theme for this story. I also loved how you portrayed Sesshomaru's character throughout this story, especially the ending. You have given the characters such depth that they feel as though they are actual people. I'm still in awe of the ending.

Wow! That was beautiful. You did a great job.

Absolutely beautiful. If this were a play, there'd be a standing ovation. Good work.

Thank you so much for finishing the story. You did a great job. It was a beautiful story.
I don't know if I missed it, but whatever happened to Shippou, Kouga or Inuyasha? Since Sesshoumaru is still alive, can they still be alive as well? Thanks ;)

I begin my praise in quotations.

“If you hold it at just the right angle, you can see the true colors that make up white light. See?” she said as she tilted the prism, capturing a sliver of light and producing a rainbow. He was intrigued, she could tell.

“White light?”

“White light is not as it appears to the naked eye. It’s much more complex. White light embodies all of the colors, but keeps them hidden.”

He took it from her and offered no thanks, but she didn’t mind, knowing gratitude was foreign to him. She was just glad he accepted it.

He turned it over in his hand, looking at it with mild interest. “Why give me such a thing?”

“Because you’re helping us—have helped us.”

“That is not what I asked.”

She froze momentarily, but quickly swallowed her fear. “A wise person once told me that life is like a gray canvas. The people most important to us color that canvas. But the beauty of color is that it’s multi-faceted, possessing endless nuances. There’s always more to the story than we can see.”

Nuance is something I have found throughout your work, never anything blantant and not always tangible but a subtle sound of souls connecting quietly without bludgeoning. I appreciate that in your writing voice and the fulness of characterizations you create, in the still places between dialogues I find love, silence, simplicity, vut of the sophisticated kind and sensuality. Depth is everywhere. It is a pleasure to read your musings and though I will miss Temporal Sequence, I will be filled with an "ahhhhh" for a sense of completion with this work. I have every faith, you will end it, as you began, a story of eternal love, completion and fulfillment in all its aspects, mind, body and soul....the ultimate goal. Well done Chaos and Serenity....well done.

ElegantPaws

omg where are you?
i am -dying-
literally.
well not, you know, literally,
but holy crap i want the finale to this fic!
(i want it so bad...i even wrote you a whiney review ^^=)

anyway, hope it's coming.
no real rush i suppose.
i know how life can get in the way of fanfic writing.

oh i'm so sad there's only one chapter to go. well...all good things must come to an end. i think i'll save all my mushy ramblings for the last chapter. hopefully the last chapter we'll get some kagome and sesshoumaru interaction! i'm kinda suffering from withdrawal right now! lol

Arrgh, angst. Just draaaag that tension out why dontcha. ^_^ I'm looking forward to the grand finale.

I'm crying. This story is almost over. *Wipes tear* This story has been inspiring to me. I feel like I need to approach life differently now. Maybe that sounds stupid because this is fanfiction but this is the most inspiring story I've ever read. Thank you for writing something so beautiful and so real. Yes life CAN be beautiful. Thanks for reminding me of that.

I can't wait to read how you decide to end it. I'm sure it'll be great. I'd expect nothing less.

Great Gatsby-what a story!

You have an amazing ability to put the person right in the sceen with the character, well done. I look forward to any other stories you create.

Taishorin

You have an amazing ability to put the person right in the sceen with the character, well done. I look forward to any other stories you create.

Taishorin

Oh no...I cannot believe it is almost over!!! I love, love, love your story. It is moving and emotional, and stirring and just lovely! Everything is starting to fall into place....Although this last chapter felt a little rushed, but I think it has more to do with having to pull all the threads together before the end...But still I love your tale, and your writing is fantastic you are so descriptive, and have such a depth of spirit .... I eagerly await the conclusion of your tale....

I love it. I was almost to tears for some reason in this chapter. But i have to ask was all of this planned out previously or just something that happened?

O_O That was beautiful and sad and I love it and can't wait!

Wow...totally fasinating. You have done a wonderful, wonderful job with this fic. It should be a book in it's own right. You really threw me on this. I knew about the economics book he still had and the questioning he gave her and I even had it figured right about who owned the company restoring the Shrine, but all the other stuff...dang, you're good. He even owned the Sweets Shop she and her father would go to. I thought that may be in the cards too, but I wasn't quite sure. You are an extremely good writer and I'm happy to have been able to take this ride with your fic to it's completion. I can't wait for the last installment.

ohhh I really have to go to bed, but I stayed up late to read this. haha I wonder if I'll regret it. Probably not. I liked it even though it was heartbreaking and just a bit confusing with that scene between Kagome and Ichimaru(?). I hope you get the last one up soon! I can't wait!

-Lyn

That is it. I just found the perfect novel. I cannot wait to read the final chapter. YOU ARE GIFTED! Thank you.

*mouth hanging open* Whoa! Sessy -remembered- all that?! Just WOW! I can't wait for the epilouge!!! Must.Know.What.Happens!

OMG!!!
*squeels* I love how you just tie everything together. It's makes my heart leap and my mind swoon! Just toooo perfect. I need Sesshoumaru and Kagome together somehow. It would just suck if nothing turned out in the end after all they've been through. I can't wait!!!

Ahh! Just when you thought they'd meet, you just had to throw in that curved ball. *throws tantrum* Give me some closure, please! I'm dying from the effing suspense!
I can't wait!

one chapter left? no! seems like the story is just starting a second time.

This story is so good, it pains me to see you end it...you don't know how many weekends I stay at home, waiting and reading this story...will there be a sequel?

Ahhh!!! Update soon!! I can't wait to find out what happens. This chapter was so good. I can't believe that that there is only about one chapter left to the story. I'm totally freaking out currently....keep up the awesome work!!

Bloody brilliant! You're a sharp little bugger. It shows so clearly through your writing. I simply adore this story and it's a bloody shame that it's to end so soon. At any rate, I'm glad you've stuck it out and I can't wait to read the rest. Later.

I apologize. Somehow I deleted my notification that this chapter was up, so I am just reading it now. Thank you for the Pinot Noir, yum! You're too kind. *pours everyone a glass* Wow, this was a tricky chapter wasn't it? I like how you incorporated events from the manga into the plot. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I love that you kept Sesshoumaru aloof. Few things squick me worse than 'tender' Sesshoumaru. *shudders*

ooooohhhhhh noooooo, and here we have come to the end for right now.... and I'm crying soooo good. I am definitely going to reread the last chapter and take a closer look at those symbols!

Yikes, Kagome! Not quite one of your better moments... I hope things turn out okay

almost there... I wonder who attacked Kagome... I hope Sess gets there in time.

P.S. I can see why this fic has been awarded so many things... it is wonderful

must hurry to next chapter...

must continue with the beautiful story... ^.^

things should get very interesting from here on out, especially since now Miroku is aware too!

hmmmm.... should be interesting to find out who Kagome was actually dreaming about... I thinkI have an idea, but we'll see :)

The candor in Sesshoumaru and Kagome's growing relationship is priceless. You crafted that well!

hehehe... good one! Having Sesshoumaru and then Kagome 'diagnose' each other with a pyschological disorder. It should be interesting to see how the conversation develops from here.

