next chapter please
Awesome story! And I loved the first chLter. Can't wait what you'll have in store for us next chapter!
Interesting! I hope to see more soon ^^
I really enjoyed reading this fanfic and can't wait for the update.
What a delicious chapter! I'm enjoying the air of mystery of it all. The way he hushes her is thrilling ... oh my ... I think I need a cold shower. Goodness gracious. It is the subtly of his perusing of her that is exquisitely enticing. I love this!
Oh my...this is sexy as hell. I love the way Sesshomaru playfully teases Kagome in this.
PLEASE update?
I don't know why but this chapter seems somehow a little bit sad . I can feel Kagome's resignation and sadness as she ignores Inuyasha. Bit there is also a bot of melancholy in her behaviour, like she mourns her lost affection for him. Anyway, it was a nice chapter and I like that you are moving the story slowly .
Don't Give Up onyourself Kagome.
Og yes, an update!! The story gets closer and closer to something big happening!! I like how you slowly distance Kagome from the group and make her feel alone - she is ready for prince charming now :-)
I look forward to next chapter!
Promising. Very promising. Keep going. I'm curious to see where this will go.
That was Awsome.
I really like where this is heading. That image of feral Sesshy, mmmhm who could resist that? I also love how Kagome plays it out in the end, that's right girl. That hanyou can go suck it, you get your eyes on a much superior prize now ;) I really like you writing style and hope to read more soon! <3
i want more!!
Caught my attention ;)
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
didnt sign in... but how intriguing....very interested...and HOT!
cant wait to see the progression of this story
Noooooooo! You just captured my attention but now I must know what happens next?! Why was Sesshomaru in the forest in the first place. Great beginning. I like how you describe Kagome's feelings so far. How she questions herself for loving someone who is unable to respond to her in the same way. Of course I am rooting for Sesshomaru though. Please, please update soon.
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