Wow. This chapter made me cry. You did such an excellent job writing it! I was so impressed! Great work!
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Melly (Chapter 14) - Sat 10 Apr 2010
I absolutely LOVE this story... please update sometime soon? (gives virtual cookies filled with awesomeness and inspiration and... chocolate?) Your writing is amazing, even if you say this one was like pulling teeth. Please please please continue this story soon! ^_^
Hesunohana (Chapter 14) - Thu 08 Apr 2010
still a great fiction ! I had begun to read it on FF.net and I continued here, on Dokuga. still so great !! I love this new turn of events. what will Sesshoumaru and Kagome do ? (suspens)
I'm looking forward your update.
RosieB where have you run off to? I hope you're muse comes back soon so you can update again! I'm going crazy waiting for another chappie to satisfy my curiosity! Keep up the great work!
jojo661538 (Chapter 14) - Mon 22 Mar 2010
wow this is a good story keep up the good work ^_^
Rawr! You're Back! -huggles-
I've missed your stories sooooooo muuuuchhh D':
Don't leave us again... I was starting to have withdrawal symptoms D:!
Rawrz (Chapter 14) - Sat 13 Feb 2010
I hope you know I'm ripping my hair out in anticipation.
Just making sure you're aware.
I've finally finished what you've written so far, and I have to say that I have thoroughly enjoyed it. The two of them have grown so close, and there's so much underspoken emotion between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. The underlying tension there is delicious, and I love how they both pretend it's not there. It can be frustrating at times, but I'm looking forward to seeing how you handle it! It should be excellent! Keep on writing, and I'll be awaiting the next chapter eagerly!
Was that a Buffy reference I detected? :)
I've been reading this whenever I have free time, and I have to say I love what's been happening. I'm currently on the Tortuga chapter. It's been absolutely excellent reading. I enjoy your style of writing, and I like the way you've written the character. Your entire premise is quite intriguing, and I'm excited to keep reading and see where you go with this. Very lovely writing again! Keep it up! :)
Elifina (Chapter 14) - Mon 01 Feb 2010
-Gets out pencil and paper and history book then sits in front of the comp-
I dont need to go to school anymore mommy! all i have to do is read this!
Its awesome!but of course you know this :3
Xero (Chapter 1) - Tue 26 Jan 2010
UPPPPPPPPPDDDDDDDAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
...Please? :3
stars (Chapter 14) - Tue 26 Jan 2010
please updata
This story has had me glued to my computer! I absolutely love it! Please update soon and I hope your muse comes back from vacation soon. :p Great job and can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
Lauren (Chapter 14) - Sun 24 Jan 2010
Oh my god! You updated! *throws confetti* I am so happy with your comeback and this chapter. I think twelve years is a good amount of time to sort out one's feelings and deal with any blockage/issues Kagome and Sesshomaru have. It is really nice to see them so... Well, on the road to being completely comfortable with one another again. They're making progress. Me thinks only good things can come from this.
The down side of breaks: I had a total brain fart and completely forgot about The Order. I was so caught up in Kagome's issues, what's-his-name and the last chapter's fight that I'd forgotten about anyone other than the six - four - immortals. I had to go back and reread the information (though it wasn't much) you'd given about them. My hate for them has doubled. Thank you.
Well, obviously, this was a fantastic chapter. Which is surprising really, if one considers the lack of fighting (foes with faces) and sex... Actually, I should be upset because more questions and an inoperable tumor of an issue has actually popped up rather than more easily fixed answers. Strange... Thank you for posting such a jewel though. ^^ I hope all's well on your side of the computer. Maybe life will be horribly boring for a few months and you can update again soon? *hopeful* Yes? Okay.
P.S.: WOW. Just wanted to give you kudos on your well-thought out plot. I love the imperialism idea. Genius. And it makes a frighteningly large amount of sense. Colonialism is a plot. And not for the religious white-washing shit we thought it was for. *paranoid* Are you a conspiracy theorist, by any chance?
~Animefreak242 aka Kawaii Girl
this story is mavulous really goooooood.
why are you putting kagome and sesshomaru at such a disadvantage.
it's like you don't want them to win. I want to see them win!!! what can i say, i like happy endings
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