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Farida FL (Chapter 55) - Sun 23 Feb 2014

It was an emotional roller coaster ride....enjoyed reading... Many thanks...


Amy (Chapter 17) - Sun 23 Feb 2014

She trusts him the most....Awwww! :) 

I look like a slow reader but it's just that I don't have that much free time and I love to analyze things my way before writing a comment....so...about this chapter..I feel like it's important the impression I'm getting. I mean, while reading this particular chapter I sort of grasped something about the pace you set for the whole story. It's bringing me back to when I was watching an anime and I would have waited for any single (even the smallest) detail - like, you know, a slight smile appearing, or shoulders getting closer...or two hands touching - those little things that would mean the world in terms of progession of a relationship and would be as much meaningful as a kiss. In short, the intimacy of their touching - increasing while the story is progressing - ties deeply with the inner turmoil of their feelings and seems to overcome the need for words. Even a talkative girl like Kagome chooses to convey her emotions through that warm and tight grasping of his hand. And he feels her. Going even beyond his comprehension he ends up feeling concerned about her. Hope that bad feeling won't be ...well, too bad. Fingers crossed. 

Enough of my ramblings now...LOL! :)


Amy (Chapter 16) - Sun 23 Feb 2014

"Although Sesshomaru kept his stoic expression, he felt a hand squeezing his heart."

And just like that he also realizes that he got to know her but indeed doesn't know much about her own life. So many steps ahead but a huge step back on the path of a possible romantic relationship. I get that Inuyasha is coming. 

What I am loving the most about this chapter is the bit about Kagome literally consuming Sesshy's thoughts. Plus I like really much knowing that Kouga seems to know very well his son. 

Thanks for the chapter. :)


Marie (Chapter 55) - Sun 23 Feb 2014

In this story I shed more than a few tears I am gratful for the ending you left, making me light at heart and appreciate all my blessings.  Well worded well written.  Thank you

 


hana sora (Chapter 55) - Sun 23 Feb 2014

oh dear. . i can't wait for your another story. . ! thanks for sharing such a beautiful story. . >_<


Starlyte (Chapter 55) - Sat 22 Feb 2014

I just finished reading this from start to finish and I absolutely loved it! ! The pace you set the story at was excellent, I loved how you had major points in the story i.e Naraku, Inuyasha,  but didn't dwell on these and drag them out unnecessary. Your writing style is amazing and I love how you made everything believable but still keeping Sesshomaru and Kagome true to character. Thank you for a wonderful and brilliant story! 


Amy (Chapter 15) - Sat 22 Feb 2014

And here's the beauty of feeling each other's emotional connection through their first phisical connection. Yes, she is worried about him and she wants desperately to believe him, he understands her worries and wants to comfort her. Then the phisical touching. A tender gesture which ends up with her finally relaxing and with him...well...Feeling. :)  Perfect.


Amy (Chapter 14) - Sat 22 Feb 2014

The plan was giving Sesshoumaru cold shoulders until his eventual apology? LOL...she couldn't even wait more than 3 days to snap at him. However he was so confused and bothered by her behaviour to the point of totally ignoring Narakus's threat and dismissing it as irrelevant stuff. That speaks out loud of Sesshoumaru's priorities and I absolutely adore that.

'Apologize?' Sesshomaru thought, he had never considered this is what was needed."

A year and a half of getting to know her, 3 days of indifference and still he's totally clueless about what she needs, and an apology is so not something he would ever do, though his apology comes nonetheless cause he realizes he cannot stand the thought of her avoiding him more. I absolutely love that. :)


Amy (Chapter 13) - Sat 22 Feb 2014

...and so Naraku enters the stage. I think I can already start getting worried about that. 

I love how Kags stood up for Sesshoumaru. She is indeed his loyal friend. I mean....snapping that way without caring about the possible consequences and maybe risk losing the contract? That is so Kagome and Kagome is the most loyal character in the InuyashaVerse so I think your portrayal of her is really fitting. 

I happened to like also Totosai's reaction. He seems a minor character so far but you managed to give him traits and personality. 

It looks like our Lord is allowing himself to show emotions when Kagome is involved and that is perfect. Teasing Kagome AND laughing at the end of the chapter? Priceless. 

 


Amy (Chapter 12) - Sat 22 Feb 2014

Friends! Love the build up!! :) ( Would never want to be in his secretary's place tbh..LOL! ) One more thing I really appreciate is the way the definition at the beginning of every chapter ties perfectly with the ending. It gives the feeling of kinda knowing what to expect but at the same time it's exciting to read ahead and see how you're going to get there. Hopefully what I'm saying makes sense..;). Anyway good job and keep it coming!!! 


AnimeLady04 (Chapter 55) - Sat 22 Feb 2014

I loved your story!
The angst, the drama, the love, the betrayl, the love, the heartache!!!!
Loved the plot too!


Mz Taisho Sama (Chapter 55) - Sat 22 Feb 2014
Im so glad I came across your story, it really had my attention from start to finish. Once I started reading I couldn't stop myself. I loved, loved, LOVED it!!! Truly amazing, definitely a favorite. Thank you for posting, and I'll definitely be looking forward to your new story!!! Btw, the finale was perfection!!! :-)

flamehime101 (Chapter 56) - Sat 22 Feb 2014

So beautiful!!! ,Your story was amazing, it really pulled at my heart strings :)


Maracuya-Chan (Chapter 55) - Sat 22 Feb 2014

That was so beautiful! It made me cry, you are a fantastic writer and did such a good job at portraying a man deeply and truly in love. It was an amazing story, beatifully written and can't wait to read more if your work!


Amy (Chapter 11) - Sat 22 Feb 2014

...so now he appreciates and respects her. And, more important, it looks like Kagome can read him like an open book. Can't wait to read how this will be progressing. :) 


Amy (Chapter 11) - Sat 22 Feb 2014

Hi there! I'm still reading. :) I love how you're showing our Lord slowly falling in love with our Kags. It's like I can see him growing to know her and gradually falling in love with her step by step. 


Amy (Chapter 10) - Sat 22 Feb 2014

Yes! I think Sesshy is in character! He looks his usual cold,arrogant,calculating self on the exterior but we know something inside him is changing thanks to you giving us his POV. I like your story! :)


consuelo marquez (Chapter 53) - Sat 22 Feb 2014

ahhhh!  you finally posted on dokuga!  im from fanfiction.net  my user name is the same  but with the dash/hyphen added.   ahhh! *spazzes out due to feels*  HOPE!  BABIES! ahh!


hana sora (Chapter 53) - Fri 21 Feb 2014

me too. . i hope so. . kyaaa. . update soon. .


Mz Taisho Sama (Chapter 53) - Fri 21 Feb 2014

Another amazing chaper, You never stop to amaze me!!!! Keep up the great work!!! ( and please update soon)


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