Interesting story, mysterious thing they are, they have wings?. Just an advice, consult a beta so your writing improve and also you keep reminding us time after time that Kags is not upset, ok I get it so you dont have to keep reminding us over and over that Kags is not in love with Inu anymore, dont rush the story.
Hope you keep going. See you next chapter :D
Great story, keep it coming. Happy Valentine's Day!
Interesting do far. Please update soon
melissa (Chapter 2) - Fri 06 Mar 2015
I love what you have done so far. I can't wait until the next chapter and what Kagome is and who that man is.
This sounds like it's going to be a good story. I can't wait to see how it plays out!
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