Love it update soon.
Great story , intense events for Kagome . I'm assuming that the salamander was in his true animalistic form due to the effects of the fertility festival ( crossing fingers) but somehow the effects from the fertility period and with Naraku iinvolvement ...everything went berserk for the Yokais.Poor Kagome ,I want to see how everything will turn out. Thanks for sharing
What would the baby look like? Is it a hanyou salamander? I can't picture it, yet.
Anonymous (Chapter 10) - Sun 26 Apr 2015
BEASTIALITY.
Guest (Chapter 10) - Sun 26 Apr 2015
I hope she or someone else terminates the pregnancy as well, keep it comin and i appreciate the update to the chapter.
kalaadaephon (Chapter 10) - Sun 26 Apr 2015
Loved it, hooked to it... Do please continue at the earliest.
Mona (Chapter 10) - Sun 26 Apr 2015
Thanks for the edit.
D (Chapter 10) - Sun 26 Apr 2015
thanks for editing chapter 10, but my fears were made known. Kagome H. was raped by an amphibian, that didn't have a human form so she was raped by a beast/animal, SMH. I hope someone shows some compassion for her and she shows some emotions to losing her virginity in a disgusting way, by an animal in the public no less. I'm mean no malice but I hope she or someone terminates the pregnancy.
D (Chapter 10) - Sun 26 Apr 2015
um yea, I'm totally confused on this pregnancy part, did the salamander rape her (penetrated her sex wothout her knowing) or did it in plaint eggs in her womb by piercing her stomach? Please clarify because it seems like I'm not the only one confused here. Because whatever the correct answer is will be a major change to the story. If she was raped that means she lost her virtue (virginity) to a salamander, and man would that be thoroughly fucked up.
Guest (Chapter 10) - Sun 26 Apr 2015
Um wow... When you said 'its hind legs buried deep into her abdomen', at first I thought it pierced through her abdomen (stomach) and then upon reading it again I take it the feeling of something piercing through her abdomen was actually an internal feeling. So my only conclusion is that she was raped by a salamander and did not know it pierced her sex, losing her virtue, which was the pain she felt. Please correct me if I am wrong, this is just my assumption.
Saiya (Chapter 10) - Sun 26 Apr 2015
Heheheheh can't Wait to see What Sesshomaru has in mind for Kagome.
candy (Chapter 10) - Sun 26 Apr 2015
I want to read more that was great can't wait for the up date
barb (Chapter 9) - Sat 25 Apr 2015
I agree... i have a lot of questions about the pregnancy thing too and look how well kagome
Is taking it... i will definitely continue reading to find the answers to these questions!
Lorena (Chapter 9) - Fri 24 Apr 2015
Interesting story...It's mysterious and dramatic! I love the way it's unfolding, despite the fact that I hate when anything too scandalous happens to Kagome, but the plot seems rich in depth.
hello,
I really like this story...I am sorry for not reviewing until now...
hmmmmmm...I wonder if she was raped or impregnated at the time of the attack...i do like sesshomaru's reaction though...
keep it coming...
:)
Pamela (Chapter 9) - Wed 22 Apr 2015
Hope you update this story your description and characterization of the characters is right on and this is incredibly interesting. I certainly hope you finish this:)
That was a really interesting turn of events. Loving this story. Thanks so much for updating.
@_@ Pregnant? I'm confused.....how could she be pregnant? Not only that, but Koga said she'd been in heat and the only reason he didn't do anything was because he was mated. Wouldn't that prove to be problematic? and does Kagome KNOW she's pregnant?
Leticia (Chapter 9) - Sun 19 Apr 2015
So she's pregnant with a salamander baby??? Im a bit confused now, hope you could explain it in the next chapter
Saiya (Chapter 9) - Sun 19 Apr 2015
SHES PREGNANT I DIDN"T EVEN REALIZE IT. Like DAMN. Wow thats Scary. Oh Geez Poor Kagome. Salamander Babys. That's a Scary way to get pregnant. It's like here let me stap your tummy and Bing you have babys.
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