Liked this story way back when and keeping my fingers crossed that you decide to finish it one day.
Hoping you're well..
Actually in the previous chapter for some reason two movies popped into my head. You probably seen them?
"The Canyon" -based off of a true story-
and
"The Grey" -not sure if this was based off of a true story-
Both left me like your story did. A bit shaken, with goose bumps over my arms and legs, and quite jumpy. -I have a good imagnation that sometimes makes storys real like. Though other times it's probably not a good idea to get into to much detials.... eh.. that last bit wasn't about your story. Sorry, I'm rambling. Anyway thank you for writing!
Oh... my gosh... -tries to blink and rubs arms- I can't believe you wrote this! Man you should write horror stories. You totally creeped me out. And I couldn't stop reading! Gah, it still gives me chills. -shivers- That seemed so real. And Sango.... I feel horrable for Miroku. The thing with Kikyo though, dang that was cold. Silly me... hope I don't have nightmares.
Were you going to call this "Completed" or leave it on "Incomplete?"
zandria (Chapter 1) - Mon 30 Jan 2012
this story is so amazing i can't wait for the next update :)
Darrakk (Chapter 7) - Mon 25 Apr 2011
WOW. Having been a big fan of you, I can't believe I have never read this before! Its sooo good! Can't wait to see this story play out, all the elements are just starting to show themselves, with a few hiding in the wings I suspect. Please update soon!
| oh wow it's actually like watching a horror movie! i love it! Demonlordlover, you are my favorite author ever! Can't wait for your next update!
attackedbyangrysocks (Chapter 1) - Mon 14 Jul 2008
| oooooo another story from the great demonlordlover. :D I hope you know you are a celebrity in my fanfiction world :D now on to the rest of the story!
attackedbyangrysocks (Chapter 3) - Mon 14 Jul 2008
| kagome's reaction to the spider had me literally laughing HARD. It reminds me of myself lol. And did half of Sesshoumaru's arm just fall off!? wow. 0.0
| Aww thanks for responding! I feel so special! :D That's so sad about Miroku - I wonder what Sango is going to do with herself now? I can't wait for the next installment, this story just keeps getting better and better! I wonder who the humans are that are coming towards Kagome and Sesshoumaru - what if they're just as bad as the beasts? :o
| Omg this story is amazing!! Cant wait for more!
| I normally really like horror. This one is especially horrible. The scene where Kikyou bashes in Inuyasha's head actually made me a little sick. Excellent job! The scene of Miroku's death was also great. In true horror fashion, you've killed off all the other guys, leaving the girls (and sess) to deal with the horror. Excellent!
| I should have read that last posted chapter before I wrote about Inuyasha's brain matter being all over the forest floor, huh? Anyway, this last chapter does show the 'inhumanity' that is Sesshoumaru (and I was waiting patiently on) but his sense of honor also shines as he look for the afore mentioned Inuyasha and promises to not maim and eat Kagome. I'm really interested in seeing where this story goes, especially with the killer!Kikyou and most-likely-mentally-handicaped-due-to-trauma!Inuyasha.
Thanks for writing for us.
| I was several chapters behind and finally got a chance to catch up on reading. The whole tent scene had me suffering Blair Witch flashbacks. And just getting scarier...the whole thing is marvelously put together, tension mounting, plot thickening. On pins and needles for what's to come.
L-desu (Chapter 7) - Wed 21 May 2008
| that's right Sess! take it like a man and bow down to Kags! bwahahahaha!! ahem. sorry, got carried away. i'm all excited to see what's next! =)
| This is the first horror story I have ever read...usually avoid them like the plague...but woman. you write..I read... You do not disappoint. You have me on tenterhooks with Kikyou's behaviour BRILLIANT...I am going to leave the entire Miroku thing alone for now...but will get back to that later lol...you have me. Now...what are you going to do with me...and Inuyasha...don't make me start hating Kikyou...cause I could do. A job exceptionally done. You have me tense, almost biting my nails...and wanting to lock you in a room so you can continue...don't worry will put food under the door so you can keep the brain going...MARVELOUS! Lots of leafy greens and protein...near raw...
| You certainly have a horror story going here. I'm afraid to know what horrible thing will happen next.
L-desu (Chapter 6) - Mon 19 May 2008
| oh man. i put off going to sleep just to finish reading. =P thank god for kags keeping her cool, and what a way to push kiks into emotional overload. not quite how i see her normally, but very interesting at the same time. can't wait to see what happens next!
| Oh my gosh, this is so amazing! It's such a horror story, that I usually am too scared to read from my vivid imagination, but this one is just amazing! I can't wait to read the next chapter and find out if Miroku had died, if Sesshoumaru's demon senses can help him and Kagome at all, and if Kikyo really did kill Inuyasha. Keep up the great work! :]
Kagome357 (Chapter 1) - Sat 17 May 2008
| I finally got all caught up! Oh my damn! You really went there with this one...I was shocked to see Kikyo wig out like that! I hope Inu isn't dead. Poor Miroku. I guess somebody had to die but great kami - you really had him check out. Brutal! I love horror writings and I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
snowbird (Chapter 6) - Fri 16 May 2008
| I have to admit my emotions are torn about this story. I want to love it and hate it at the same time. I just know that I have to know what happens next. I guess I have a morbid curiosity. I was shocked at Kikyo going psycho and killing Inuyasha. I really feel sorry for Sango. I think her grief is going to get her killed. I think Kikyo might just survive but be forever crazy. One thing - why did Sesshoumaru's poor arm have to taken. I do not like a one-armed Sesshoumaru! I hope it regenerates now that his powers are returning. He should be able to heal himself. Just so long as he gets it back. I don't care how. Please? What about Kigome's miko powers? By the way, do you know how to put stories from this site onto a fav list. I try and all I get is merely the site and no individual story. I tried the site owner and could not get through.
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