Beautiful... I almost cried... but I am sitting in a library, so I figured I had best just stiffen my upper lip

awwww so sweet! I am looking forward to seeing how Kagome and Sesshoumaru pick up the pieces here on out. :)

yikes, yikes, yikes, yikes, yikes... Kagome and Sesshoumaru's feelings are just beginning to bud, when out steps Inuyasha... this might not go so well.

noooo why does it have to be so late in the morning... I want to keep reading, but I have stuff to do tomorrow... ahhhh.
Anyway, as usual beautifully well written. I really like how you have structured the dialogue between Kagome and Sesshoumaru. Sesshoumaru's opinions on complicated matters are rather insightful, and not usually found in other stories. Kudos on striking originality.
Anywhos, I think I may have to sleep, but rest assured I will be back tomorrow to read more :)

hehehe.... it will be an interesting day when Sesshoumaru learns about the birds and the bees... hahaha.

3:00 in the morning... but I don't want to stop reading... I am in trouble... double-trouble... but onwards and upwards with the next chapter anyway.... hahaha

Is it just me, or does this story get more and more beautiful with each chapter? Yep, it does. ^.^

Holy crap.... Miroku, Sango, and Kaede.... Oh no... things are going to get really, really, really interesting now. (and I mean in a really interesting way.)

Wow, that chapter was deep. You have really tied the story together in unusual and unforeseen ways, in addition to keeping the emotions real and the story compelling.

ahhhh adorable... I can't wait to get to the next chapter. It should be interesting to see how the new sleeping arrangement went over with everyone :)
I am also looking forward to having some light shed upon what happened in Sesshoumaru's past.

sooo cute. I loved the scene where Sesshoumaru 'convinces' (aka forces) Kagome to stop studying... and the way he woke her up... priceless!
I would like to say that Sesshoumaru is well above average in looks, but it is nice to hear a guy be modest for once.
I can't wait to see what happens as Sess begins to get his memories back... he is in for quite a surprise.

Thus the basis for a beautiful story has been set, and the main players have been introduced. Now all that's left is to watch the story unfold.
Reconstructing Sesshoumaru's memory through Kagome's eyes must have been a difficult task indeed, but you are succeeding soooo well.
On to the next chapter... sleep begone!

hehehe... Oh the foregoing of sleep to read this wonderful story. I will probably be tired tomorrow, but it will be worth it to find out what happens when Sesshoumaru runs into those blue eyes again.
P.S. stupid Inuyasha...

soooo well written.... makes me want to cry. Sigh... if only I could write like that... so descriptive. I could clearly see every scene in my mind's eye.
Your description of Sesshoumaru's wounds was brutal, but an accurate portrayal. I feel like you have kept to Kagome's generous and compassionate nature really well.
P.S. I also really loved the line where Kagome hopes to knock Sesshoumaru off his ever-loving pedastal... hahaha... so true

Beautifully well written! What have I been doing all my life that I haven't read this story up 'till now?! Your words flow so smoothly on the page, it forms the most incredible mental images! I am looking forward to chapter 2 :)
P.S. Your characterization of both Kagome and Sesshoumaru is spot on. And, the change that has come over Kagome and her family is heart-wrenching. I hope Mrs. Higurashi can find a way to cope with Kagome's choices.

Yaay. Home stretch!! I totally got sucked into the angst. Gotta go read something mushy and perky now...

I have never cried so hard, laughed so much and smiled so many times as I have with this story. This story is so emotional and packed so full with insight and understanding that I'm just floored. You are a gifted, amazing writer and I hope you never stop. I didn't think I could love this pair anymore than I do but you have proved me wrong on so many levels. This story could be about any pariing and I'd still be touched and completely in love with it. This story is like a great book that you can't put down. Thank you for taking the time to put your heart and soul into this fiction.

I take it that some form of Sesshoumaru is going to appear in her time now, ne? I'm so intrigued!

This story is utterly enthralling. I believe this may very well be the most well-thought out story ever. My goodness, it certainly delves into our lives and make us reflect on our pasts. Kudos to you.

Please update as soon as possible!
Thanx.

Wow...what a fantastic chapter...I eagerly await the next one!

yeah...i must admit i thought that kazuma was dead. although it shouldn't be a suprise. nice to see the son in the story. i'm sad to hear that there's only 2 more chapters left. but i've enjoyed the ride so far. can't wait for the next update.

*sigh* Another lovely chapter. I cannot believe how well everything seems to be coming together here! It is great...and you know I did not think the uncle was still alive..nice job there. Too bad about the Ice Prince being back...but that aspect of him is what works so well...besides it makes the lovey dovey goodness that much sweeter for it! Great job as usual...I cannot wait for the next chapter!

If you don't update, I will send you hate mail for the rest of your life!

Wow. Just WOW. Your very talented but I'm sure you already know that. The ending was shocking and I can't wait to read why his mark is there. I have no idea what you mean by labels buut I'm ok with my ignorance. Like Kagome said, I rather just be told. I love surprises and this story is full of them.

I cant wait to read more! I'm going to cry when this story ends but hopefully you'll write another Sess/Kags story soon!

wow. O_O that last part was the best.

Wow, poor Kagome just can't shake Sessy for nuthin! The poor girl is obviously in love. *grins* I wonder when she'll come to terms with that...And I just HAVE to know why Sessy's crest is on the shrine! I -can't- wait for the next chappie!!!

THANK YOU SOOOOOOO MUCH FOR UPDATING!!!!!!!

*SQUEALS* when she sees the update then *WAILS* when she finishes it. SQUEE! (my new word!) OMG OMG OMG! I dunno what to say, beside OMG OMG OMG OMG! and UPDATE PLEASE! (with please quadrupled underlined and italacized)

AMAZING

AMAZING

one word ...WOW... this story is amazing you managed to make sesshomaru feel for kagome without making him seem out of character that takes a lot of imagination lol anyways i love this story and CAN'T wait until you update i hope it's soon!!!!!!!!

Yeah...all in the labels...Sesshoumaru is the one financing the re construction of the Shrine since it was he who has/had her Economics book and was so fasinated by her books. This chapter answered alot and I thought that Uncle mustn't be dead because there was so much focus on his character, which I liked in a wierd way. Makes understanding Sesshoumaru easier. I knew Kohaku was in Sesshoumaru's protection from things my daughter has told me she's read, but I didn't know why. Makes sense now. That little incarnation of Naraku's is a real kick, ne? Even more intelligent than Naraku maybe? Anyways, great job! Until the next update then! TTFN

This chapter was so full that I had to read it twice in case I missed something! I was sad when Kagome was remembering the times that she saw Sesshomaru after he left her. I hate that he had to be so cold to her, but I suppose that was the way it had to be. Joining Kagome in her time was interesting. I'm still trying to figure out the meaning behind 'Almohad' and the fact that it was painted in huge pink letters on the silver truck. That struck me as odd. That is a Muslim/Arabic name, not Japanese, so I suspect there is meaning there. I'm just not too good at puzzles. I suppose I'll just have to wait like everyone else to see how you've woven this altogether. When the workers pulled the cresent moon board down I was nearly as shocked as Kagome! I suppose Sesshomaru wanted to state his claim. hehe. Great job, as usual. Of course, I would expect no less. You have a beautiful way with words. I'm awaiting the next chapter anxiously! Until then~

SUPER awesome. I kind of expected the last part to happen (not the whole board thing, but the whole Sesshoumaru thing) but it was awesome. Again, my way with adjectives is appalling, isn't it? haha I hope you get those next two chapters up soon! I can't wait!

-Lyn

Uh, a little cheesetastic but nothing I can't handle. I really liked the aftermath though. For some reason I keep forgetting he's missing an arm...

it wasn't sappy at all. I loved it.....i need MORE!!!!!! YOU'RE AWSOME!!!!!

