Like hot damn.

That was very hot! Angsty, but kinky.

Please excuse my spelling mistakes on my review. It's late and I'm half awake.

Nice writing. The lemon part was amazing but the wtory feels incomplete like certain importmant aspic of the plot is missing. I would like to see this as a chapter story with more of a backstory during the battle and the thing where Kagome is lifted off the ground and thrown back with the explosion, what was that all about? a description of what Kagome looks like now and why a half ddemon and not a full demon. And what happenned to the jerwerl? Anyway a good writing job.

you have to make this into a chapter story! I love this it is so amazing!!

uum no. The writing was good the story not. Sesshoumaru turns Kagome into a half demon and mates her and she's just okay with all that? This is pretty much just a smut story. Granted nothing wrong with smut stories I do like them, but there needs to be a little more sense to it. He starts giving her 'treatment' which turns into a screwing session...hmm could have been done differently. It started out good with Kagome wondering why the hell she was naked and being conscious over the fact that the taiyoukai was equally naked, but then she was just fine with everything else even grasping certain parts of him. Well I'm out. Not my kind of story