Aaaaah! I'm so thrilled right now! I seriously can't stop smiling like an idiot! I just love Sesshomaru's mom so much, dunno why though. She just seems to be so badass! Elegant too of course, but damn that old granny might have more than a few tricks up her enormous kimono sleeve! XD
Also, gotta love Makoto. Such a sweet (and rich) guy! :D I wonder what happened to him since he has so "big debt" to be paid to his friend... Can't wait to read more!
I dunno if you've already seen this, but, oh well... :D https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fArbc9LSYG8
"I'll be taking my next chapter now!" ♥
Andrea (Chapter 15) - Mon 13 Oct 2014
Stupid sesshomaru, i hope you get beaten up by kagome, i hope she'll break free, and i hope each time you take her against her will she just stay quiet just like a doll . I hope she'll told you that you can take her body but never her heart and soul
Great fic , even when i keep getting upset i can't stop reading, you are a great writter
Andrea (Chapter 16) - Mon 13 Oct 2014
Make sesshomaru suffer for what he did, make his life a living hell, and please please realese kagome
I hope you continue your story and I hope it wasn't brought to an end just becuase of the critique below. I serisouly think the person is going overboard with the critique. I've been waiting forever for an update and I know people are busy but I just hope this story continues. You have me hanging on my seet waiting for more. This cliffhanger has me on the egde xD. I think Kagome's virginity is a precious asset. She didn't want it taken away by some unknown stranger that she doesn't even know or like. I really don't see how the sentence is OOC for Kagome. She is from the future but hey she treasures her virginity. Please continue with your story, I bet a lot of people are really waiting for more, so don't let the bad critiques stop you from continuing. I love this story and I feel like the Sesshoumaru in this story really cares for Kagome, but goes about doing things the wrong way.
Jess (Chapter 1) - Mon 14 Apr 2014
I really hope you decide to continue writing this story! Don't let anyone try to get you down about your writing, I love your story and I think you're a good writer! Pleassseeee Continuee :)
"This person was going to take away her most precious asset.".... Really? Her most precious asset is her virginity? Not her freedom, not her rights, not her intelligence, not her personality. But her virginity…
I'm sorry but that not only is OOC for Kagome, a woman from the future, to think like that; but the whole statement in itself is backwards. In the way you wrote it, it's as if the rape is only wrong because she doesn’t want her first time to be "this way". If it wasn't the first time, it would be fine then?
Look, fine if you want to use rape to make the story darker, regardless of being the most cliché of plot devices, but at least let us deal with it in a somewhat realistic way. Because otherwise it's not dark, it adds to nothing, except as explicit porn rape.
I apologize if it was harsh, but the subject is sensitive (to say the least) and we, writers and readers, should approach it carefully rather than flippantly. A warning to stay way if you don’t like it is not enough. Needless to say I won’t continue to read this. Still, I wish you good luck with your writings and ask you, politely, to think carefully when discussing these matters.
Cheers
smcandy (Chapter 16) - Sat 15 Mar 2014
Not too bad do hope the resistance with Kag to Sesshy keeps going for a while. I hope she’ll learned of the Sango and the others whereabouts and get together to meet with them again on and plan together to escape.
Good update have more to come next time.
Sincerely,
Authoress smcandy
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