I don't know why you were so worried about this chapter - it was amazing! I'm so gad that they finally kissed!! It flowed so smoothly and I was so glad Sesshoumaru realized his feelings. Thanks again for such a great story!!

Oh my gosh I am freaking out. Stupid stupid stupid Kagome!

I can't believe she said Inuyasha's name when she was kissing Sesshomaru. Argh that makes me want to call her an idiot.

But the romance, before Kagome ruined it, was beautiful. It was wonderful and not at all cheesy. Right now Sesshomaru is reminding me of his uncle.

Just please update soon

Oh . . . wow. I would call that cheese a Brie: creamy, strong, full, and smooth. Serriously, I don't know why you fear writing fluff because this was delicious. And unlike most other stories I've read it was serriously, serriously in character. Your writing style has grown so much since the beginning of this story. Your use of metaphor has become quite beautiful. Honestly, if you left the story on this note it would be bittersweet but appropriate. I do hope, however, that there is a little more to satify my curiosity for what happened to these two.

That chapter almost drove me crazy! First Kagome dies, then she screws up and says Inuyasha's name. I could have kicked her myself. But I'm so glad that she didn't let him walk away with that misconception. I wonder if he will tell her that she died? She's going to miss him nearly as bad as he will miss her. I look forward to the coming chapters. Great job, as always!

Excellent! I went through so much anticipation that I couldn't pull my eyes away. My co-workers saw how involved and intense I was that they called me on the mobile to distract me. I think I growled out the words, "what is it?" I have to apologize to them on Monday.
This chapter BLEW ME AWAY! The kiss (including what followed afterwards) was passionate, tender and bittersweet. I was very moved.

i really liked this chapter! it was just enough fluff....more gorgonzola than marscapone. it was actually kind of tragically sweet especially with the last few lines and it makes you feel a bittersweet happiness. you're glad kags is alive and seshhy finally kissed her but you think she can't stay with him in the past so its sad too.

The fact that Sesshomaru shares his feelings with Kagome is enough for me. Bravo on the chapter. I really enjoyed this one. Can't wait for the next chapter *of course I can, figure of speech. please don't punish me for it!!!*

Cheese? There was none. It was poignant and sweet. I loved it. You did a wonderful job with this. It is a shame that this story is to end in the next few chapters...but I look forward to reading every one of them!! Honestly, you did a wonderful job here

I hate to disappoint you but I detected no cheese of any sort nor fluff. I think it's wonderful. It was a nice counterpoint to the somewhat subtle tone of the rest of the story. I think that it's angsty, filled with sorrow and loss, angry, and very passionate. I hope that's what you were going for. You totally failed in the fluff and cheese department. Since you want concrit, if I had anything to suggest or comment on in a negative (helpfully negative) manner, I would not hesitate to e-mail you. I don't. I think you are a powerful writer and that's a good thing ... often under-appreciated in fandom but desirable nonetheless.

Wow, I loved it. I think it was perfect.

is that the last chap i hope not i really like your stroy

Beautiful. No other words are really needed. He found his inner humanity and dare I say "love"? He kissed her...he kissed her!!!!!! Alright now, you can do this...let them do the mad,wild,passionate monkey dance. You have the gift...write us some delicious lemonade!!!! After being in the worst ice storm in 20 or 30 yrs. in Missouri, I need something to heat me up!!!

That was just a hint of cheese like in a cheesecake. Very good chapter!

Wonderful chapter...you really are very good at writing such realisic angst and I adored your slight fluffy moments!

Uuuuugh, I loooove your stoooory but its breaking my heart!!!

And I think you did the fluff perfect:-)

O.O He saved her...That's so... beautiflu *wipes tears away*

O.O He KISSED her?! This is the best chapter ever!! She got saved and kissed all in the same chappie!

Thanks SOOOOOOOOOO muches for updating! Please update soonly!

That was cute. I still can't believe she said Inuyasha's name while she was kissing Sesshoumaru, even if she wasn't imagining him it's still the wrong thing to say...out loud at least.

Oh wow. That was unexpectedly sad. hahaha actually, I expected it, but wow. That was really good. I like your choice of flashbacks and I just LOVE the way you characterize Sesshoumaru. It's so great. And now I'm just depressed...in a good way. I think. I hope you keep updating and I can't wait for the next update!!!

Oh please keep writing. I love your stories and finally a person that can write long chapys. ^-^ Oh yah i wanted to ask whats with all the thinking. It was kind of making me dizzy for a while. All well. Hay can you hurry up a bit you left a really good cliffy, and your driving me nut. Good luck thanks truely
Kathlene

I'm going to be sad when this ends but I guess all good things must end eventually. His memory is pretty much complete and he's now having trouble accepting his growing affection for Kagome. Very realistic and very unfortunate. Feeling guilty, Kagome's pushing him away too. I should hate you for these turns in events but I know it will make the rest that much sweeter.

I wonder what happened to Kagome and i hope they both get over themselves. I guess that takes time right? 500 years maybe? Probably.

It's been a pleasure and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Omg, cliffhanger. That's just evil. I'm looking forward to meeting the great benefactor.

Well, I'm finally caught up. This story has made my soul cry, laugh and I am left with hope and the desire for them to get together.
It such a beautiful, compelling and spellbinding story that I don't where to begin to leave you a proper review. I will tell you my one thought after concluding this chapter was: I hope Sesshoumaru will recall the power Tenseiga if he needs to.
Congratulations are in order to your win. I am happy for you! :)

This story is really good. Keep up the great work and upload soon. I hope Kagome is okay and hopefully Sesshomaru saves her in time :]

I've read chapters 1-13- non-stop, well with a little sleep here and there. This story is compelling. Once you start, your hooked.
I have to tell how much I enjoyed the humor, too.
ja ne

Well, I am about to tears. Please update soon.

Don't end too soon......I'm addicted

It's official...I LOVE your story and your writing...and *sigh* just about everything in this story...and I can't help but to crave a lovely happy ending... I so look forward to your next chapter!!!

O.O NO!!!!!! KAGOME!! *bites nails anxiously* oh my gosh, oh my gosh, OH MY GOSH!!!

That was an awesome chappie! Thanks for updating and please update again soon. Have a TERRIFFIC day. =)

I am only up to chapter 9...but I love, love, love your story. It is so damned refreshing to see a story that develops with time...and see relationships build and grow. You are a wonderful writer no matter what others may say...lol.. I read your other story torment of abstinence and I literally laughed myself silly. Thank you for sticking to your ideals and for being such a wonderful writer!!!

Hmm, somehow I think I deleted my review, so just in case, I'm doing it again. I wanted to thank-you for the update #1 and to let you know how very much I'm enjoying this fic. You have a wonderful style...your original characters are interesting and so..alive. The way you've written this fic makes it plausable that Sesshoumaru is the way he is because of his uncle and neglectful father. And in my opinion, Kagome needs to listen to Miroku just this once and open her mouth or lose what she has with Sesshoumaru before he gets all distant and arrogant again. Oh and lastly, I wanted to say how much I loved the way Ah-Un got his name. Makes so much sence.

Oh no! Kagome! I hope Sesshomaru hurries! And just when she was beginning to see her changing feelings for what they are! ARGH! And the cruel, cruel, cliff-hanger. Oh. You have outdone yourself with that one. I'm dying to know what happens to her. Great job!

