Ah, I remember this from the GMDD and am so pleased to be able to read it in its entirety.  I'm looking forward to seeing how things progress in their... ahem... relationship.  I like a positively dominant Sesshomaru and the not-entirely-submissive Kagome.  I think if she gave in too easily, he'd lose interest.

It was unique the way you used the prompts into your story. There were, however, a few spelling errors that just need to be brushed up on. Perhaps going iver the chapters quickly would be helpful? Either way, continue to write and I hope you find enjoyment in doing so.