Hope for more updates 

Really like the story. Hope you update. 

Great chapter, a beta is someone who helps you with your stories, liking spelling and writing. Keep it coming.

Keep it coming.

Hi, 

Your story is very interesting...I like the plot. I would suggest though that you get a beta.

interesting. . . the plot is really intrique me indeed

Loving the story already, keep it coming.

Your story has something different to offer... do continue to write more...