Is she gonna forget too, temporarily? That would make it fun. Who's going to find her first, Sesshomaru or Inuyasha? Update soon!

I just wanted to drop a note to let you know how much I enjoy this story. I always look foward to the updates. Thanks and keep up the great work. Hmmm wonder who the mysterious bennifactor (sp?) could be....

WAH! UPDATE SOON! I need to check back on this site more often! Please email me when you update again please! I LOVE IT!!

Well, I have to applaud your story. It is entirely beautiful. It is up in my rankings with Tale of the House of the Moon.

Your vocabulary is stunning and entirely perpetual. It is one of the most knowledgeable stories I have read in a long time. I am deeply awaiting the posting of the next chapter.

Until then,
Raining Teardrops

This story bloody rocks! I don't think there's a story out there better than this! Your writing is beautiful and very moving. Convincing too since I've never read such a convincing Sesshoumaru backstory before. The imagery gets pretty hot too!

Please update soon 'cause I'm definitely a fan!

This story is just wonderful. I love your style. It's like reading something simple yet incredibly complictaed. Take that how you wish.

The sexual tension is high and I loved the part where he pulled her hair. Real hot! I wonder how Sesshoumaru will handle what she said. I don't think it's going to be good.

Thanks for writing and I cant wait fo ran update!

I didn't drink, nor did I grope anyone! I'm such a good girl! Oh Sesshoumaru! Kagome!! Get together!! There's so much tension I can taste it in the air. Yummy!

By the way, thanks for e-mailing when you have a new chapter ready. It makes my day. 3

Eeek. Good stuff. It just gets better and better.

great chapter! I love marcus's character...I love all your charachters and interpretation of sesshoumaru's and his father's relationship - it's really well done and very believable. It shows how much time and effort you've put into the development of your story and as a reader and fellow writer I appreciate that in story. Hope you had a great holiday and a happy new year!!

Yay! Congratz on the nominations. kyaa, Sesshy's falling in love. ^^. Keep up the good work! 3

Wow...what else can be said! You have done such a wonderful job on this fic and I'm so happy for your nominations. You are such a great talent! I can't pinpoint any exact favorite part because each chapter was just so great within it's own right. You just keep going and going like the energizer bunny never missing a beat. I can't say enough about how good this fic is, so I'm going to leave it here. I commend your talent and imagination. You are blessed with a wonderous gift.

Oh my. Things got heated pretty fast. Yum. I adored the image of his grasp of her hair and his intense scenting of her neck. Mmmm. But what surprised me most was Kagome's reply. "You're one beautiful mistake." Hooray for Kagome! Damn. She took the plunge and it was AWESOME! I couldn't be more pleased. You are positively the best author. Your intelligence shows in your writing. Your use of the language is absolutely poetic. Humor and angst mix perfectly in your hands. Now you have succeeded in awakening the sensuality of our characters with panting eagerness. Bravo!

Strangely, I had somehow read chpt 19 and skipped 18! So now I'm straight. This chapter was hilarious! Miorku is just too funny! My favorite part was when he said: "I’ve always wondered if youkai males were more generously endowed than humans since so many beautiful women seem uncannily attracted to them. You will tell me, won’t you, Kagome-sama?” HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! That was worth money right there. LOL! I can answer that question, monk! "YES!" They are! (Well, they are. Just read any fanfiction and you will know. Thousands of fanfiction authors can not be wrong.) I do believe that I would like to kiss Miroku for planting that glorious seed in Kagome's mind. I think things are about to get really interesting for those two. Then he remembered Rin! Sweet little Rin! I can't wait to read the next chapter. Here I go!

Chpt. 18! I'm behind! Which is bad, but good at the same time, because now I have several chapters to read all at once. Yay! So... Chpt. 18, what can I say... It is now my favorite chapter in this whole tale. God, I mean, it was amazing. I never expected Kazuma to have admited to incest with Sess's mom! Holy crap! I never saw that coming. Then the openess while Sesshomaru told Kagome how he felt. Oh and the sword play in the twilight! Sizzzling HOT! And the icing on the cake was Kagome's dream. *Sighing dreamily* I have that same dream all the time, and I have to say, I can just imagine how she looked lying there. hehe. I loved loved LOVED Sesshomaru's reaction to the dream, and his final decision to re-think his relationship with Kagome. Oh that was priceless! Super great job. Now I'm off to chpt. 19. Bye!

Great update, this story really makes you think, such as, What wouldn't Miroku do? (I'm bad, couldn't help myself) I am hoping for the next chapter to find our unlikely couple starting their search for little Rin, I am hoping nothing bad has happend to her. Will be looking forward to the next chapter. Keep up the great writing.

Same to you!!! AND I NEED MORE!!!!!!!

Oh my God! Double wow! I love this story. And I know how hard it is to make Sesshomaru "love" and talk without making him seem OOC! Great job, you're a great writer! Keep on going!

Great story. I can't stop reading it! I hope Sess and Kag get over their uncertainty. Did Rin die?

I'm reading, I'm following...I'm dying for next chapter...

-Kanz

Beautifully Done!!! I love your writing, every time i get youor e,ail i stop what i'm doing and READ!!!

I love Rin and Sesshoumaru but only in a father/daughter role....please keep going, i'm behind you all the way!!!!

Oh my god. That was so amazing. All the insight and knowledge, I finally found a fanfict that backs up Sesshoumaru's behaviors and thoughts so perfectly. ::bows:: I will be anticipating further chapters.

Thanks so much for the update!! I wait with bated breath to see an email letting me know you've updated. The way you paint a picture and capture emotions is incredible. Can't wait for the next chapter!!

wowza! x-mas came early this year! i've been dieing for another chappie and boy was i glad to see you've updated! its fantastic as usual. and again you're leaving me hangin wanting more. please don't take too long to update again. happy holidays!!

WOW! That was awesome! I just read 20 chapters-in one day! You have so got to update this!!! I LOVE this story!!!!

I loved this chapter!! that part between miroku and kags was fabulous!! and sesshy coming to kag's imagined rescue - priceless! I can't wait for more! and congrats on 1st Place Best Canon IYFG 3Q 06, your certainly deserve it!!!

Incest cringe. but i love how you wrote it can't wait till you update. if you don't i'll find you and glue you to your seaat and gag and bound you. except your hands till you update!!!!:)

alright! finally ch. 20. Please update soon!

Yay, yay, yay!!! You wrote another chapter. You don't know how happy that makes me.

I'm sooo glad that Miroku is finally knocking some sense into Kagome. It never hurts to stir the imagination I suppose. And I love the ending. The way that he's remembering Rin is just...memorable. I hope that's the right word for it.

I hope you can get a massage for all that stress. Never had an actual one, but from friends, they're comforting. See ya'!

excellent as usual, hopefully you will grace us with a Christmas present of another chapter soon!! I love this story so much

Taishorin

Hmm... I certainly enjoyed the ending of that chapter. All that rain and a sexy Sesshomaru chest. Yuuummmmy. And he remembers trying to kill her! Yikes! Miroku showing up with the umbrella was perfect. It made the whole thing. Great job, as always!

Eeek, this story just gets better and better. Keep up the good work!

that was so awsome, but i don't get it...they both knew what? i am not slow, or maybe i am? lol

MORE!!!!!!!

yay I hope you udpate soon!

I couldn't read the updates for a whole week because my ethernet cord decided to vaporize, but ah, Fate does have a plan! My boss left early, and yeah...work computer travels to Single Spark as good as home computer used to!

