Keep it coming.

Once I read your first paragraph, I was instantly hooked. I can't wait to read more! :)

I think this will be an interesting turn. Can't wait to read more. :D

Omg! I love it already! You have a nice style and you definitely seem to have good comedic timing. Poor poor Sess...o who could ever help him with this issue? ;-)

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy New Year!