I like where this is going, but seeing as this was at the back of the collection I imagine you haven't touched this in ages hah.

this was great it shows that there is more than an outward appearence and that we should not judge a book by its cover

I hate u....pls continue this.

Well written and interesting.

lI am without words.

That was a beautiful, albeit short, fic.

But perhaps that is part of what makes it so good. That you could speak volumes about the characters and universe with so few words.

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I love this! Your writing style is very wonderful! Whar you conveyed here was so interesting, even enthralling! Wonderful job!

Wow--this is one of the best fics I've ever read! I've read it--honestly--four times in a row! Great details. I like the inner strugles within Kagome's character--very realistic. Def. one of my favorites!!!