Another fabulous chapter...ACK! I adore this story so much...you always know just how to mold a moment. It's never to hollow or melodramatic, but always pitch-perfect. Can't wait for more.

this fic is sooooo delicious! please update with a quickness! i haven't read a kag/sess this addictive in ages. please please please update asap!

Wow...great job! Can't wait 'till next chapter! ^_^

I loved this story when I first read it and I was so glad to hear that you were continuing it! These new chapters are wonderful. You have found yet another way to make the plot deeper and more enjoyable. I can't wait for another update!

She wants him.

This was my favorite chapter. It's not like it was better written than your other chapters or anything like that. It was the content. Dear God you about killed me. I think I was panting alongside her! Then Miroku's dumb ass shows at such an inconvenient moment!

I loved this chapter so much. It was really tense and simply divine. Please update soon because I'm really excited! Really, I'm excited.

Wait...they both knew what!? Oh no! I'm all confused now. Can they see through her clothes or something? Why was Miroku there all of a sudden?! Oy...I have a headache.

I still appreciate the whole e-mailing system. It makes me all excited to see that compared to the crappy junk mail.

I loved it! It was great and you are wonderful. I hope you can update soon. This is getting good.

Superb, as always. I loved the bit of insight into Kazuma - he seemed so unrepentantly evil for so long and then poof! We are reminded that he is a product of his upbringing and memories just as much as the rest of us are. Of course, we should have realized that, seeing as how it is a central theme, but it still came as a surprise. More like a "D'oh!" It's easy to fall into a complacent patter of despising the antagonist without thinking about the deeper motivations behind his behavior.

Poor Kagome - she made quite the miscalculation. The tensions was so thick at the end that I almost forgot to breath. And now she's been caught, though I suppose it could have been worse if Inuyasha had appeared instead of Miroku!

Thank you for updating!

Excellent, excellent, excellent. I love your little side stories, absolutely priceless. This is getting deeper and deeper and better and better with each chapter. Please do not stop, your eager readers rejoice in your words!

Ever the confused one I am, hAha.
It's interesting and I can't wait to read more. You're doing a great job ^.^

Thank you so much for updating. i love adore and would even go so far as to marry it if I weren't already married. : ) The sexual tension is thick and you left a cliffy worth an honor in the history books on cliffies. I can't wait for your next update and keep up the awesome writing.

you should be proud of this chapter...it's truly is quite wonderful.

Ch. 19 This chapter is exceptionally well done. The writing is focussed and I could feel the tension. Really good. Darn Miroku.

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for updating!! I thought you had given up.

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU for updating!! I thought you had given up.

God, I still love this story. You're so thorough when it comes to their pasts and...Oh! It just gives me the chills reading it. And you know? It also makes me think, with the questions that they press on to each other. Like, the whole, "What color is _____? Great thing to think about. Keep on writing! I can't wait for the next installment. I hope Sesshoumaru and Kagome...get a little closer? X3

Thank you for updating. I hope we get to see more of this wonderful story of yours. I love it and I can't wait to see what happens between our two favorite people.

this new chapter was great as always. i love that u have a mailing list for everyone that leaves u a comment. it was a very pleasant surprize and made me very happy that i commented cuz i pretty much freaked out when i got an email saying youve updated. please update soon this is currenty like my favorate or at least one of my favorate storys

thank you so much for the email!!!!

please hurry and put up another 12!!!!!!! lol. this was so awsome, you truly have a great gift! i'm hooked!!!!

Oh my goodness, that was such a good story! I coudn't stop reading it! Please post the next chapter as soon as possible, I can't wait!!!!!

This story is a joy to read. I'm glad you're not abandoning it.

Great chapter, and an interesting twist [though I think you foreshadowed it well with Kazuma saying 'You should of been -my- son.' to him. I'm glad you've gotten over your writer's block, because this story is too great not too finish. :D

Ja!

excellent as usual! They will both come to a point where they will turn to each other, perhaps after a terribe battle where they realize they came close to losing each other, when they don't really have time to think but just react with their most basic of instincts. I really look forward to reading your work, it is so indepth which is what I love about it.

Do you have any favorite authors?

Taishorin

simply amazing, you are a fantastic, indepth story teller. I have never enjoyed an Inuyasha story as much as this one, particularly because you delve into peoples minds and reasons for being so well. Keep up the good work. I would love to be on an email list for any of your stories!

I would like to say that Temporal or Sequence is the best fiction have read this past months. The way you let the characters develop is amazing. You might not believe this but i read your story just last night...i got up this morning and i read it all over again. Keep up the great work and PLEASE update soon!!

o.o

Do you know how hard it is to pull off a canon story when Inuyasha is still alive, and somehow make the relationship between Kagone and Sesshoumaru work without ruining any of the characters?

Very..

This is a work of art. I read all seventeen chapters straight. Do you have a mailing list so I know when you update? because if this were a book, I wouldn't put it down.

Well done. ^_^

o.o

Do you know how hard it is to pull off a canon story when Inuyasha is still alive, and somehow make the relationship between Kagone and Sesshoumaru work without ruining any of the characters?

Very..

This is a work of art. I read all seventeen chapters straight. Do you have a mailing list so I know when you update? because if this were a book, I wouldn't put it down.

Well done. ^_^

This fanfiction is the greatest. I started reading it a few months ago and have been anticipating the next chapter. Please update as soon as possible!

OMG!!! Was Sesshoumaru's mother a whore!?!? Awsome chapter by the way.

Wow, I love it! Keep on writing, I can't wait!!!!

I like this story but I also just finished Torment of Absitinence and I must say that it was a lovely satire...everything you said was true and I must disagee with your other reviewer and say that your grammar, vocabulary, and structure are absolutely impeccable. She or he was a dweeb just because they didn't get their lemon, although you DID say it was NOT NC-17. Please write another one fo rcomedic relief but make it a whole story? One where Kagome does not fall for Sesshoumaru, where he is arrogant but gets his comeuppance from a human. Please! Set in canon universe and let it have your verve.

Pweaty pwese?

-Dani.

I love ALL your stories!

I like this story but I also just finished Torment of Absitinence and I must say that it was a lovely satire...everything you said was true and I must disagee with your other reviewer and say that your grammar, vocabulary, and structure are absolutely impeccable. She or he was a dweeb just because they didn't get their lemon, although you DID say it was NOT NC-17. Please write another one fo rcomedic relief but make it a whole story? One where Kagome does not fall for Sesshoumaru, where he is arrogant but gets his comeuppance from a human. Please! Set in canon universe and let it have your verve.

Pweaty pwese?

-Dani.

I love ALL your stories!

okay. this fic is in my top three list--and that's saying something. i've read a bazillion fics, and i'm just speechless. this fic is up to par with Tales from the House of the Moon. have you ever read that fic? you should...it's on mediaminer.org.
anyway, i just can't wait for you to continue with this fic. it's gonna be hard for me concentrate on college with your story buzzing in my head all day!
well, i gotta go, but i'll definitely try to keep reviewing on your fic.
keep your muse happy!

About the previous post. That was obviously supposed to be story and not store... But I forgot to mention. What Kazuma told Sesshoumaru later that would drive him into celibacy wouldn't happen to have anything to do with his "you should have been my son" comment would it? And his admiration of his mother...and the cliffhanger...ick. Somehow I wouldn't be surprised.

