Anonymous (Chapter 2) - Tue 08 Jul 2014

I love a descriptive writer but there is a such thing as being too descriptive. Otherwise I like your story so far. Hope you update soon.


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 2) - Mon 07 Jul 2014

Sailor Moon new anime has already premiered Saturday, If you missed it you can watch it on youtube. Nice chapter, keep it coming.


Mia Jaybird (Chapter 2) - Mon 07 Jul 2014

I really like this. The whole fantasy/supernatural is my cup of tea with some zest.

However, the narrating of everthing is unnecessary and can make an amazing story seem, well not as good. It's like rambling, no one wants to hear it or read it like I am doing right now.

So, I like the story, the plot is orginal and I'm interested to see where this is all going...

**PS**

Props to you for already writing a book!


LoveAndFaith (Chapter 1) - Fri 04 Jul 2014

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming.


angel of darkness (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Jul 2014
it was good but you need to add to it so we all now how it ends

DropofaDime (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Jul 2014
The story has the makings of greatness and a very interesting plot line. I like the fact that you included various characters from some of the best fantasy/ supernatural books of this generation. However, I think the story would read a little easier if you spread out the character relations and introductions out a bit instead of trying to do it in one lump sum.

rose (Chapter 1) - Wed 02 Jul 2014

next chapter please


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