This was a very awkward read to tell you the truth. For one thing, I encourage you to seek help from a beta, and I found most of Kagome's dialouge during the errotica to be awkward and painful to read. Although, I do enjoy a dominating Sesshomaru. He be a smexy man ;)
I really liked your story but there's one thing I'm a little confused about when she asks him for him help on an assignment he automatically says teachers and students can't fornicate on school grounds but why did he just assume she was talking about sex because she never said anything sexy or try to seduce him and they really did have an assignment due, I just can't see how he would basically say ok but we have to have sex at my place without thinking instead she really does need help
