Please post your other stories to your FF.net account! They look so good, but I don't have an account! ;_;
By the way,I love your style. The way you began slow and teasing was great, and I could really feel Kagome's sorrow. It wasn't to dramatic weeping stuff some people write, and I loved that! You made her sorrow more realistic to me and things were subtle, not enormous changes in character, awareness, plot, etc. You wove this tale carefully and wonderfully so far, please continue! :D