Wow, awesome stuff. Just read the whole store in one shot. Glad to see someone not going overboard with Sesshoumaru's character for once. It gets old fast. Also glad you never went in for the whole she smells like "insert flower combo here" stuff. I personally think it's rather unrealistic since aside from perfume people don't smell like flowers. And perfume would probably be a more unnatural scent. Also glad you don't go for the overly animalistic traits that a lot of others do. They're more than just shape shifting dogs after all. The only very small problem I ran across was your usage of allude, actually in those cases it should be elude. It's just one of those words that often trip people up being quite similar in spelling but different in meaning. Aside from that I look forward to seeing more from you, take as long as you need, just don't abandon us ^_^

I'm on chapter one and I gotta say that was a great beginning! It is refreshing to have stumbled across a fic with insight, flow, and quite the descriptive writing. Good job =D

omgee...cliffhanger...nooooooo!! T.T

I finally started reading this fic again, yaaaay!!! I lova it. Can't wait for the next chapter. 3

what did his uncle say!!!!???!?!?!?!!! update soon...
~FFM~

i luv ur story n all but Allah is not the god of desert. im muslim and i speak arabic Allah means god in my language. and it is the same god as christians and jews believe in. please do not get Allah mixed up by saying that he is the god of desert because people will get pissed off.

wow i love this story, u hav a great way of writing. it just keeps me wanting for more

wow u r such a talented writter!!!! you've got to be one of the best fanfiction writters out there no kidding. im so gla di found ur story. and i like never leave reviews on any storys and i had to leave one on this story. i was reading and it ran out of chapters i was so mad i was like NO i want to read the next chapter!! so please update ASAP!!! i will check it often!

I just wanted to let you know that I really like your story. It's a refreshing view into the enigma that is Sesshoumaru. I hope to find a new chapter soon (hint hint wink....LOL) Keep up the good work... n-chan

I'm so glad to see that you decided to continue on with this story. Congrats for graduating by the way. Hope it was all worth it in the end and satifying as well. Can't wait to read more!!! X3

I loved this chapter! The story Sesshomaru was a bit long-but otherwise, everything was interesting and wonderful.

I forgot for a while that Sesshomaru couldn't remember Kagome, or the Shikon no Tama in his recent ventures.


Loved how the chapter ended. I want to read more, but it's almost midnight,I have school tomorrow, I'm itchy with sweat, and blah.

Anyway-loved the chapter, love the story-can't wait for updates!

Shit! I want to read more (This was very enlightening/entertaining) but my sister wants the computer.

Oh-no! Now Kagome has to tell him if he asks. (you know, about the arousal thing)

Great chapter!

Poor Kagome-doomed to great moments turned bad.

Oooh-Sesshomaru's catching on that Kagome's very different. (I think his subconscience has been collecting the clues for sometime, actually. At least since his visit to the village)

Also-I don't think I like Hitomi very much.

Great chapter!

That was a very sad chapter. I feel very bad for Inuyasha. Kagome just vented on him, and he feels like she doesn't even like him anymore; that his first real friend thinks so lowly of him must have torn out his heart. I think that's why he hasn't been close to her for the last year.


Also-where is he, exactly? I think he may be spying on Kagome and Sesshomaru-those 3 gash marks in the ground remind me of Inuyasha's sword or claw strikes.

Loved this chapter! Sesshomaru is so lost, and Kagome hugs him! That's great.

Again-I had to stop halfway through this chapter last night, only to pick up again tonight.

I loved Sesshomaru's memories of Hitomi-it shows his adolescent, less than ice perfect persona. I think his uncle Kazuma's teachings prompted Sesshomaru to think he could force himself on the human girl Hitomi, just because he has the power to do so. She was snide/mean in stating about him being bad just because of what he was, but she was justified. I mean, look at what he did!


I especially love that he went to "kagome's village" to have her suit mended, and meets Kaede, Sango and Miroku. They have to realize-just from how Sesshomaru's dressed-that he's met Kagome. I mean, come on!

Loved this chapter to pieces!

"It would never be made. And that was okay, because doing what is necessary is not always what is right, for in so doing they would in essence be killing a part of themselves."-Oh! Ohohoh! OH! I get it! There is a connection to Sesshomaru and Inuyasha and what really makes them different. Sesshomaru was able to fulfill his duty-even though it was wrong- thus killing apart of himself; his innocence. Inuyasha, on the other hand, couldn't do what was right/his duty, because he couldn't make himself do something so wrong in the name of right and duty.

I loved the connection, (And the fact that I actually got it. Yay!)

Great chapter!

I was half expecting Sesshomaru to try and kiss Kagome (although that would have been too soon) because he had a similar memory where almost the same thing happened.


Wonderful chapter!

I loved that this chapter took place in Sesshomaru's POV-very interesting.

It was funny to see what Sesshomaru thought of Kagome and her incessecnt talking and big emotions.

Poor Sesshy! I think it was his father or some older male relative that was looking back at him in the water/trying to drown him.

Great chapter@

"Yes, he supposed he really wasn’t the type to sway with the tides. He was an obsessive person, for he needed to know why he went bad. (...)"

I loved Sesshomaru's POV-I hate it when stories want to develop their characters more, but only do so in one POV. It's nice to see other perspective's on a situation-especially in this dramatic, amnesia reality that Sesshy-chan and Kagome find themselves in!


Yay

I keep getting interrupted in the middle of these chapters!

Ah, well. I love this story-it's awesome!


Love how sweet and interesting Sesshomaru is right now-it's amazing what you've done with this story!

Loved it! I didn't think Inuyasha was acting so distant and upset just because it was taking a lot longer to get his wish. I know Kagome told him she would stick by him always. But now that she's going to college, and focusing on her education, she's subtly acknowledging the fact that she won't be spending the rest of her life in the past, or with Inuyasha.


I feel sorry for Inuyasha-but he pisses me off, too.

Loved this chapter-especially how Kagome's taking care of Sesshomaru.

Great chapter. (I bet she has to bring him back to her friends/and/or her time-he won't want to be left alone in his amnesiac state. At least, that's what I think)

That was amazing! I love the description and self analization Kagome has. This was a wonderful chapter-thank you for writing this story! (I love how you gave some undertones to possible reasons Sesshomaru kept staring at Kagome after she told him to "stop")

Tired!

FINISH IMMEDIATELY...........PLEASE.....I BEG OF YOU!!!!!!

FINISH IMMEDIATELY...........PLEASE.....I BEG OF YOU!!!!!!

I have to say this is a very intellectualy intense story. I have never read a story based so carefully on conversation. At first, I was not sure if I would like this story, since I usually prefer more action and suspense. But now I have to say this is one of the most intellectualy captivating stories on this site. Your writing skills are great! I so hope you update soon!
~k

Wow. This story is amazing. The pace is slow..but that makes it seem much more convincing. I love it when you go back to Sesshoumarus past, because you make everything so believable. I can see all of these things happening to him and shaping him into the man he is in the story. I think you dealt with the Kagome and Inuyasha romance well too, pretty much ending it cleanly, for the most part. Man, Im just so in love with this fic! ^_^ I was wondering wether or not you have it on fanfiction.net, because that has an automatic updater thing...and that makes it easier to know when the much awaited next chapter of yours arrives. Anyway, I simply love your writing, love this fic, and am eagerly waiting for the next chapter!!

I cannot begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. It was continuously praised on the recommended fanfictions and that's what ultimately persuaded me to read it. I can say now that I am so glad I did! You are an excellent writer and you capture the characters personalities so well! Sesshoumaru's past is so believable. I really, really hope you continue to update this story. I can't wait to see what happens next!

