Like how you wrote the aftermath and how everyone is still friends but have started their own lifes apart. OH... nifty bit involving Miroku and Kikyou healing.
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I like this version of the Miko afterlife and what was offered to Kagome... wonderful idea here.
Wicked... bloody wicked chapter... again you created a breathtaking battle and angst scene. Love how Naraku tricked everyone and whose name was on his lip at the end.
Interested to see how you bring Kagome back and if the monk is saved to.
Fantastic battle scene you wrote... flowed so smoothly and the details painted such a technicolor vista.
Love the cliff hanger ending!
Another great chapter... likehow the plans for the dragron fell though... very realsitic! Really like the reason behind Rin's visit and Sesshoumaru's thoughts on that and Kagome.
The lemon was very tastefully done, also bloody hot to... ;) I like the small tender moments that Naraku felt, to me those adds to his character depth.
Like how you wrote Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru confrontation... that was them to a "T". Love how Naraku is gaining her trust... bloody good work!
The false story about the Shikon was done wonderful. I like the talk between Kagome and Inuyasha, again they both were very in character and I enjoying a story that while being a Kagome/Sesshoumaru pairing doesn’t villainize Inuyasha.
I really like how you did Kagome's traing of her miko powers... nothing over the top and very believable/realistic. Again Naraku personality is dead on, wonderful work of showing him as a master manipulator.
Awesome chapter... first off like how Naraku tricking the Izanami also the trap he sprung on the gang was truly some he would think up. Fantastic writing the fight scene, really flowed smoothly and made it so easy to imagine.
Breat work with your OC Izanami and really like how Naraku got into her good graces... very much in character for him.
Awesome start and really love how your writing makes both the characters and the scenes very vivid and real.
Fantastic chapter. All I can say is that al least Sesshoumaru and Kagome have gotten a few things out of the way in their confusing relationship. I really cant wait to see what new characters they gang will meet. Thank you for this chapter and I hope you UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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Squee! Such a hot lime in the previous chapter. It looks like Inu needs to tell Sesshoumaru what Kagome has planned. Maybe Sesshoumaru could 'woo' her, show her what life could be like with him. You've got me on the edge of my seat, waiting to see what you intend to do about this little/big problem. ^_^ Thanks so much for putting the story back up and for continuing to post.
I hope she doesn't deside to leave, but either way, Sesshoumaru is not going to let her. I think she should just talk with him, which I guess they'll have a slight chance to do as they travel to the next key.
I'm glad Inuyasha is being a little more adult about the situation. I guess he just has to get his arguments out first, and then he thinks about things later. LOL
Anyway, really great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Yes! A new chapter! It's good. :) Can't wait for the next one. :)
A great chapter as usual! I cant believe that Kagome has decided to go back without telling Sesshoumaru her decision. Lets just hope that Sesshoumaru's argument(whatever it may be) will be enough to convince Kagome to stay. I mean they belong together dammit!!!
I really cant wait to see what adventures the gang will face once they enter the northern territories. Maybe they will meet other tai-youkais there. I guess we wont know until we keep reading these great chapters!
Thank you for another chapter and cant wait till the next one comes out! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
I love new chapters, expecially for this story. I see many twist and turns for this story and can't wait to see what you have in store.
I've got to follow you all the way to Dokuga so I can get my fix...so be it.
Loved it - I'm sure Yasha is chewing himself up looking at the mini-Kags and wishing for what could never be, while Kags & Sess seem to be moving right along.
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