^.^ I'm so happy for the update. I love this story!!! I can't wait to see what happens!

WOW. It is so deep. Hope to see the next chapter soon. I am hooked on this story. Thank you for updating.

OMG...I haven't laughed so much in one chapter as I did in this last one XD

To have Kagome's real first talk about sex to be with Sesshoumaru...that's unique and utterly hilarious XD I love it! And now...you have me on the edge of my seat with that last little bit about his mum >. Updated soon! PLEASE!!!

Holy shit! That was THE best chapter yet! I loved it! Loved it I tell you! Congratulations girlfriend. This is some gold metal writing. If possible, you have increased my un-natural desire for an anime character even more than it was before. That is just one sexy youkai. Thanks!

That was awesome! Your portrayl of Sesshoumaru and his relationship with his brother are such an inspiration to me as fellow writer!

I love this story! It's definitely on my top 10.

The outlines and plots, descriptive yet vague ideas and theories. I can't wait until the next chapter. But I keep having a particular theory popping intomy head about Kazuma.

The characterizations are absolutely amazing. I haven't seen anything remotely this close to what I've imagined him to be on a more...advanced and complete level. Simply astounding!

Even more so your grammar and spelling. I don't think I've seen any mistakes.

I'm almost impatient for the next chapter. I have some ideas what you could do, drop me an e-mail if you want.

Still! Love it!!! And a unique plot, too.

One word,
Addicting.

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Q.oS

dude...in a good way.

dude...in a good way.

another gorgeous chapter, can't wait till the next. ^^

Simple awesome.I love how u portray Sesshomaru.Great story,hope to read more soon.Update soon ^_^

That was great! I spent all day reading your story. Update soon!

Aww... he sounds so lonely. So empty. Maybe Kagome can fill the void in his heart. Great chapter. The story is coming along nicely. I'm enjoying their growing relationship and their overall innocence to one another on a sexual level. The next chapter sounds like it will be enlightening. I can't wait!

wow...I can't wait to read the next chapter!

Wow... that was such a beautiful chapter. I loved how colors were matched to the people dominant in Kagome and Sesshomaru's lives. Also, the part where Inuyasha let Kagome go was so very moving, and it was all true to the manga/anime. You are such an astounding and talented writer! I await your next update with much excitement~

this fanfic is just..(how do you say)... GREAT! One of the best on my top 10 list... :)

I love the story. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

omg I love this story...you must update as soon as possible...it is simply wonderful!!

*doing own version of a 'happy dance'* yay! i got it right! u know i 4got about that thing! lol glad i didn't make an ass out of myself w/the guess. lol i take it u're also a big russell crowe fan? u're like my friend! i am happy 4 the 2 chapters update. made my day. man...i guess i underestimated inuyasha's maturity. i would think that he'd blown up like mt. st. helens if he found out about sesshoumaru. lol i also like the whole idea about people being associated w/certain colors. it's a nice way of trying to figure people out. makes it seem so easy 2 deal w/them. oh n b4 i go i gotta agree w/kagome w/the whole girl being a bitch. i felt 4 sesshoumaru. maybe i'm biased but still....i get the whole curiosity thing (kinda reminds me of the jack n elizabeth conversation in the pirates of the carribbean movie) but at least don't lead the guy on. i would think one would think twice about leading on a trained killing machine! well, i'm enjoying the story n i'm hoping that the next update won't b 2 long. speaking of updating when r u gonna update torment of rapture? don't wanna sound like a bitch but just wondering what's up w/the fic? take care! ^_^

Awww Sesshoumaru is so cute when he's confused. I love it when he thinks about how pissed Kagome is going to be when something happens. It's so kawaii.

I love your story "Temporal Sequence". I noticed it also had 15 chapters and I am not really sure if it's finished or not. If it is, awesome story. If it's not, please update soon!

Forgot to say, I think Sesshoumaru's color in Kagome's life is orange: a bit of golden and a bit of red. Golden like the sun cause he can be warm or hurt the eyes when you look at him directly, and his presence shines over everything, even though you sometimes forget he's there. Red because he's starting to trigger deep emotions and passion in Kagome. Yep, he should be orange... like when the sun rises, powerful, imposing his presence over everything that all other things by force are pushed aside... the sun rising, bringing light and warm to the world and Kagome's life once the cold night (the heart-break over Inuyasha) is over.

I reviewed on mediaminer and I'm here reviewing again so that you update again ASAP! I really adore this story and your version of Sesshoumaru's past and all about his uncle Kazuma, his strained relationship with his mother, Hitomi, and the reasons he's the way he is with Inuyasha... You have to continue soon, please! ^_^

You are an inspiration to all and a model to all aspiring writers. Your style and plot line are unique and thorough and your manipulation of the language envy-worthy. This story is beautiful and touching and so real. I look foward to more.

In love with your fic so much. You're inspiring, so very very inspiring, i wish i had half your talent. Anyways amazing story, one of the best that's out. I recommend all s/k lovers to read it. It's so unique and there are not enough words in the dictionary to describle it. Please update. Somehow when i thought of Sesshoumaru's colour i thought of purple lol i dont know why. Well lets see what it is hopefully.

I just 'found' your story the other day and don't know how I could have missed it. It's just wonderful and you have such a way with words. I enjoy your telling of Sesshoumaru's past. It's different from others I have read and has incredible depth. I was deeply touched while reading Kagome and Inuyasha's confessions at the well. You handled it with taste and delicacy. I'm guessing that Sesshoumaru is silver, but only because that's how I see him in this story. I'm eager to read more. Thank you.

I love the story! I hope to see the next chapter soon. It sounds like romance is starting to bloom between our two favorite characters. Please update soon!

The Hitomi story was thrilling. Your creativity is amazing. I couldn't get over how eloquent the color scene was! Man you got a head on your shoulders.

Thanks for the double update. One chapter at a time of this story just isn't enough.

BTW that was probably the best closing of Inu/Kag I've ever read. Kagome recalling Sesshoumaru's words was a really stunning approach on your part.

The story of Hitome was wonderfully done, and I loved Kagome's thought's on the 'bitch'. I also found the colors of Kagome's friends very interesting, as well as fitting. I'll have to think on Sesshomaru's color. Great job, as always!

A compelling story. Sesshomaru has always been an intriguing character, worthy of further study and development. I like the way this story is unfolding, learning about the influential events and personalities in his life. I especially appreciate the insight into his interactions with Inuyasha, and their underlying significance and motivation.

Please keep writing.

Your words are so beautiful you made me tear up. This story is so powerful. Thank you.

ACK! I'm addicted to this story!!! Please update soon! FINALLY someone made a background story for Sesshoumaru that stuck out! I mean, I have my own story like that, but it wasn't focused on his hatred for humans. I love it! And yes, Hitomi is a bitch. *Hisses like a cat with an invisible Kagome*

The sexual tension is very well done as was his memory of Hitomi. Such an interesting take you have of these characters. I've never been a fan of original characters, but you've changed my mind.

Colors? I say you're grey because of all that matter between your ears that you know how to use so darn well. The ending of this chapter was beautiful and will add even more to their blossoming relationship.

God I love this story.

I'm pausing my anticipation to say how much I appreciate the two-chapter update. It shows athoughtfulness to yur readers since a story of this depth and caliber can't be updated as frequently as some. Thank you.

By the way I'm jealous of your talent. The way your interwove Sesshoumaru's previous words and lines from the anime as Kagome made some realizations was quite clever. It had my heart racing and I can't help but wonder if you had planned that all along. If so, you're brilliant. If not, then you were born to write.

I LOVE this story. You have given these two characters depth and allowed us to look into their minds, hearts and their past, which truely allow us to understand what it was that made them the people they are today.

I look forward to your next update very much.

These chapters were really amazing and very thought-out. You so shocked me too! I never would have thought you'd take that route with Inuyasha but it was so appreciated! The metaphors and intertwining words of Sesshoumaru (and a few others like Kaede) and the profoundity behind the thoughts were so amazing to me.

The part with the colors at the end was my favorite part. It not only shows your talent as a writer but also serves as a great plot tool. It's no wonder she's feeling for him the was she does. You make this pair more believable than anybody.

Ok, I just finished chapter 2 and am starting chapter 3 now. Will probably have to end there for tonight, as I have to be at work at 8am... but I wanted to take a moment to convey to you how much I am enjoying your story. It's really refreshing to see someone use logic and reasoning in a story, to explain inner-motives and how they are relying on past memories to make current decisions in their life. The scene where Kagome has to go home to retrieve the supplies used to clean and bandage Sesshoumaru was really appreciated. In so many stories she has just "majicked" up what she needed out of her backpack and the surrounding area. But with the well so close it makes so much more sense that she would simply go home and get what she needed. I enjoy your entire style of writing, and for the life of me I don't know how I missed the story for so long. (But good for me in that there are already 15 chapters up that I can read straight through, barring sleep, work, and eating!) So, in conclusion, thank you . I look forward to reading the rest of your story.

That last bit with the colors was really beautiful. Very simple, but very profound. A brilliant piece of writing. Thank you. Sincerely.

that was a really good story. If you could, would you mind sending me an email next time you update? I read this story before but I couldn't keep track of when you updated. Thanks in advance!

OMG i loved that chapter one of my favorites. i totally understand why he hates humans so much and i love how you did that color thing that was so cool that gave personality to everyone and makes me think about what colors are in my life! update soon

that was very good i feel bad for Kagome that, that had to happen to her but i guess it had to happen sooner or later. Sesshy is so cute and nice at ow he treated her

Wow... There's some serious angst. But it's good angst, not bad angst, so it's okay. I like how you wove in the color associations at the end. I've played a game like that with my friends before. It's always interesting.

I started reading this at about noon, realized I hadn't eaten anything since breakfast around six, and proceeded to ignore my need for food so that I could finish reading this. I love how you write Sesshoumaru and Kagome both. You've got a great handle on their personalities. I really can't wait until the next chapter comes. Inu Yasha popping up out of virtually no where took me by surprise. For some reason, I can't accept that it's Inu Yasha either, and I don't know why.

u know...i laugh my ass off everytime i read those first few lines of the last chapter! lol i find it so hard 2 picture sesshoumaru talking about how moronic he is! i just can't picture it!! it just reminds me of a boy trying to deny that he can have feelings for a girl besides the whole 'girls are icky w/cooties'. lol anywayz, just letting u know that i'm thoroughly enjoying the story. it's nice 2 finally see some romantic inclinations starting 2 rear their heads although i don't really expect it 2 show up overnight. but i gotta admit, that it's nice that the romance aspect of the story is finally showing up. oh b4 i go, i gotta say that i never thought a guy debating on the nature of government and all 2 b sexy....or maybe it's just because it's sesshoumaru doing it? ^_- speaking of debating, sesshoumaru could so b the captain of a debate team of a school. he'd kick ass n have a female fan base! oh n i also like the character that visited sesshoumaru n his uncle. i think he's a hoot! i forgot his name! sorry!

This story is one of the best out there. Please update soon. I can't wait to read what goes down between Inuyasha and Kagome!

Your newest fan,
Sara

This story is a priceless diamond among all the glass that is this fandom.

Keep up the fantastic work and I'll be looking for an update. I think this is my new favorite story. Thanks for writing!

You are en extremely talented author. The plot, or lack thereof as you said, grabs my attention and your unbelievably deep characterizations hold it securely until I'm nothing but a gooey mess of emotions hanging on for dear life until I have more of this story to keep me grounded in reality.

This story is exceptional, a shining ray of light in the small, dark world of decent fanfiction, and I'm excited to read more.

Your story is beyond amazing. It made me cry, it made me laugh. It did everything a great story is supposed to do. Keep it up for I will surely be keeping tabs on this one :)
~J.C

You really need to try this professionally. I mean, your impressive use of the English language, combined with your delightful imagination, is truly a superb recipe for a best selling novel. I've so thoroughly enjoyed (and envied) your fluid, and enjoyable, structure of thoughts and images that I feel a new appreciation for fanfiction. Superb! (Okay, is that good enough for you? Two chapter's coming right up? hehe)

This is brilliant. One of the top stories out there, period.

I follow this story since about last fall and yeah it's slow. It is frustrating sometimes but hey...every GOOD story needs time to develop. I hate it when the characters fall in bed in the third chapter. If somebody wants to read stories like that I suggest they visit AFF. Not to mention that authors have life besides writing. So keep up the good work and don't worry about impatient readers. You're doing a great job.

This is one of the most beautifully written, emotionally stirring and intellectually developed stories I have ever read. You were born to write characters. So please, continue weaving your literary magic because I'm already entranced.

Wow. I felt the tingles too. Great work!

I think I'm in love you...

I have to say, although I have a feeling my assumptions of Kazuma's character are about to be blown out of the water, that I have a great respect for that demon. Even though the line between sinister and protective is 'rice-paper' thin, to quote Sesshoumaru, when describing Kazuma's actions, the demon is so damn *smart* that I humbly stand in awe of his complexity. It's very rare to see an OC so well fleshed out. This chapter...well, this chapter is a clear example of why you're one of the best SxK fanfic writers in the known universe. Regardless of the previous chapter's mixed reviews, there is no way anyone could miss how pivotal this chapter is. It was a milestone in terms of what we discover concerning Sesshoumaru, both in his life and what he *thinks* of his life - how he realizes its importance - and also the deepening of his relationship to Kagome. I don't even mean in the romantic sense. To be perfectly honest, I could see this fic never touching on romance and it would still impact me because of its tender handling of each character's individual emotions, both toward themselves and toward each other. To me, the interaction in this chapter personifies why SxK as a couple has such amazing potential. Compassion just simmers below the surface, understandings are waiting to pop, two ends of a string - so different yet both so frayed - just wait to be tied together. This pairing is just so *rich*. Ahh...oh, C & S...I pretty much adore this story, and in particular this chapter. You've certainly outdone yourself this time. Amazing work.

Oh it was sooo good. I hope next time he can wry some information out of her.

i absolutely adored it. w/ all the fanfiction out there starting to sound the same i love the poetic twist you added upon this story.

Of all the chapters of this story, chapter ten is my favorite. I love the way the past and the present intertwine in this one. And I also love how slow you're taking it. Not to mention the fact that there's a definite tension to the relationship, so much so that you're not quite sure that they'll end up together when all is said and done. Unpredictibility is the key word when writing good romance! Keep it up!

He he. I wonder what he'll do about he's discovery.
Good chater as always.

Hey girl! The last two chapters were great. Sesshomaru knows she is from the future! Oh she's gonna get it now. He is too curious to let that lsip by without further investigation. haha! Looking forward to more~

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